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Posted: 12 years ago
oops!!! get wel soon dr.update if u r alrit,otrwise hv rest.we wl wait.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Dipu_taarey

guys...i know u all r waitting for update but sad news is i m not well from yesterday...right now m feeling little better but not so much...sham tak thik ho jaungi...so ho sakta hai me sham ko ya raat ko update karoo...

šŸ¤— take proper rest...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dipu another ff wow . :) it was awesome yaar . . Loved it. . . Loved taanis caring side . Its so cute pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Dipu_taarey

guys...i know u all r waitting for update but sad news is i m not well from yesterday...right now m feeling little better but not so much...sham tak thik ho jaungi...so ho sakta hai me sham ko ya raat ko update karoo...


No worries Dear Dipu...
Firstly take good care of ur health... All things should be secondary for u right now..
So u better relax ur self completely...😊
Best wishes for U..šŸ‘šŸ¼
May u recover soon from ur ill health.. Amen...
Lots of Loveā¤ļø, HugsšŸ¤—šŸ¤—, Kisses... Muuuaahhh...
Take care... Bye...
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Posted: 12 years ago
M so relieved yeh padhne ke baad ki yug taani ka own son nahi!! I mean, Taani ke past mein koi aur ladka nahi tha!!!
I just loved the first part! Amaazing! Jaldi jaldi update karo di!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Take care .
Don't worry, when u feel better then only update.
Get well soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Di m so sorry itne late reply ke liye.. But yeh studies mera peecha nahi chchod rahe!
I LOVED THE UPDATE! Mujhe shaanti mili yeh padhke ki Yug Taani ka own son nahi hai.. I mean ki Taani ke past me koi aur ladka nahi tha.. eagerly waiting for Taani- Rey- and Yug meet.. Jaldi jaldi update and pm me too!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Feel better soon Dipu and update only when u get better
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god...awsome story...just luved it ā­ļø
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so guys here is chapter 2.i hope u all like it.

i want to tell all that all are in final year of M.com. . . . .

finally pahoch gaye.ab bas train ka wait karna hai.

yug is in taani's hand.

his hands are wrapped around her neck.

yug-mumma. . . .aur kitna time lagega?yug bor ho raha hai. . . .

ta-bas beta. . . . thodi aur der. . . just then train come.

ta-ye lo train aa gayi aapki. . . .

all sit in the train. . . . .

yug-mumma. . . . .paani pina hai yug ko.

taani take out a bottle and give it to yug.

just than taani's phone rang.

its showing "sharon calling. . . . ."

taani smile and go near the door of the train and pick up the phone.

ta-hello. . . .

sh-hello taani. . . . kya kar rahi ho?

ta-kuch nahi . . , tum batao . . .

sh-me na swayam ka wait kar rahi hu. . . . aaj to vo gaya. . . . me us se bahot naraz hu. . . .

just then rey come there and sharon gesture him to stay silent.

ta-are par kyu?

sh-mujhse milna tha par abhi tak nahi aaya . . . . vaise i know taani ki tum ye sun na nahi chahti but i want to tell that pls move on in life and find someone.

ta-nahi shar. . . .ek bar jo dhoka khaya uske baad love pe mera trust nahi hai. . . .

but just then something stuck on sharon's leg and she give her phone to rey. . . . .taani doesnt know that its not sharon. . . . vo bolti rehti hai and rey sunta hai. . . .

ta-but ek baat me tumse zarur kahungi ki apne pyar ko hamesha samhal ke rakhna. . . . kyuki agar life me koi pyar karnewala ho to life khoobsurat lagti hai.life ka har pal achha lagta hai. pyar hame khushiya deta hai. . . . .love is magic which change our life. . . . meri life me to ab. . .

but just then sharon take the phone from rey . . .

ta-. . . . ab pyar nahi hai but tum apne pyar ko kabhi mat khona. . . .

sh-ok ok. . . . me samaj gayi.

just then the train start and sharon heard its whistle.

sh-taani tum station par kya kar rahi ho?

ta-actually sharon i m coming to mumbai. . . .

sh-what. . . . aur tum mujhe ab bata rahi ho?achha ye batao kitne baje yaha aaogi?me tumhe pik karne aa jaungi.

ta-sharon. . . . me tumhe address sms kar dungi.tum ghar pe aa jana

sh-ok. . . . bye

ta-bye

.taani come back and sit beside her dad.

here swayam come .

sh-tum dono. . . . ladki ho kya jo itna late hote ho?

sw-sorry vo me late utha tha. . .

rey-me bhi. . .

sh-ok ok. . . . aaj jo bhi program hai vo cancel kardo.

reyam-kyu?

sh-vo me baad me bataungi.abhi mujhe jana hai. . . . . bye. . . .

and she go from there.

sw-ok. . . . me bhi chalta hu . . . bye. . . .

rey-bye. , .

in the train

taani ke dad-taani beta. . . . tum pehle ki tarah kyu nahi ban jaati?jo mujhe pops bulati thi hamesha hasti rehti thi kabhi sad nahi hoti thi. . . .

ta-(in her mind)yug aur papa k liye mujhe khush rehna hoga. . . .so taani no more sad face. . . . from now only smiley smiley)oh pops. . ,me to pehle jesi hi hu. . , ye dekhiye. . . and she smile. , .

td-thats my daughter. . . . . .

ta-vese pops. . . .vaha dekhiye. . . .

td-par me unhe nahi janta. . ,

ta-ha to jaan lijiye na. . ,phir me na aap dono ki setting karva dungi.

