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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asmaju



Am I getting any suprises???

I just love this suprise if so..


You might be :p

You read arhi, maan-geet, kr and ss.. and i think you might be :p
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: *Khushii*

bang on kriya's entry ka toh pata nai 😛


haha.. i went off to type parts.. i typed till part 30 today 😲



Agar aise shocks degi tho updates ke liye i'll force you...
I'm so happy ki those parts are typed..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: *Khushii*

You might be :p

You read arhi, maan-geet, kr and ss.. and i think you might be :p



Yup Maaan-geet I jsut started reading cause its your work..
I have not watched the shopw..

But rest I do...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asmaju

you are making it offlicial..
Kinju has done that on the thread!!


Official? kounsa thread??

Originally posted by: asmaju


Thats really sweet of you..

Hope you had your dinner..


*hides*
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Posted: 12 years ago
Abhi carefull rehene padega..Warna 100 mai boli lag jayegii...


My advance wishes for 100 pages...
I want to be first ion wishing you😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asmaju

Agar aise shocks degi tho updates ke liye i'll force you...
I'm so happy ki those parts are typed..


spamm error 😡


LMAO! They help me out when there's school on weekdays, and I can't type.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asmaju



Yup Maaan-geet I jsut started reading cause its your work..
I have not watched the shopw..

But rest I do...


That only you would do becaus eyou're just so sweet 🤗

LOL yes. Careful now..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Official IJD wala..

I know why is that hidding..Dhund ke pakad lungii tujhe...😉

This is &th post...So you do therest...

I wonrt risk...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asmaju

Official IJD wala..

I know why is that hidding..Dhund ke pakad lungii tujhe...😉


no no.. let me be hidden :p
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Posted: 12 years ago
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G u z a r i s h .

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*Most of the replies from page 77-85. Feel free to read them!


Part 26


I got it to come centered. It's still spaced out. Hope I can fix that soon too.


Vishakha was about to get her glass of water when her cell phone beeped. She read the message and beamed as bright as it was possible. She whispered to herself, "NO WAY!" but it was still loud enough for everyone to hear.

Neha asked, "What happened?"

Vishakha shook her head. "Nothing' uh' I need to go. I'll see you guys tomorrow."

"How will you go? I'll drop you." Rey offered.

"NO'" she replied quickly. Everyone stood there amazed. She continued, "I mean its okay' I'll manage. Thanks though." And before anyone could recover from her behavior, she sprinted out from the back door so as to not disturb Swayam and Sharon.

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"What are they talking about?" Sharon asked gulping once everyone was out of earshot.

"It is you," was all Swayam replied.

It took her a couple of seconds to grasp it. "What?!" she finally questioned.

"Sharon, don't misunderstand. If anyone, only you are the deserving one. Everyone knows how serious and tough this competition will be. From the college, it is just us who are the dancers. If anyone can fill in for Kriya when needed, it's only you. I know you are still a bit upset at what happened and that your team lost because of it. But think about it. More than the team, the college needs you. We have to win it and no one is more deserving than you for this position. We have all decided together. Only you can be our 6th dancer."

Sharon sighed. "I know but'"

"Please Sharon. Don't think that I'm doing you a favor or treating you special or anything because of what I feel for you. I hadn't even thought about it till it was brought it. You honestly deserve it. This is anything but my feelings for you. Even you know very well that I don't do favoritism. It is what it is."

"They're my team though. We win together or we loose together." Sharon answered, understanding that he had kept his feelings aside for her.

"And it is them who want to see this college win too. It is them who said you should be the one. We all agree. And above Dazzlers and Weaklings, aren't we all Loui'ians? Look at them," he motioned towards them in the kitchen while continuing; "There is no divide between them. We are all one team now. United, we stand; Divided, we fall. Right?"


She nodded. It seemed as if he had gotten to her. There was no doubt. Sharon, this is what you wanted. When he's asking, why are you having second thoughts then? Is it because' No, Sharon, you aren't a coward. You aren't going to back out because you'd have to spend time with him. Think about it, it'll help you think clearly. Then why!?"She finally blurted out,"No."

"Excuse me?" Swayam followed shocked.

"No' I can't do this. It's not fair to others."

