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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
a big thanks for all those who have liked my update😳

and also thanks for such lovely comments, it was fun and encouraging reading that many people are liking what i wrote.
and here's part B, a big surprise for everyone in it. Read it and let me know your views😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 22-Part B

They both returned back to the beach house, and it was almost time for dinner, Arjun guided Riya to one guest room and asked to get ready.

"Your clothes are in this room. I'll be waiting for you outside. You can take as long as you want Riya," Arjun said and left her alone. Riya first went to take a shower, and then came back to wear the saree Arjun has gifted her.

While she was wearing the saree, she checked herself in the mirror. This saree was giving a certain glow to her whole appearance, and in this blood red saree she also looked like a "femme fatale". Arjun certainly had very good taste, but she was a bit self-conscious. She turned to look at her back, and winced a bit when she saw that her back was completely bare except a single dori. She was feeling very embarrassed going in front of Arjun wearing this, but she could hardly stay locked in this room. Finally she gathered all her courage and went out. She was shocked on seeing Arjun dressed in a two-piece black suit. He was looking so handsome, that she was completely lost in him. Arjun also was feeling the same thing for Riya. Riya looked so beautiful and sensuous in that red saree, he now realised that he really shouldn't have selected such a saree and the blouse definitely not for her. This saree was a bold one, and right now he only wanted to kiss her senseless and more. This saree was going to prove very hard on his mental strength.

Arjun walked towards Riya slowly, while Riya started to take backwards steps till her back touched the wall. She could feel the coldness on the wall on her back, and she leant there because Arjun had bridged the gap between them and was imprisoning her by putting his hands on both sides of her.

He leant closer to her slowly and tried to kiss her, but Riya moved her head slightly so that the kiss landed on her cheek. But Arjun wasn't going to accept defeat, he started to give her light kisses on her cheek, her eyes, her nose and her ears. When he was sure Riya was completely lost, he advanced to finally get his kiss. But Riya this time put her hand on his mouth and said no shyly.

Arjun kissed her hand and removed it from his lips, and said, "Mujhe itna tarpa kyun rahe ho?"

"Abhi nahin," Riya said shyly. Arjun was again too lost in her innocence, and he didnt believe in taking something when Riya herself wasn't ready, so he didn't force her for the kiss.

Both were completely lost in each other for a long time, when suddenly Arjun's stomach grumbled, reminding them that it was time for diner.

"I think it's time to eat," Arjun said a bit embarrassed.

He took her to a candlelight table where the dinner had already been arranged. There were red roses almost everywhere on the floor, on the table, in every corner of the room. The whole room had a soothing scent. And the lights were dimmed so that the candle was giving off most of the light. Arjun again made Riya take her seat before taking his.

They both had an exquisite dinner, talking about them and the family at times. Arjun told Riya a few jokes and made her laugh a lot. He also tried a lot of romantic talks making Riya blush a lot of times. Finally dinner was over, and it was time for them to leave this idyllic place and return back home. Neither wanted to return back, but they didnt have much choice. Just as they were leaving, someone knocked on the door. Arjun left Riya to go and open the door. He returned back within a few minutes with a frown.

Riya went towards him to ask him what had happened.

"Remember when we came here there were heavy rainfall, well the roads have been closed due to landslides in a few places. We won't be able to return back tonight," Arjun replied and went to stand close to her, took her hands in his, "I'm sorry, believe me i didnt know that this would happen!" He was a bit afraid that Riya would take him wrongly. He didnt know what would be going in Riya's mind when she'd learn of this, and that they will have to stay here tonight alone.

Riya squeezed Arjun's hands lightly, and cupped Arjun's face to make her look in her eyes, "Shsssh, it's ok. I know that you didnt do anything on purpose. Anyway i also didnt wanna go from here," and gave him a sweet smile. But suddenly the smile vanished from her face. This time it was Arjun's turn to be worried and he cupped her face and asked her, "Kya huwa?"

"Arjun hum parivaar se kya kahein ge?" Riya said all of a sudden.

