A New Story SS Maybe FF depending on help i get :) - Page 2

hmmm madhu hating dutta...? hard 2 imagine cos she reali loved him in the shw...but anyway looking fwd 2 the story..

Chapter 1

I am so sorry that I haven't updated I've had a lot of family stuff going on and school work that I didn't have time. I know it's a lame excuse but I truly am sorry. I'm really glad by the comments I've gotten. Honestly they've really helped cause I thought this story was gonna be a bust J

Again I'm really sorry for neglecting you guys. Please do forgive and support me.

Here goes :

Dutta shreeram patil's life was never fair on him, at a very early age he lost his mother. (she didn't die she left her husband because she knew where her husband was heading for which was being a gangsta lol ) His father being a drunkard at the time never gave him anything a father would give a child. Dutta being a young child was hungry for love. His father Damador was forced to give up his son after entering the mafia business. Being left alone Aye Sahib and her husband took little Dutta in and raised him like their own. They never let him feel that he didn't have parents. They themselves said we now are your parents. Aye Sahib and her husband Baba Saheb gave Dutta the love and affection he was striving for. Being so young he could barely remember his mother now his father out of the picture he didn't want to remember his own parents. He with open arms accepted Aye Sahib and Baba Saheb his everything. After losing his everything in return he gained a real family he was hoping for.

Baba Saheb lived two lives. One being a ruthless gangster and second protecting his family. Baba never wanted dutta to enter this business but things took a dramatic turn when he caught seema cheating on him. Who is Seema. His lady love he thought was gonna marry and settle down with. But guess what this girl broke his heart into million pieces and taunted he actually thought he was gonna marry her. It's not that she didn't want love she also wanted money too! (bi**h I know) since she didn't wish to spend her life with a struggling man like dutta she left him heart broken.

That day the young innocent, playful, full of hope dutta died.

Dutta ShreeRam Pati a ruthless gangster was born. He like Baba Saheb joined the Mafia.

The innocent boy that once lived in him died. He no longer smiled or hoped! Most of all he lost hope in his dreams.

He no longer cared for happiness. The only thing he cared for now was making money and living a luxurious life for his family.

Dutta Bahu that's all he was known for now!

A strong powerful man that ruled Patil Vardi.

Thank You guys for reading. Please help me for the next update. I'm kinda stuck. I don't mind if you guys would like to write updates. Feel free. Please excuse the spelling mistakes!

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good start ..all the best 👍🏼

Kinno

kinno please cont.

Okay I'm gonna be totally be honest with you guys I know nothing about working the forum 😭 stupid I Know
I don't even know how to put it as a new update!
If i make mistakes please help me out and don't be mad
Thank you guys for your comments they've encouraged me alot!
I was hoping that if you guys would like to write stuff on your behalf too
it's totally fine with me 😳

Originally posted by: kinno

Okay I'm gonna be totally be honest with you guys I know nothing about working the forum 😭 stupid I Know
I don't even know how to put it as a new update!
If i make mistakes please help me out and don't be mad
Thank you guys for your comments they've encouraged me alot!
I was hoping that if you guys would like to write stuff on your behalf too
it's totally fine with me 😳

looking frwd😃

Hi kinno
nice start😊.looking forward for the next part...