her dad slightly hit her on her head and said-pagli. . . . ab meri umar ye sab karne ki nahi rahi.

ta-ha ha . . . . mana kar rahe ho par man me to laddoo phoot rahe honge.

td-chup pagal ladki. . . . .

just then taani saw yug is sleeping so taani sit beside her and put his head in her lap.

here rey is driving. . . .

he is thinking . . . "kon thi vo . . . . .uski aawaz kitni sweet thi. . . . .aur uski baate. . . . kya sach me pyar ek magic hai. . . . kya pyar se life khoobsoorat ho jati hai?kya pyar se khushi milti hai?oh rey what r u thinking. . . . esa kuch nahi hai.just go home and take rest. . .

after some hours. . . . . .

they reach mumbai. . . . . yug is walking holding taani's finger.

here rey is lying on his bed.

usko bas ek hi baat bar bar yad aa rahi thi. . . ,"LOVE IS MAGIC"

taani ki baate usse baar baar yad aa rahi thi. . . . . .

suddenly he remember something and he rush to the railway station.

here . . . .

td-taani. . . . . .us ladke ko dekho. . . handsome hai na?tumhare liye kaisa rahega?

ta-vo. . ,pls pops not again. . . . uski height mujhse kam hai. . . .

td-to vo vala?uski height tumse zyada hai. . . . .

ta-pops. . . . pls. . . . i dnt want anyone. . . .

td-ok. . . . tum bahar khadi raho.me newspaper leke aata hu. . . .

ta-ok. . .

taani and yug sit on a bench. , .

yug-mumma. . .

ta-ha yug kya hua beta?

yug-yug ko chips khani hai. . . . .

ta-ok. . . .mumma le ke aati hai. aap yahi bethna ok?

yug-ok mumma. . . .

taani go near a stall . . . she stand there but she is thinking something. . .

here yug is sitting on a bench and rey is standing near the bench. . . .

suddenly his phone rang and he sit on a bench.

rey-hello. . . .

someone-ha rey. . . . me nahi aa raha. . .

rey-kya?what bhai. . . . aap pehle nahi bata sakte the?

rey ka bhai-sorry yar but tum to jante ho ki mujhe bahot imp project mila hai.so me nahi aa sakta.

rey-ok bhai. . . . bye. . ,

he hang up his phone.

yug is hearing all this.

yug-kya hua?

rey-kuch nahi champ. . . . tum batao yaha akele kyu bethe ho?

yug-kuch nahi . . . . mumma ka wait kar raha hu.

rey-oh. . , whats your name?

yug-yug aur aap ka. . . ?

rey-rey. . . . vaise aap ka name bahot achha hai. . . .

yug-thanks. . . .

rey-ok yug. . . . bye. . . mujhe jana hai.

yug-bye. . . .

rey is walking and thinking-"wow. . . so sweet boy. . . . .aur name bhi kitna pyara tha. . ,yug . . . "

here taani come back with a packet of chips and her dad come back with a news paper.

ta-ok to chale?

yug-ha mumma chaliye. . . . yug is so exited to see new home. . . .

ta-ha ha. . . chalo. . .

all reach . . .

its the same apartment in which sharon live. . .

they reach in the home and taani msg sharon her addresse.

sharon read her messegd and jump in happiness.taani is living in this apartment. . . .

she is on 2nd floor and taani is on 3rd floor. . . .

sharon rush to taani's home.

sharon ring the bell.

ta-pops aap yug ke clothes change karva do. . . . me dekhti hu. . . .

td-ok. . .

taani go and open the door. . . .

sh-taani. . . .

ta-sharon. . . .

both hug eachother. . . .

ta-itni jaldi kaise aa gayi?

sh-well. . . . me isi apartment me rehti hu. . . .

ta-kya?thats great. . . . aao betho. . . .

they are talking when suddenly yug come running and hug taani and said-"mummaaa. . . . mummaaa. . . . dadu ko kaho na. . . yug ko clothes change nahi karne hai. . . . . "

sharon is shocked hearind mummaa from yug's mouth. . . . .

ta-but yug. . . . . clothes to change karne hi padenge. . . . . dekho aapke clothes gande ho gaye hai na?ok agar aap ne clothes change kar liye to me aap ko icecream dungi. . . .

yug-wow. . . icecream. . . . .yug ko bahot pasand hai. . . .thank u mummaa. . . . me abhi change karne jata hu.

and he go in his dadu's room.

sh-taani. . . . . he is so sweet. . ,but ye tumhe mumma kyu bol raha tha. . ??

ta-tum mere room me chalo. . . .

both go in her room.

taani told her everything. . .

sh-oh my god taani. . . . kitna dard hai tumhare andar. . . . .

ta-plz sharon ye baat kisiko mat batana. . . . . . and yug ko bilkul nahi.me nahi chahti ki yug ko pata chale ki vo mera beta nahi hai.ab vo hi meri jeene ki vajah hai. . . . . .plz sharon yug ko ye mat batana ki yug mera beta nahi hai.

but yug listen the last line. . . . . he has a glass of juice which he brought for taani . . . . .

sharon hug taani and said-nahi bataungi taani i promise. . . . .

but suddenly they heard sound of breaking a glass. . , . . .

they saw there and both shocked seeing yug there. . . ,

sharon and taani-yug . . ,

but yug run from there . . . . .

taani and sharon run after him. . . .

so guys i stop here. . . . . . my work done and now your work start. . . . plz like and comment.

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