"Bas itni si baat! Dont worry i'll call them and inform them about this," Arjun said, gave her peck on her forehead and left her to make the call. While waiting for Arjun, Riya went to stand near the terrace, when it started to rain. Riya went out without realising and started to sway and dance in the rain. She had always loved getting drenched in the rain. She didnt know that Arjun had returned since long and that he was admiring her in the rain. He didnt know when his legs started to take him towards her, and soon he was standing in front of her looking in her eyes. He grabbed her gently and pulled her towards him. He no longer had any control on himself.

Roop Tera Mastana Pyar Mera diwana
Roop Tera Mastana Pyar Mera diwana
Bhool Koi Hamse Na Hojaye
Roop Tera Mastana Pyar Mera Diwana
Bhool Koi Hamse Na Hojaye

He started to nibble on her ears while holding her close to him. And Riya also wasn't stopping him at all. She also had forgotten everything, and was living only the present moment. With each touch and kiss, it felt as if he taking possession of her, total and absolute possession of her mind and her heart and even her body.

"Riya," he whispered, as if he were savouring the very sound of her name. His head moved nearer. Her eyes closed and she felt his warm breath at her forehead, her nose, the open softness of her mouth. Unaware of her response, she opened her mouth to invite his, tilted her head back to give him full access. And waited, breathing in his scent as his mouth came closer, and finally he started to kiss her.

Raat Nasheeli Mast Sama Hai
Aaj Nashe Mein Sara Jahan Hai
Raat Nasheeli Mast Sama Hai
Aaj Nashe Mein Sara Jahan Hai
Haan Ye Sharabi Mausam Behkaye
Roop Tera Mastana Pyar Mera Diwana
Bhool Koi Hamse Na Hojaye

She stiffened, moved when she felt his hand on her bare back. Her eyes opened, her breath quickened, and she pushed him slightly. And both looked in each other eyes.

Ankhon Se Ankhen Milti Hai Aise
Bechain Hoke Toofan Mein Jaise
Ankhon Se Ankhen Milti Hai Aise
Bechain Hoke Toofan Mein Jaise
Mauj Koi Saahil Se Takraaye
Roop Tera Mastana Pyar Mera Diwana
Bhool Koi Hamse Na Hojaye

"We must go inside," Riya reminded him shyly, "we are already drenched."

"Yes," he murmured, smiling faintly. "Later. I want another kiss my love."

Her heart was beating so wildly that she could barely breathe at all. His head bent and she waited for his mouth, no protest left in her, only a sense of anticipation. His lips were warm and hard and exquisitely tender. She closed her eyes with a soft sigh and let him do what he wanted.

Rok Raha Hai Ham Ko Zamana
Door Hi Rehena Paas Na Aana
Rok Raha Hai Ham Ko Zamana
Door Hi Rehena Paas Na Aana
Kaise Magar Koi Dil Ko Samjhaaye
Roop Tera Mastana Pyar Mera Diwana
Bhool Koi Hamse Na Hojaye

After a kissing each other for a long time, he lifted her gently in his arms and looked down into her hungry eyes while his own blazed with flames. He carried her inside and laid her gently on the bed.

Precap:

The phone had been ringing loudly. Arjun opened his eyes and looked at the time, "It's only 6 a.m, who is disturbing us at this time!" he grumbled. He answered the call and all his sleep was lost when he heard Rathore shouting in the phone.

"Arjun, Shaina hasn't returned since last night, and her phone is no longer reachable and it's switched off. She said she was going for shopping and never returned back!"


so how was it?

acha ya bura😳?

do let me know😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
aree kahi vag nahi gayy thi res kar ke actualyy tv on marke dekh rahithi ke kahi wo ccl ka show khatam ho jaye n thora sa hi sahi khuch to arjun ka dikhade ...bt nthng hppns😡

