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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kuttu

the first part was quite heart wenching to see Rk being not appreciated for what he is by his own father. Does his father see Madhu as a replacement for the son he couldn't have. God Forbid Rk is too possesive of her and any such notion would set him on fire. But in the end looks like the loss was the fathers.

And what exactly is wrong with Madhu that they have to run tests and RK being worried to look at the monitors to see if his wife is doing fine. Loved the banter between the husband and the wife

No doubt the loss was father's...he does see her as a replacement for his son this was in the first palce a reason for RK to be attracted towards her.
Madhu will have a grave health issue towards the end which RK is speculating...But she will live and be cured also eventually😊
Thankyou for taking time out to comment...i love reading yours 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Clara20

hey nice update...waiting for next

Thankns😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jane523

loved d 2nd part
madhu is back...i m sooo happy...hope her medical condition is good...aniket is also nice
continue soon ...waiting for more

her medical condition is not good actually but whatever it is ...It is still in preliminary phases...If you guys had read the parts where RK and Madhu rescue the girl in the sea ...there too I had laid a lot of emphasis on her dehydration...and RK noticing it...so this is something which has yet to show itself in full force...but she will be fine in the end... Aniket will be nice through out ...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sai.janu350

hey it's really awsome updates..👏👏

thanks fo rpm.

Thankyou😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey thankyou sweet heart...did you update yours Did not get anyPM from you ...
hope you did not strike me out of ur list😊

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

awesome updates dear...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zoshad3119

REALLY NICE UPDATE DEAR...
THNXX FOR PM...

Thankyou 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thankyou Neha😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mytinypaintings

Thanks soujanya
Dips is terrible and she will unleash her evilness with much more ferocity here, a little later...😊
and Rishabh is a doctor...I dont know if you guys heard the album Dhoom ever...the main male singer of the band is a doctor . Dr. Palash Sen he is an orthopedic surgeon actually.so this was taken from there...
Madhu will get better very soon actually


It was a very pleasant surprise that he is a doctor. I really like that. Oh boy we will get to see more of her evilness, that has got to be entertaining. I am glad Madhu is going to get better soon. I saw your earlier reply, I had to comment on this FF because it is very well written, and I really like the story, both the characters have different shades to them. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Two more chapters...I am actually enjoying writing Rishbala scenes... these two chapters and future two chapters you will come accross a lot of that husband wife banter...let me know if you are getting bored of it...but i hipe you will enjoy it.
Chapter 24

" What do you expect in those results?? And address her as Madhu , don't be bittuji.."

While talking to Aniket he started playing with the table calendar on the table, something striked him.

Aniket :- r you listening Rishabh??

RK:- Huh…..Yes , OH I was thinking about something else. What were you saying??

Aniket:- Although all her other Vitals are normal but her creatinine and uric acid etc are on the higer side.

RK:- Low protein and low salt….But she is a vegetarian she hardly consumes protein. Yet I will see to it. When do the other reports come.

Aniket:- some tomorrow but the cultures will take 2 more days.

RK:- When can she go home?

Aniket:- as such she is fine now, we just need to finish with this bottle of saline and 1 more after that she can go home, she needs to rest.

RK:- I will go home.

Aniket:- see you will come for another round around 12:00 PM. Rishabh aamm…. I had never thought that you would ever look a women in the eye after dipali. I am glad you found a life partner like her. She is a wonderful woman. CONGRATS

RK:- Ahaan …. her vital parameters and her blood reports indicate that….

Aniket:- You waking up all night for her indicates that . I had read the entire episode that happened a fortnight back …you were with her weren't you.

RK:- See you later DR Trihaan. RK escaped his friends piercing gaze.

RK went home to change.

Madhu's room in the hosp

Madhu:- Mallik what is the date today.

SM:- I don't know

She looked at the IG

Madhu:- Papa……

IG:- you may not be able to attend it tomorrow but you will have many more to come in your life. For now take care of your self.

They left the room one by one. Padmini hugged Madhu , she wanted to stay back, but SM said

SM:- come back later after changing and eating something. Abhi ghar chalo she needs to rest if you stay back here she will keep on talking.

Madhu:- Mama you go I am fine. Malik is right come back later.
SM gave her a kiss on her forehead. And all of them left.

RK came around 12:30 with her lunch. She was fast asleep. He saw that her drip was nearly done. Just then Dr. SS Trihan came in. He got up, and bowed his head to wish him. His gesture felt alien to him. It had been ages since he ever moved in this fraternity, It had been ages since he gave any respect to his seniors, then why now? He did not wanted to deal with this question.

SSt:- You want her discharged today,

RK:- You think there is a problem. (his tone had changed , it was back to same old arrogant RK)

SST:- Not exactly but she needs rest actually bedrest and…..

RK:- I will take care of what ever she needs. Do we need any more Drips or injections.

SST:- no not as of now. Just her routine insulin should suffice, no sugar no carbs, and low protein, he looked at him

It appeared as RK wanted to ask him something so he asked

SST:- you want to ask something,

RK:- Na..h no what would I??

SST:- then finish all the formalities for her discharge at the reception, I have signed her discharge summary after that you are free to go.

RK:- Yes Alright?

He wanted to say thankyou but the word stuck in his throat.

SST:- Thankyou, Have a great day?

Madhu:- Thankyou sir

SST was taken aback

SST:- you are awake,

Madhu:- did not want to interfere in your conversation. I had a question??

SST:- sure you do, shoot. He pulled her lower lids to check her eyes.

She looked fine now. The signs of dehydration were gone. He looked relieved.

