BEGUNAAH: the cry of innocence - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: coolsaloni.nira



exactly same here dear...i just go mad thinking abt those bas***ds🤢...
i just dont want thm to be hanged tht would be the softest punishment fr thm...
i want thm the most brutal punishment fr thm...
even chemical castration wont be enough fr them...
they should be given the most harshest punishment of all times coz of which their punishment proves a lesson fr other criminals who atleast think of 100 times before commiting this gravest crime ...😡

sweet dreams...dear !!!!!!
now i want all girls should be allowed to carry revolver u knw anyone teases or tries to rape shot them at spot
that would be fun😃😃😃😃😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
the start is sad but hope the actual story is amazing cause it has potential
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
nice prologue
its sad
but de story has a lot of potential and i guess
it will turn out in favour of Manyata
catchy title
great character sketch
do cont soon
thanks 4 de PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
loved it
I think I m a little late
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15

CHAPTER 1

Manyata glanced at her nude body ,her body was covered with love bites ,blue and black marks .Her was swollen and the pain was tremendous .It had been almost an hour since she stood below the shower while the water ran down her body .She felt herself so ugly ,so dirty ,so impure ,she blamed herself for the situation. As she shut her eyes the villainous face appeared who had raped her before 2 hours and left her on the streets to die . Her chain of thoughts were broken as she heard her mother screaming

"god why ?...why did I give birth to this witch..i wish she was death '.now she has ruined the prestige ,pride everything''GOD'kill this girl or else kill me'she was born to plague my life'' unlucky freak of nature

Her mother kept accusing her but her heart ached and she asked herself

"what was my fault?" She turned off the shower and dried herself'.Manyata wore a red netted sari which she had first worn during her class ten farewell .Then she took out a dupatta and placed a stool on her bed and tied a knot between the dupatta and her fan and then got down and sat on her study tble .She took out a pen and paper and started to write

"DEAR MOM

MUJHEI PATTA HAI KI AJJ APKOH GHIN ARAHIHAI MUJHPEI'.MUJHEI PAATA HAI KI MERE WAIJEISHEI APPKO BOHOT SAHENA PAREGA [I KNOW THAT TODAY YOU ARE FEELING DISGUSTED AT ME'I KNOW FOR ME YOU HAVE TO SUFFER A LOT ] BUT I AM PAING FOR MY SIN..I AM ENDING MY LIFE HERE AND WITH MY DEATH BODY I AM ENDING YOUR SORROWS AND SUFFERINGS BUT BEFORE DIEING ..I JUST WANT TO BLAME THE PERSON BEHIND MY THIS SITUATION'.THE BOY WHO RUINED MY LIFE WHO RAPED ME

UDAYVEER SINGH

"
Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
first to comment
nice update
feel sad 4 M
i thought UV m8 hav raped her
poor M
i hope she doesnt die ...
eager 4 more
u always give chotu updates
cont soon
Edited by anushruthi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
first to comment
nice update
feel sad 4 M
i thought UV m8 hav raped her
poor M
i hope she doesnt die ...
eager 4 more
u always give chotu updates
cont soon
[/QUOTE
SORRY FOR CHOTA UPDATE BUT IT IS UV WHO RAPED HER
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: annesha18


Oh 😲
I Think that UV might want 2 rectify his mistake and bcuz of that m8 Marry M
I hope M doesnt die

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Posted: 12 years ago
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PRECAPE :"TONIGHT EVEN SENIOR BOY WILL ASK A FRESHER GIRL TO DANCE AND THE GIRL CAN'T REFUSE"
THEN IT WAS THE TATOO GUY 'S TURN TO CHOOSE THE GIRLAND HE POINTED TOWARDS ME AND SAID
"HUMEI EISH LARKHI KEI SATH DANCE KARNA HAI"
SHE WAS DANCING HE OPENED HER BRA STRIPE
I COLLAPSED INTO A PAIR OF STRONG ARMS

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