Mayur SS kismat se tum humko mile ho INDEX PAGE 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#1
hey guyzz
many of you must not be knowing me
actually from a long time i wanted to write a SS on mayur...
and now i am going to fulfill my wish. since its my first time i know you might not like it so feel free to criticize as it would help me to improve 😃

so here's part 1

It was a lively atmosphere'..music, decent decorations'..and the two of them were sitting on a decorated table with champagnes in their hands'though it was a date but somewhere she wasent happy''.

Nitish: Nupur tumhare boyfriends the pehle?

Nupur: Nitish phir se wahi baat..tumhe mere past se kya matlab hai?

Ni: oh come on nupur you are my fianc 'I have the right to know

N(irritated): accha talking about past tumhari gf's kam thi kya
infact tumne to un sab ki photos bhi apne room main laga rakhi hai'.vo to hamara past nhi hamara present and future bhi haunt kar rhi hai..

Ni: oho tum irritate kyu ho rhi ho?? Sirf pooch hi to rha hoon

N(taking a deep breath): haan bt the nhi tha'..sirf ek

Ni:kaun??

JUST THEN NUPUR'S PHONE RANG.SHE HEAVED A SIGH OF RELIEF

N:hello?

Gunjan: hiii nupur kahan hai tu??? Tune to mujhe wish bhi nhi kiya'.kam se kam party main to aa jaa

Nupur's p.o.v

Oh shit!!!!! Aaj to gunjan ka bday hai'usne mujhe party main bhi invite kiya tha'main to bilkul bhool hi gyi..

N: I am very very sorry gunjan'vo main tera bday nhi bhooli thi main to aaj kya date hai ye hi bhool gyi itni busy hoon subah se warna tera bday thodi na bhool sakti hoon'sorry '.a very very happy bday to you

G: hehe batein bnana to koi tujhse seekhe'ab party main to aa jaa already you are late

N: gunjan srry vo main bhool gyi thi na to main apne fianc ke saath bahar ayi hoon'waise bhi main aaj tak kabhi bhi to teri party main nhi aayi na

G: OMG nupur you are engaged! !!!! ab to tujhe aana hi padega I want to meet my jeeju'unhe bhi laiyo n I know tu kabhi nhi aayi but this time I am throwing a big party and I want all my friends to be there'please

N(jeeju'this word caused a strange pain I her heart) : accha I will try'bye

G: bye please do come

Ni: kiska phone tha

N: vo gunjan meri dost hai 'waise mujhse ek saal junior thi school main par phir bhi hum dost hai'.aaj uska bday hai'is baar usne mujhe bahut request kiya tha aane ke liye but main bhool gayi :(

Ni: to kya hua??ab chalte hain na'main bhi tumhare dosto se mil loonga

N:nahi nitish main waha bahut kam logo ko jaanti hoon btaya na juniors the hum bore ho jayenge

N:aree gunjan ka to socho aur main to hounga na tumhare saath aur phir mujhe bhi jaanna hai ki tumhare dost kaun kaun hai!!

N: tum ye shak karne ki aadat kabhi nhi chhod sakte na!! anyways chalo'

so guyzz this was part 1...mayank would soon enter the story
do tell me if you got bored or if i am exaggerating things 😛

also guyz in this story mayank would be a year younger than nupur and mostly people dont like a boy younger than a girl...what do you feel??

i would post part 2 only if you would like me to continue and since i dont have many contacts on IF so if you like my story do tell your friends to read it.thnxx


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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
Congrats for ur ur ff dear
Lovely story
but dont want to c nupur with nitesh
mayur forever and wanna c them together

btw mayu was younger than nupur0 hayeee kyun??????

hmmm lets c how u'll makes it interesting

do cont it..

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Posted: 13 years ago
#3
thnxx 😛
n dnt wrry it will be only mayur together 😳
and there is no reason.as such ki mayank is younger...its just a matter of one year and morever i believe if girls are elder in a relationship it makes it more strong 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
20 views and only one reply 😭
if you all dont like it atleast criticize please
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
hey lovd it.
cont soon.
n it was superb.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#6
Nice concept. Waiting for next update. Plz add me ur pm list.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congratsss on new story!!!!
It was nice update...
Waiting for mayu to enter and how the story unfolds...
Nupur doesn't seem to be happy...waiting to know why...
Update soon
Thanksss for the PM 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#8
I loved it
continue soon !!!!! and pm me plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#9
thnku all fr ur lovely comments...
i will update either tonight or tom... 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
INDEX
PART 1- PAGE 1
PART 2- PAGE 2
Edited by shrutikaa - 13 years ago

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