A New Story SS Maybe FF depending on help i get :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Okay Ladies and Gentlemen for starters I know I'm really late on writing FF's and SS for this drama but I've been thinking about this story for a while know and I've been kinda wanting to share it with someone. With you guys help and support I would like to start a FF for this show.

I have to be honest there were a lot of times where I really didn't like this show and there were some where I'd wish some things would have happened differently.

So let me start from my perspective

Prologue:

Story starts of with Dutta saving Nakusha at the docks. His men along with Baji defeated Morey and his loyal inspectors. Morey was close to being dead, unconscious after a full on beating Dutta saves Nakusha and her Family.

Nakusha- havano ki basti mein a gareeb larki that's hidden behind black soot that everyone sees but never sympathizes

Dutta- full on gangster (lol) very powerful and dumb as I like to call it

Baji- dutta's right hand man, friend, brother, wife sometimes lol, most of all family

Madhu-dutta's real sis that no one knows about Damador's daughter. In the story Madhu's gonna hate Dutta

3 witches sorry sisters (lol) kala, leela, roop

Damador Patil 'dutta's and madu's father (also gangster)

Aye Saheb- mother of all mothers hehe naah very sweet lady loves dutta more than 3 real daughters

Supriya- rishta teh with dutta but you know whats gonna happen so why tell more lol

Well that's pretty much the main charcters right know

I know this story sounds like the show or like any other stupid story but please with your help I would like to write a story I can be proud of. Please free to write in and out what ever you like or continue where I leave off I would really appreciate it. Please excuse my spelling errors my hindi is really poor in spelling 😆

Please continue and help me write this SS maybe even a FF 😊

Happy Readings!

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jedy25 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi kinno

superb idea start writing me & my gang will read for sure 😊pls do continue

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi kinno
your idea is good ..you can only do justice seriously give a try love to read it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kinno, go for it mate, this forum has many people who love any form of writing based on LTL1.. best wishes.. yes please do start.. like the prologue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dear kinno
Great idea!, bring it on friend, its a welcome addition to the forum.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi kinno
waiting for ur ff😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yes thanku we would like a new FF , kinno, hope u can start soon looking forward to it.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi kinno
start a new FF...u have our support...pls don't leave it incomplete😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dutta & naku kids of two waring dons

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi kinno start a ff😊

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