"Others? What are you talking about Sharon?!" he asked, not getting her at all for the first time. He looked into her eyes to try and figure out what was going on inside of her. But he was simply met with a sparkle in her eyes. And then, she winked! She actually winked! He thought he was seeing things. So he pinched himself and found Sharon laughing at his innocence. And he knew she had actually winked! Oh God, predictable really is boring. He had no idea what was going on inside of her. How she was enjoying this dilemma on Swayam's face!

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Vishakha rushed straight to the beach. She was looking everywhere for one person only. On the other hand, Naina and Kriya reached the beach as well. "What are we doing here?" Naina asked for the 5th time.

"To meet someone." Kriya replied.

Naina rolled her eyes. "You're been saying that the last four times I've asked. Does this person not have a name?"

"She does." She replied with a smile as she spotted Vishakha. She gave her a call and Vish picked up. "Turn around." Kriya spoke and she did. With that, she saw Kriya. She ran towards her and took her in a tight hug, almost tripping Kriya over. Neither of their happiness knew any bound.

"You're here!" was all Vishakha managed to say, still not able to believe it.

"I'm here." Kriya replied to make her believe.

Once they parted, Vishakha held her by her shoulder and took a good look at her. "I'd thought I'd never be able to see you again. Oh, it feels so good!"

"Same for me. Nothing has changed." Kriya continued looking around. "Everyone still rushing like no tomorrow."

"Everything is just like you left it." Vishakha replied. Then her eyes set on Naina. "Is she?" she asked.

Kriya nodded. "Yup. That's Naina." Naina gave her a soft smile to which Vishakha replied with the same.

"Thank you." Vishakha said. Naina gave her a confused look. "When none of us could be there with her, you were. You have no idea how much it means to us."

"Hey, I'm her friend too. Just like you, I'd like to see her happy too." Naina replied.

Vishakha turned back to Kriya. "Why'd you call me here? Let's go. Others will be so thrilled to see you!" She pulled at Kriya's hand but Kriya resisted. She gave Kriya a confused look. Even Naina was confused. She had thought Kriya would be excited to meet others just like Vishakha had thought.

"You are here for good, right?" Vishakha voiced out her fears.

Kriya nodded. "I am. But before I meet them, I want to meet mom."

"Aunty knows you'll meet them Kriya. That is why she let you come back." Naina tried to explain to her.

"I know. But there are things I want to talk to her about. I won't meet them till I do. Please?!" she added looking at Vishakha. She finally nodded.

"As long as you're here." She replied with a grin.

"Oh I'm not going anywhere. No one is kicking me out this time." Kriya replied with a tease.

"We won't let anyone." Both Vishakha and Naina replied together, shocking each other and themselves.

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Everyone asked Swayam, "What'd she say?"

Swayam replied, "She said 'no'."

That shocked everyone, including Rinni and Simmi. "Are you sure?" Simmi asked and Swayam nodded.

"You explained it properly to her, right?" Rinni questioned.

"I did. She understood too. Just when I thought she was about to say yes, she said the opposite! I dunno what happened."

"We'll talk to her." Rinni suggested.

"Good luck," Swayam replied. Rey dropped everyone at their places and when Swayam and him were finally alone, he asked.

"What did she actually say?"

"She said no." Swayam repeated.

"Come on Swayam. I know you better than that. There's more. Spit it out."

Swayam exhaled before saying, "She said no and then winked."

Rey applied sudden brakes. "She did what!?" he asked again just to make sure he heard right.

Swayam nodded, confirming. "She winked."

"No. How? Not possible. Sharon? Wink? Seriously?" Rey went on and on.

"R-E-Y! I know. I'm still not ready to come out of that shock. But she did wink."

"She never winks!" Rey tried to reason.

"Don't you think I know that?" Swayam replied a bit sarcastic. He calmed down before adding, "Something's wrong. I'm telling you' She's up to something."

"Uh-Oh." Rey said.

"Right. When Sharon's up to something' it's uh-oh."

"Just keep your eyes open?" Rey warned Swayam. More like warning himself. Still. He them put the car in acceleration and continued driving.


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Notey-note below 😆 Next update this time after 70 likes.

Love,

Khushi.

Edited by *Khushii* - 12 years ago

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