1st of all thnx 4 da tmng of da updatng...arjun ka air na hone ka dard is hottt rmntc updt se kafi had tak samala mjhe ...actualyy im fllng vryy sad n jab ye parna suru kia to sirf blush karne lag gayy☺️

hayyeee kya part hayy mainto firse blush hi kate rhe gayy...
riya ko courg gthr karna para bahar arjun ke samne ane ke liye😳😳
n arjun vi usse dekh kar hi samaj gaya ke atlst riya ke liye usse ye drss select nahi karni chie thi☺️☺️☺️
arjun bridg da gap betwn dem n im strtng ☺️☺️☺️
uske bd ka scn tooo...im gng 2 say nthng tum khu hi samajh lo wht i feel
bt riya ne age badne se rok diya 😭😆...kitni tarpa rahi hay bechare mere hotty ko😭😳😳

arjun decor da room soo butifullyyy wid roses...soothng scent...candl l8 ...ufff drmyyy

yahooo roads closd 🥳😈 my naghty mind is sooo happyy rdng ds line😉

fir aya rain sqenc ...dono drnchd vi ho gaye n finalyyy arjun ko uski kiss vi mil gayyy wo vi 2 times☺️
now dono andar ja rahe hayy ...wooo ab kya hoga😈

precap par tnsd ho gayy ab ye shaina kaha gayy...rathor vi tnsd ...lgta hay ab inki stry vi full flgd hogi😃


Edited by naughtykittyyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
kitna tadpaya..

Ek kiss keemat tum kya jaano Arjun babu...😆😆😆

It was so romantic...
First the almost kiss...I thought Oh God why did Riya topped him...

ek toh sari and then she got drenched in Rain..
It would be really hard for Arjun to control😳😳

Finally Ria ne himmat dikhayi and she allowed him kiss...

i am dead with such a romantic update...

Bed pe sula diya...and update khatam...😭😭

aww..
precap bhi toda scary lag rahi...😭

No more fights between Ariya...
Edited by prava55663 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ufff its all bez of u...!!!
bhala ehsa koe kerta haii...!!
khud he etna romentic update dogi...!!!
or phir kehati ho kahan bhag gaye...!!
yr khud ko comose ketne main time to lagta haii...!!
so finalyyy socha commet ker he duin...!!!
realy ruhi plz bolo na tumne phd ke haiii...!!
yr realyy realyyy supub supubbb ...!!!..
hunmm main to abhi bhi bush ker ragi ho...!!
yr tunne mujhe apne dusare ff ke yad diya diii The devil gold yr bahot jald he khatm ker diya...!!
hummm..are abhi bhi main es update per comment nahi ker paa rahi huin...!!!
siooo romentic ruhi..!!
the way she hegitate to go outside the room after wearing sari n both admiring eachother..!!
n after that..arjun try to kiss her..!!n she stop him..!!
after that the sweet n romentic dinner...!!
n than romance in rain...!!
ab kya jaan lene ka erada hai..!! abhi bhi sare scence mare mind main chal rahe hai..!!!..hii naughiii..
n after arjun call..sorry sare raste band haiii...!!
uff together ...!!
plzzz ruhi update soon...man to tha next part tak res he rakhun...may be tak tak normal ho jatiii...!!
lvly lvlyyy ...a biggg huggg for uuu dr ...
ab bol bhi do ruhi ...tumne sach mai phd ke hai lv mai ...plzzz update soon...varna next update main..esase double lamba comment karungiii ...!!!!



Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
..kitna romantic update tha!!!
i was blushing the whole time!!!
loved it!☺️☺️😉😉
Roop Tera is one of my favorite songs, and it was the icing on the cake😛😛
waiting 4 next update..
THANX 4 PM😛

Edited by sdhg - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
four people commented, but they only wrote "res"
Kya huwa, all have fainted or what😆?
or itna bura tha ki bhaag gaye😕😭
Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
wow...kitna romantic update tha!!!
i was blushing the whole time!!!
loved it!☺️☺️
precap...awww...rathod is finally worried about Shaina!
i hope she is fine!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Fainted 👏

superb !!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
superb update...!!!!
loved it...!!!
wow riya in blackless red saree n arjun in 2 piece..!!!!☺️
dinner ws vry romantic..!!!
awww ariya alone in house...!!😉
that kiss in the rain ws jst soo hot..!!!☺️
arjun took her in his arms in bedroom
m to dead..!!!!😉😆
precap is interesting..!!!
rathore worried for shaina wow..!!!
cant wait fr d nxt part..!!!
continue soon..!!!

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