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Desipunjaban

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Posted: 12 years ago

INTRODUCTION ABOUT ME-

HEY FRIENDS!!!I HAVE BEEN A SILENT READER OF THE FORUM FOR A QUITE LONG TIME NOW AND HAVE READ MANY INTERESTING AND AWSMM FICTIONS OF ALL SO TALENTED WRITERS...(HATS OFF TO UR WRK)...SO INSPIRED FROM THEM I HAVE DECIDED TO PEN DOWN MY IDEA HERE.I DONT KNOW HOW GOOD IT WOULD BE,BUT I WILL BE REALLY THANKFUL IF YOU GIVE IT A TRY...SINCE I M NEW...I M TRYING MY HAND ON A SHORT STORY.

..P.S.-if by any means you find the story has already been written,i m really sorry but i m not copying...do let me know i will discontinue it right away...thanks for tolerating my bak bak...the character sketch and the prologue are given below...

-:INDEX:-

CHRACTER SKETCH-PAGE 1

PROLOGUE-PAGE 1

PART 1-PAGE 2

PART 2-PAGE 2

PART 3-PAGE 3

PART 4-PAGE 3

PART 5-PAGE 4 & 5

PART6-PAGE 6

PART 7-PAGE 6

PART 8-PAGE 7

PART 9- PAGE 8

PART 10-PAGE 8

The story is shifted in the geet forum...link is given below

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3419885/mg-ss-khamoshiyan-love-in-silence-on-hold

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-:CHARACTER SKETCH:-

MAAN SINGH KHURANA

THE HOT AND ARROGANT BUSINESS MAN...MOST ELIGIBLE BACHELOR OF THE COUNTRY,,,,,WITH LOOKS TO KILL AND SMILE TO DIE FOR...A MAN OF MORALS...LVS HIS DADIMA A LOT...(AND IMAGINE EVERYTHING GRLS FOE HIS LOOKS AS U LIKE😉)

GEET HANDA

BUBBLY,CHIRPY AND A FUN LOVING GIRL...TAKES EVERYTHING WITH A SMILE ON FACE...WITH EYES SPEAKING VOLUMES...LIVES IN AN ORPHANAGE...SHE IS DUMB..😭😭(BUT DAT DOES NOT MAKE A DIFFERENCE...BABA G BACHAYE MAAN KO USSE...ISHRE MEIN BAATE KAR KAR KE MAAR DALEGI😆).BUT STILL HAS NO COMPLAINS...HAS A HIDDEN FEAR AND PAST...DATS YET TO BE REVEALED...

SAVITRI DEVI KHURANA

OUR PYARI DADIMA...SAME AS THE SHOW...LOVING AND CARING...A WOMAN WITH STRONG MORALS!!!!😃

DEV SINGHANIA

BEST FRIEND OF MAN...FUN LOVING (GOOD CHARACTER)...RESPECTS MAAN AS A BROTHER..

OTHERS CHARACTERS WILL BE INTRODUCED AS THE STORY PROCEEDS...

HELP ME WITH POSTING PICTURES..😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

-:PROLOGUE:-

I WROTE YOUR NAME IN THE SKY,

BUT THE WIND BLEW IT AWAY.

I WROTE YOUR NAME IN THE SAND,

BUT THE WAVES WASHED IT AWAY.

I WROTE YOUR NAME IN MY HEART,

AND FOREVER IT WILL STAY.

LOVE NEEDS NO MEDIUM TO COMMUNICATE,NOR IT NEEDS ANY MEDIUM TO UNDERSTAND WHAT OTHER WANTS TO SAY.FOR IT IS FREE FROM ALL HUMAN BOUNDARIES,AND KNCKS IN LIFE WITHOUT UR PERMISSION...YET IT IS SOMETHING DAT NEEDS TO BE POSSESED,FOR IT IS FREE FROM ALL EVIL AND LIES..

LOVE HAS A SPECIAL DEFINATION OF ITS OWN FROM EVERY SINGLE INDIVIDUAL...JOIN ME AND EXPERIENCE WAT WUD BE THE MEANING OF LV FOR THIS SPECIAL COUPLE...😊

LEAVE COMMENTS...

(I AM OPEN FOR BUUDY REQESTS...SEND ME ADD REQUEST IF U WANT PM FOR THE UPDATES)

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice concept and an interesting one to. can you pls pm me

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sridevi_n
nice concept and an interesting one to. can you pls pm me

ya sure..i will do it...thanks for comment

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-:PART 1:-

SINGHANIA APARTMENTS

BHAI KI NAUGHTY KAHANI YE HALKAT JAWANI...RINGS A MOBILE...

DEV:-HELLO!

DADIMA(DM):-GUD MORNING BETA!

DEV:-GOOD MORNING DADIMA...HOW R U...ARE D TESTS GOING WELL??

(SHE IS IN LONDON FOR SOME NORMAL HEALTH ISSUES)

DM:-ALL IS GOING FINE BETE ..N M ALLRIGHT...I HAVE CALLED U UP FOR SMTHING IMPORTANT.

DEV:-HMM...TELL ME WAT IS IT DADIMA.