Madhu:- why do I need bed rest. I feel soo good now.

SST:- you feel good because you are good. As such all is well except your creatinine and uric acid. As of now I am convinced that a low protine diet would help with that. You need to see a nutritionist to actually find out what and how much to eat. Now for the bed rest, you were in a state of diabetic coma. Though reversible, it could be fatal. Your situation was spurred by a shock. In situations like this the hormones take time to get back to normal. That what would be a normal thing for you in other days could be a shock in these next few days. I suggest you ask your husband. He will be able to explain it to you with full details, after all he is a doctor.

Madhu looked at him with gaping mouth.

SST:- Sister take of all the drips and the monitors. You shall be free to go in a few minutes

Madhu was still looking at him with open mouth. He left, what both of them did not notice was RK's discomfort at the way Madhu and SST were talking. He was soo ready to blast him away.

RK:- khud hi kaha shock na lage aur khud hi super shock de kar chale gaye….

BIWI …

No response

BiWi……

Silence again

Biwi wo kya hai ki tumhare monitors yeh bata rahey hain ki tum bilkul theek thak saans le rahi ho to yeh acting band karo….overacting zda lag rahi hai.

He came close to her and put his thumb in her gaping mouth.

She immediately pulled back and bit his thumb.

RK:- I thought macchar jaye use accha mera angootha.

Madhhu:- RK is it a joke….

RK:- obviously BIWI…..

Madhu:- RK the doctor…

RK…The superstar….. don't forget that. A superstar only can provide you with all that a woman would want….

Madhu:- Woman what woman which woman…... RK really tell me……

She held RK's sholders but instead of his shoulders she gripped onto a handful of his shirt.

Madhu :- Tell me ( screamed) Are you a doctor??

RK:- what I am or what I am not is none of your concern. Keep your hands off me…and remember this never ever question me….I am not answerable to you.

He pulled her drip out. She grimaced in pain. He immediately put a cotton ball on it. And pressed it slightly so as to prevent bleeding. She did not press further.

RK:-This bag has clothes for you to change, get ready fast. I don't have whole day. ( he handed her a bag and asked the nurse to help her change)

Madhu:- she opened the bag and saw a beautiful red anarkali in it. She loved it but she was another sulky soul whom only God could help. She said to RK

Madhu:- I don't wear all this kind of chamkila stuff.

RK:- You will wear what I want. I said I don't have all day…

Madhu:- I will wear my tshirt and PJs I was wearing at night.

RK:- ok here it is he handed her the t shirt.

Madhu opened the tshirt it was all chopped of in front…

Madhu:- who did this to my fav t shirt….

RK:- I did it when you passed away in the bedroom at night….silly the nurses did it to change you into this gown.

Madhu:- but why??

RK:- because they had all the time in the world to take it off Mrs Madhubala Rishabh Kundra and change her lovingly into this hospital gown so that they could carry one with those life saving drips and the monitors ……Baat karti hain.

She growled..

Madhu:- I will wear the suit.

RK:- wow How intelligent ab jaane ka kya lengi aap..he gestured the nurse again for help.

In a while she was ready to go. When RK saw her his breath stuck in his throat. She looked beautiful beyond imagination. Flawless skin, the most beautiful eyes ever, and no jewellery other than the mangalsutra. He remembered one of the poems where it is said that a woman looked most beautiful when she was going to make love to her husband,even though she was not adorned by jewels at that time because she found them an obstacle in her expression of love. The sheer intensity of her passion gave her a brilliance worth a million diamonds together. Some thing constricted RK's heart, He could feel desire racing in his veins but he needed to reign in his desires. He looked away from her. She was not some ordinary acquisition instead she was that precious sapphire, imperative for his luck and life. Madhubala was not unaffected by the burning eyes that he had casted on her. She too knew that what she was trying to evade was bound to happen if not today then tomorrow. It was to difficult for her to keep her mind in control when she was around him. All she wanted was for him to accept that he loved her. For he loved her that she was certain of, women's instinct after all.

When she was about to walk to the exit of the hospital. Rk went behind her and gripped her by the shoulder. She looked at him with irritation and

Madhu:- What ? she literally barked out her frustration.

RK:- whaaat?? I was going to pick you up ,Someone is in a mood to bite

Madhu :- yes don't touch me and don't come near me or mujhse bura koi nahi hoga.

RK:- Ohh really…Kya kar lengi aap…

Madhu :- don't you dare think I am a woman……she literally snarled again..

RK:- fingers crossed my love ( RK was thoroughly enjoying her temper)… But I thought you were, a woman when I married you and you f…e..l..t.. also like a woman. Trust me I am experienced enough to tell the difference.

Madhu:- I meant weak woman..

RK :- Ahaan I will remember you belong to the khandan of Hercules and within a second he lifted her up in his arms.

Madhu:- Put me down RK I am telling put me down this instant.

RK:- I always do what I want not what others want…ok so stop fighting and making a show of us outside ….

RK:- Ouch ….yeh kya badtameeze hai..

Madhu:- you asked me Pati but FYI I am not answerable to you.

He still had the pained look on his face and she had a victorious smile on hers. She had actually dug all 10 nails in his neck really hard. Had it been any harder and she would have drawn blood.

Madhu:- I always do what I want whether they like it or they don't is none of my concerns.

She smiled innocently again

RK Looked at her in deadly way, though he kept silent but Madhu knew that this would be repaid sooner or later. What would be the price is just anybody's guess.

RK brought Madhu to the car and drove home with her.

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