BEGUNAAH: the cry of innocence

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PROLOGUE

It was an extremely cold and dark night of December . There was no moonlight and the street lamps flickered over the city of Delhi . The Naya Bazaar lane was deserted ,it was pitch dark and even the night sleepers were scared of staying late .The road was famous for its violence cases ,raping ,buggling ,murder ; all these were its daily dozes .But something unusual happened that night in the pitch darkness there was a girl sitting on the embankment .She was in her twenties and she wore a blue full length salwar .Her legs were crumbled by her arms and the salwar was almost tore .There was blue and black marks all over her body and couple of love bites too. Blood was dripping from her forehead and arms''she was badly beaten. Just then a passerby stopped infront of her ,she was aware that this girl had been the victim of the most cruel act of mankind she had been RAPED. She asked in a soft voice

"what is your name?"

She looked up and spoke in a scary and shaky voice

"M..AN'YATA"

prologue ,CHARACTER SKETCH :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3414675/begunaah-the-cry-of-innocence

chapter 1https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3414675/begunaah-the-cry-of-innocence

SUCIDE NOTE:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3414675/begunaah-the-cry-of-innocence?pn=4

CHAPTER 2 :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3414675/begunaah-the-cry-of-innocence?pn=6

chapter 3 :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3414675/begunaah-the-cry-of-innocence?pn=9

chapter 4 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3414675/begunaah-the-cry-of-innocence?pn=11

chapter 5 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3414675/begunaah-the-cry-of-innocence?pn=15

chapter 6 :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3414675/begunaah-the-cry-of-innocence?pn=17

CHAPTER 7 :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3414675/begunaah-the-cry-of-innocence?pn=18

chapter 8 :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3414675/begunaah-the-cry-of-innocence?pn=20

CHAPTER 9 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3414675/begunaah-the-cry-of-innocence?pn=21

special update:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3414675/begunaah-the-cry-of-innocence?pn=25

chapter 10 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3414675/begunaah-the-cry-of-innocence?pn=29

chapter 11 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3414675/begunaah-the-cry-of-innocence

chapter 12 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3414675/begunaah-the-cry-of-innocence

chapter 13 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3414675/begunaah-the-cry-of-innocence

CHAPTER 14 AND 15;https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3414675/begunaah-the-cry-of-innocence

CHAPTER 16 AND 17 AND 18 :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/80841229

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CHARACTERS

UDAY VEER SINGH 26

HE IS THE MALE PROTOGONIST OF THIS STORY .HE BELONGS TO ARICH FAMILY OF PANIPAT . HE IS LOVED AND PAMPERED BY AS HE IS THE ELDEST SON OF THE FAMILY. HE HAD ALWAYS BEEN A TOPPER AND A SPORTSTAR ,SINCE 5 YEARS HE HAVE BEEN STAYING ALL ALONE IN DELHI .HE IS IN THIRD YEAR ENGINEERING STUDENT IN DELHI UNIVERSITY .HE IS THE MOST WANTED BOY IN HIS COLLEGE AND HE HAS A GANG OF OTHER FIVE BOYS ; THEY ARE BEST FRIEND .UV LOVES LATE NIGHT PARTIES ,DRINKING ,SMOKING ,MAKING LOVE ,EVE TEASING AND RIDDING BIKES .HE IS NAUGHTY BY NATURE AND HOT BY CHOICE .BUT THE ONLY THING HE CANNOT BEAR IS REFUSAL AND HE GOES CRAZY WHEN HE IS REFUSED WHICH RARELY HE IS'.OR MAYBE NOT

MANYATA KAPOOR :20


SHE HAS RECENTLY SHIFTED TO DELHI .SHE ALWAYS RESPECT OTHERS AND DO AS HER PARENTS SAY WHOLE HER LIFE SHE HAD NEVER WORN JEANS OR EVEN HAD A CRUSH. SHE IS A BRIGHT STUDENT AND A FRESHER IN ENGINEERING IN DELHI UNIVERSITY .SHE IS VERY SHY AND SOFT SPOKEN SHE REPRESENTS ALL THE TRADITIONAL INDIAN GIRLS .SHE HATES BOYS DRINKING AND SMOKING AND SHE MISSES HER BROTHER ,MAYANK A LOT

JAYNANDINI SINGH ;16


THE YOUNGER SISTER OF UDAY .A SWEET CLEAR HEADED GIRL AND THE APPLE OF HER BROTHER 'S EYE .

