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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
To all *Kaan pakaad ke sorry*😳

Absconded IF due to examsss but yes little active for last 2 weeks giving Os for COTW!! 😆

Hope u all read them!😉

Now back into action, will give updates every alternate day for LVE n Jab We Met! Will be starting a new FF - concept is abt Court Trail n Medical Negligence by Dr.MK how his case unfolds n how guilty he is proved n so on.😭... hope u ppl will suppor t me once again into this new FF!! Would love to see u all there too!

PM's will be only on weekends after 4 updates combined :P add FFpmLIST if u want pm's 😳


N guys me starting new FF...


plzzz do read n gimme ur feedback.. its a differnt concept! n i hope u ppl will encourage me :)))


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PART 33

Geet was super excited when she reached the hospital with Maan, ful time holding hands in hands 😳!! It was a splendid moment to step into her mother's lap n crawl around her😆, She missed her mommy too much😭' In fact it was the first night wen she had stayed away from mom.. Rano kissed her on cheeks n took baby Pari n showed her.. Geet gave a big smile n almost started licking Pari out of joy😆, Pari who was know sleeping was wide awake to some new sensations n started smiling😆. Geet was very happy n almost snatching Pari from Rano wen Mohinder came n took off Pari. Geet beta she is so small u r not supposed to touch her u may harm her see how small pari is😡' Geet understood nodded silently n went over to sit by Ani n Maan'😭

Hours passed by n the three kids keep fidgeting n talking 😳, neither Ani nor Maan were allowed to carry Pari but each of them got a chance to play with her for some time🥱, The elders of the house were at constant vigil over Pari'The other kids were almost neglected n during lunch time Beena took them back home convincing they would be back the next day😡, Geet went over to kiss Rano but she was asleep n Beena n Nanaji prevented her from doing so saying Rano needed rest, her face fell n she went to kiss the baby but Mohinder came n told her not to disturb the baby😭. All of them behaved differently with Geet or that is what she thought so, it was just that they were trying to be protective .😆

Geet went home n was in foul mood, Beena fed her n then she went n locked herself in her room😳 , Maan went running behind Geet before she could lock up, she was wailing loudly making her pillows wet🤢, his heart teared apart seeing his Princess crying n the worse was he didn't know why she was crying n couldn't even say anything cos she never bothered to listen..💔

CHUP GEET BILKUL CHUP!!! Do u get tat he said finally after minutes roaring n freightening her making her silent at the very instant. She started sobbing now, he almost made her rest oh her lap😡, n caressing her hairs😳, Gee t wat happened Maa ne kuch bola kya😡.. she nodded for a no while still sobbing ' then wat happened y is my princess crying😳'. She took up her head n started crying😭, oh god she was no where to stop, he made her sit up n wiped her tears.☺️

She spoke out finally after multitudes of cajoling, Maan no body loves me😭, everyone loves only Pari🤢, u saw the wasy Papa was holding her he didn't even let me touch her😡. N Mama too never kissed me while coming, every one just loves her no one is bothered about me😡, she slmost broke her sentence in mid way n cried for very long😡. Maan didn't know how to stop her , well he really didn't understand how to explain her, Pari was so small n everyone needed to take care of her, Geet was grown up n could manage byherself, but how will he make her understand, probably the way with pamperings she was bought up she couldn't see her love being divided or she couldn't see someone getting the love care n affection her insecurities building up 😲,n Maan knew She had to understand it now , before she starts imagining baseless things!!😭

He let her cry till she became tired n wen her sob were weaker he spoke😳, Geet n she immediately sat upright, Y do u think no one loves u😡!!! I love u sweetheart☺️!! See even in the hospital wen everyone were with Pari I was with u playing with u☺️! Its that Pari is so small, she cant sit or talk or walk byherself, so she needs ppl around, but u big ' ucan doo all that by urself na 😳!!! N mind u everyone loves by baby Geet the way I love u so much🤗' He extended his hands wide to show her how much🤗' She smiled back n haan Geet no crying😳!!! Baby Pari needs care n attention ok so grow up n act mature!!!😉

Gosh'.., wat a revelation at such a tiny age!!!

PRECAP :

AM thinking may be the beginning of the Love!!!! Real Walla Love!!! Cos they both r growing!!!! Now tat u ppl haev seen the innocent love, i'll write the matured love n after tat...





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Edited by ainaGURTI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

haaye me first!!!!!!!!!!

lovely update

but tell me one thing inn dono ki age kya hai??

coz d way maan talk seems some 10-12yr child is talking😆😆

poor geet ko kisi ka bhi attention nhi mil rha

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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Too good, thank god maan explained geet.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
nice update dear
thank god maan explained everything to geet
waiting for more updates
plz update regularly dear
missing ur updates
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
hayyye kiddo maaneet ka romance ... *blushing*

Uff this Maan is so intelligent ... Kaise ?
Lol

Mature wala love ?????
Sachiii ??
Moi waitingg
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
omg geet she was so insecure bt jab maan ne samjhaya toh sab samjh gayi wah ky pyaar hai
do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
gr8 parts..
cont.soon
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Dat ws cute.

Bt really need a leap nw

plz

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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
part 33
nice part...
Geet is feeling so down but Maan made her realize without hurting her...
cute ones...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
every elder child has to face this day and each and every one feels same way ! elders don't take notice of that sadness and insecurity until and unless they throw tantrums and poor things are solded for that too. loved the way maan handled geet... I love you sweet heart ...cute... and explained pari being small...waiting for their mature love...

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