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LoveTaarey9

@LoveTaarey9

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

hey guyz,

i am new here so u all might not be knowing me yet. I am Riya Kapoor from Delhi. and i am 16yrs old.. i am die hard taarey and love them to the core...

This is my very first OS on this forum so plz avoid the grammitical errors. hope you guyz like it

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Chapter 1 - Page 1

all the chapters are hyperlinked for you too access them easily..

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LoveTaarey9

@LoveTaarey9

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 1

Taani Cummon you can do it. just 5 more minutes!… her coach exclaimed in an encouraging manner

Taani was a fitness freak. She would love to remain fit. She used to hate being fat. She still remembers how much effort se had to put to loose 25 kgs. it was surely not an easy task for her…

She used to attend the gym 7 days a week.. without any break.. but another reason for coming to the gym was her prince charming, her love since she joined the gym…

She still remembers her first day in the gym where met all the trainers except him. it was in between the training session she noticed him and here she fell for him…

She wished he was her trainer, but her bad luck, she had his best friend as her trainer. Though his best friend was a suberb trainer, but the pleasure you get after rue trained by the one you love is magical… She so wished he was her trainer

While training she would always manage to steal glimpses of him as he would generally be training someone near her only..

suddenly she sees the peon coming towards her trainer.. she was shocked to hear those words foam the peon…

sir aapka promotion hoagy… badhai ho.. ab aap bangalore jaa saktey hai..

dhanyavad ramlal

and ramlal took a leave with this

Then next she sees is her trainer coming towards her

Hey Taani.. actually i wanted to inform you… ki era promotion ho gay… so i will be leaving for bangalore today after completing all the formalities… tumhare naye trainer se tumhe 1 minute mien milata hewn

hey krishna jii, please please koi khadoos mera trainer naa ho, plaza sambhal lena… she closed her eyes and kept them closed until her trainer came and said

yeh hai tumhara naya trainer…

she reused to open her eyes but after much hesitation she opened her eyes only to find none other than Her prince Charming standing there...

to be continued

Guyz i know it wasnt that upto the the mark. but it was my first piece of work so i hope i didnt disappoint you too much. Plz leave all ure feedbacks and likes. all tomatoes and eggs are welcome

for pms regarding the OS, add me to ure buddy list

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Afshan Yasmeen

@Afshan9

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

A big hearty WELCOME to this forum..😃😃😃

Hope U find some awesome friends on this forum...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

I'm sure U'll definitely fall in Love with forum and its members...⭐️⭐️⭐️

Once again a big big big hearty

WELCOME

And plz do add me to ur BL(Buddy List) and PM me ur updated post...

Lots and lots of Best wishes...😆😆😆

Take care.. Bye..

Ya I'm editing my views in same comment section..

Wowww...

I'm the first one to comment on ur post..

So let me tell U that Ur start is awesome, So plz keep going on...

As practice makes a man perfect, definitely ur writing skills will improve with the passing time...

But still I must say its a great start..

The characters r same but the story plot is completely different.

Plz do continue writing and as told U don't forget to PM me...

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annie

@patie

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

lol nic cncept update son ...:-) welcome to forum dea:-D

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Riddhima

@...Rhythsy...

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

its really awesome dear...👏

plz update soon

n plz pm me😊

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Lavi

@cutedollll

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

nice story dear😊 i lyk ur concept😉 n thnx for pm me

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Diya_Taarey

@Diya_Taarey

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

Welcome to the Forum honey

and Loved your concept its very unique

Pm and let me know when you update the next one

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ShivTRSS

@ShivTRSS

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

Geez. Where did u get this concept?:-D at first I thought ramlal is rey. Thank god nt that. Btw, nice one.

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asmamember

@asmamember

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

welcome to india forum.

very nice concept.update soon.

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#10

Hey Riya nice concept ,aww Taani already fall for her prince charming plz continue soon

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