GIRIRAAJ SINGH ;HE IS THE FATHER OF UDAY AND JAI .A RICH INDRUSTIALIST OF PANIPATAND IS LIBERAL TO HIS CHILDRENS .A VERY POLITE GENTLEMAN AND AN IDEAL FATHER

KOMAL KAPOOR ; A WIDOWER OF LATE BRIDGRAAJ KAPOOR .SHE IS ALWAYS IRRITABLE AND IS ALWAYS NAGGING .SHE IS ALWAYS COMPLAINING ABOUT

HER TROBLES .SHE IS SPECIALLY IRRITED BY HER DAUGHTER .ALL HER LIFE SHE HAVE SPENT IN A SMALL TOWN OF PANIPAT BUT WHEN MANYATA WAS 16 THEY SHIFTER TO MYSORE AND NOW DELHI.SHE IS A CARDIOLOGIST AT CITY HOSPITAL .SHE IS FILLED WITH FRUSTATION ,LONELINESS ,BOREDOM AND SHE TAKES OUT HER ANGER ON THIS GIRL

MAYANK KAPOOR :27

HE IS MANYATA 'S ELDER BROTHER .WHEN MANYATA WAS 16 AND HE WAS IN COLLEGE SECOND YEAR IN DU.ON HER BIRTHDAY HE FOUGHT WITH HIS MOM AND LEFT THE HOUSE FOREVER NO ONE KNOWS ABOUT HIM NOW

AKASH VERMA:25

HE IS ALSO IN THE SAME CLASS AS OF UDAY .HE IS UDAY 'S BEST FRIEND .HIS PARENTS ARE INDUSTRIALIST IN UK.

JAGAAT RAJPOOT:26

HE ALSO BELONG TO SAME CLASS AND UDAY 'S GROUP .HIS PARENTS ARE CIVIL ENGINEER OF MUMBAI

VIJAY ARORA;26

IN THE SAME CLASS AND IN UDAY 'S GROUP HIS PARENTS ARE OWNER OF MANY HOTELS IN GUJURAT.

AYAAN KHURRANA ;26

IN THE SAME CLASS AND UDAY 'S GROUP. HIS PARENTS ARE POLITICIAN.

KARAN WAHI:24

IN SECOND YEAR AND IN THE SAME GROUP OF UDAY . HIS PARENTS ARE TRUSTEE OF COLLEGES IN BANGLALORE .

Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept dea...
Jai nd uday's sis...I like it!!
Prologue was too interesting...
Plz do continue soon nd pm me if possible!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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looks like you have some intense dark story out here. Have loved your other work "the beautiful fire" a lot 😳😳, so If this is coming rom the same writer then I'm on for this 😊. I can guess that u must be caught up in ur school or college, but please try giving us regular updates😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u know what dear,,,,,,though i liked the prologue written by you.
i still cant get over this fact tht in this story onece again a girl is raped.

This hanunted nd horrendous word remind me of only one girl "NIRBHAY" .

Dont have any words to say anything ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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yea i know dat girl i was totally scaterred by da news so was my friends and we even burned candles for her in kolkata...but in dis one this raping will change her life...for the good
nd really i want those victim hanged even dat guy of 17
hate demmm
u knw wat dey were nthng but a bunch of nuthodox
ahhh i m gtng so mad
watsoever dear dis story will take a sweet turn after this incident hope u like it
gudni8
sweet wala dream lozz🥱🥱
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dis cruel act of guys,make me soo irritated!!!!! neways,annesha so good to see a new stry!!!!!!! nicee concept,dear and doo cntninueee sooon!!!!!!! and ofcrse needless to say inclde me in pm lst😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: annesha18

yea i know dat girl i was totally scaterred by da news so was my friends and we even burned candles for her in kolkata...but in dis one this raping will change her life...for the good
nd really i want those victim hanged even dat guy of 17
hate demmm
u knw wat dey were nthng but a bunch of nuthodox
ahhh i m gtng so mad
watsoever dear dis story will take a sweet turn after this incident hope u like it
gudni8
sweet wala dream lozz🥱🥱



exactly same here dear...i just go mad thinking abt those bas***ds🤢...
i just dont want thm to be hanged tht would be the softest punishment fr thm...
i want thm the most brutal punishment fr thm...
even chemical castration wont be enough fr them...
they should be given the most harshest punishment of all times coz of which their punishment proves a lesson fr other criminals who atleast think of 100 times before commiting this gravest crime ...😡

sweet dreams...dear !!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice proluge and CS plz..conti. Soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i liked ur prologue and ur FF titles are always very catchy...update soon😊

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