DM:-YOU KNOW BETA I M HERE FOR MY MEDICAL TEST...N IN SOMEDAYS ITS THE BDAY OF MAAN'...AS YOU KNOW EVERY YEAR ON THIS DAY I MYSELF VISIT D ORPHANAGE STARTED BY HIS GRANDFATHER...BUT MAAN WONT ALLOW ME TO COME BAK FOR THE EVENT THIS TIME...N HE WONT EVEN GO N SEND SOMEONE ON HIS PLACE...SO I WANTED A FAVOUR FROM YOU..

DEV:-SURE!!ANYTHING FOR U DADIMA...TELL ME WHAT DO I NEED TO DO.

DM:-BETA I WANT YOU TO MAKE SURE MAAN FOR SURE VISITS THE ORPHANAGE HIMSELF N ENJOY A DAY OFF FROM OFFICE ON HIS BDAY...

DEV:-OH MY GOD DADIMA DATS NEXT TO IMPOSSIBLE!!HUSH!!

DM:-PLJ BETA...I HAVE TALKED TO MAAN...N I JUST WANT TO MAKE SURE HE DOESN'T SKIPS FROM IT...

DEV:-OK DADIMA DON'T WORRY...I WILL DO IT N WILL ALSO MAKE ALL THE ARRANGEMENTS FOR THE PARTY!!!

DM:-THANKS BETA!!BYE N TAKE CARE OF URSELF N MAAN...

DEV:-BYE! COME BACK SOON !!

POSTING ONE MORE IN AN HOUR

TEASER:-MAAN BJY ON PHONE...GEET ALL BJY IN GOSIPING (OFCOURSE IN HER SIGN LANGUAGE...BT IT HAS NO EFFECT ON GEET'S CHATERING)...N BANG...WAT THE HE...(SILENCE)

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-:PART 2:-

DEV GETS READY IN ALL HURRY...OTHERWISE HE WUD MISS MEETING THE PUNCTUAL SINGH KHURANA(OH DATS WAT I LIKE HIM CALLING)...N DASHES HIS CAR ON THE GATES OF THE MANSION INDICATING HIS ARRIVAL BY HONKING HIS CAR MADLY...

AT 8AM...(KHURANA MANSION)

MAAN ALREADY FOR OFFICE HAVING HIS BREAKFAST...N CHEKING HIS MAILS ON THE MOBILE...

DEV ENTERS..

DEV:-HEY YAAR...ALL GOOD...

MAAN:-NOT ANYMORE(UNDER HIS BREATH)...YES ALL IS GREAT...U TELL

DEV:-I KNOW...WAT U MURMERED JST NW...(LAUGHS)

MAAN:-SO WAT BRINGS THE KING HERE SO EARLY IN THE MORNING...DERE MST BE A RESON...ELSE U N WAKING UP SO EARLY IS NOT POSSIBLE...

DEV:-HOW WELL U KNOW ME YAAR!!!

ACTLYY I M HERE TO INFORM U DAT I HAVE BEEN GIVEN A DUTY BY DADIMA TO MAKE SURE U ATTEND THE ORPHANGE FUNCTION TOMORROW...

MAAN:-DONT WORRY ABOUT DAT DEV...I HAVE ASKED MY SECRETRY TO ARRANGE EVERYTHING FOR TOMORROW ACCORDING TO DADIMA'S WISH...N U ALSO GO THERE TOMORROW N HOST THE PARTY...I WILL BE BJY...HVING A FEW IMPORTANT MEETINGS LINED UP!!

DEV:-NO WAYS MAAN ...U R NT GOING TO SKIP D EVENT AT ALL...AFTRALL ITS UR BDAY TOMORROW...ATLEAST TAKE A DAY OFF N ENJOY D DAY...

YOU ARE ALWAYS LIKE A ROBOT WORKING ...LIVE LIKE A HUMAN FOR A DAY ATLEAST ONCE IN AN YEAR...

MAAN:-NO WAYS ..M HAPPY THE WAY I M...I M NT COMING N DATS FINAL..

DEV:-OK,..AS UR WISH...I WILL BE TELLING THE SAME TO DADIMA..N U KNW HOW UPSET SHE WILL BE...TO TOP THAT SHE IS THERE TO RELAX N GET HER TREATMENT DONE CALMLY...BT...ANYWAYS...WHAT CAN V DO...U HAVE IMPORTANT MEETINGS...

MAAN:-OH!!STOP DAT DRAMA DEV...U R NOT GOING TO DO ANYTHING OF THE SORT...

DEV:-WANNA GIVE IT A TRY...

MAAN(PISSED):-OK...I WILL B ATTENDING THE EVENT BT NT FOR LONG...I WILL COME.GREET N GO AFTR SOMETIME...DEAL

DEV:-OK DONE!!

BE READY TOMORROW AT 11...FOR A CHANGE BE THERE ON TIME URSELF...U R NT MY GIRLFRIEND I WILL BE PICKING UP(😆)_

MAAN:-JUST SHUT UP...U N UR IDIOT JOKES...

BYE M LEAVING GETTING LATE FOR OFFICE...

DEV:-BYE!!

SHOUTS(NAKUL KAKA...GET MY BREAKFAST M HUNGRY...)!!!

TEASER CONTINUES...

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