VIRMAN SS : PS I STILL LOVE YOU... completed - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is awesome love you concept continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
hey naina it was an awesome😊 continue soon nd do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved d starting of d ss and
Specially starting dialogues ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is fab yar...she is really married? Awww poor virat...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMGGG ur stories rock man!!!! Loveee it!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg!!!! naina u r 😃...what shuld i say..😉. u r incredible:)😉⭐️
i loved every bit of this story...😳
manvi is married... omg!!! that was a shocker for us..😲. but really looking forward to see what is going to happen next...
i think manvi's husband isnt a good person...😡 thats why she was out lying unconsious on road that too so late night...🤢
vanshika and virat's convo was best..👏. the way she cares and felt the pain of her son was so touching...😭😊
in all this SS is a all time HIT:):):)😛
thanks 4 pm dear:)🤗
please update next part soon:)...😉 waiting for ur next pm...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow naina a new ss from u😊
it's amazing yaar and manvi got married to someone else but why😔
hmm feeling very sad for poor virat
brilliant work dear👏👏👏
plz cont soon and thanks for the pm😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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WAOOO one more amazing SS from u... dear it was superbly amazing... loved it 2 the core... i can't tell u that how much i liked it...👏👏... hawww manvi is married... y they became apart??? y she married someone else??? by whome she got married??? what has gone wrong b/w virat n manvi??? ufff so many questions but u can only answer it... plz give us the second part as fast as u can... m dying plzzz😭😭... sorry 4 late commenting... THNX 4 THE PM... plz continue ASAP.. m begging u plzzz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys love you all... really...!!!!
woowww i am soo happy that i cant tell u...
42 comments n 851 views...
and i havent even replied to even a single comment...
sorry i am a little busy but dnt worry i will reply to each n every comment...
you all made my day by this kind of awesome response...
hugs and kisses to all...
thanks to all the ones who commented, to all the one who liked and also the ones who are silent readers...
thanks once again guys and sorry if i missed out anyone by mistake...
and and now its time for special mention
its none other than my bestie ...nikki_vijay... and preetipc and shilpa09...
part 2 in few minutes... 😊
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so here it goes... i know u guys were eagerly waiting for this part... hope i reach up to your expectations...
Part 2
"I just looked at her, feeling utterly empty. I didn't know what I was supposed to say to her. My life is in that bed. Please let me stay..."
virat looked at manvi who was lying lifeless in his bed. he always wanted to see her there but not in the lifeless state in which she was now. his heart was aching badly at the thought of she in that state. its not that there was any kind of briuse or mark on her face or hands but still something was seriously wrong with her and virat was trying to figure out the reason but all in vain. he stepped closer to manvi and sat near the bed. he was seeing her as if he was looking at her for the very first time. he smiled remembering that everytime he looked at her, he felt like he was looking at her beautiful face for the very first time. but his smile faded as his eyes landed on the sindoor on her forehead and he hurriedly stepped back and stood near the window.
virat : no... its not that easy.. i thought i would live my whole life with you in this single night... but i cant.. i wanted these moments with my manna and not with somebody else's wife. mom was right... you dont belong to me any longer manna... i shouldnt be doing this to u and to viren. i shouldnt come between you two. it would just spoil your marriage... i know i shouldnt be keeping you here with me tonight but i cant let you go. last time i let u go but this time i dont feel like. i remember u said that ' there is love in holding and there is love in letting go ' but this time i want to be selfish. i want to hold on to you... i am very lonely manvi and i want my love back. i want my happiness back. i have tried very hard as i promised you but it is killing me every minute. everyday i wake up with your name on my lips. every night i try to sleep with your thought on my mind but i cant sleep.The mornings greet me and the nights might bid me to sleep.. and yet, the sweetness of the morning breeze… and the sparkle of the night air is not the same... there is a feeling of something missing... an emptiness…. i just wish like having the most hectic days of my life.. because it gives me a chance to fill a void that is always present within me but …as the day slows down… the memory of your love catches up.. and the longing of this aching heart begins to creep up within …and the hope that someday we both will be together again is the only thing that keeps me going. i dont wish like coming back to home, i feel like roaming here and there whole night... because when i will come back home and look at the moon from my bedroom window it would remind me of the nights we spent talking to each other looking at the moon and of all the times we would sit in the moonlight dreaming of our future together unaware of what was in store for us in destiny... i should call up viren.. yes i should call him right now...
virat took his mobile from his pocket and was about to dial viren's number, when he heard a voice.
' stop... dont do this... think of yourself... be selfish... live these moments... live the night you have always dreamt of... u know what this moment of yours, this dream of yours will be over and shattered with the first ray of the sun tomorrow morning... there is a pain u often feel, which is caused by the absence of manvi... hold her hand and live all those moments so that you can live the rest of your life with the memories of this very night..."
virat saw an exact copy of his sitting at the couch and talking to him. he was certainly a lover in him who was telling him to have his share of happiness...
virat : i think you are right... this night is mine... only mine... i will live every second of this night with manvi beside me. i will lock up the memories of this night in my mind and my heart forever and it will help me sustain my life.
virat wiped his tears and again made his way to the bed and sat on the floor. he forwarded his hand to touch his angel but again stopped. he closed his eyes and took manvi's hand in his hand. the very next moment he felt shivers running down his spine and could feel the warmth radiating from her body. he opened his eyes and looked at manvi. he immediately left her hand and checked her forehead for fever. she was burning in fever... no in high fever. virat got up and went outside. he went to his parents room and whispered " mom..."
vanshika got up and opened the door in a second. her first ever priority was her son virat.
vanshika came out of the room and asked virat what was wrong...
virat : manvi has high fever... i am scared.
vanshika : let me go n check.
virat : hmm..
vanshika was a doctor by profession but left her practice after virat's birth.
vanshika was checking manvi...
virat : mom is she ok...??
vanshika : dont worry its just a fever.. she will be alright... i will just give her some medicine...
virat : no.. she hates taking medicines...
vanshika : then what will you do...???
virat : anything that is required but not medicines...
vanshika : ok i will get u a bowl of lukewarm water and put wet cloth on her forehead... she will be fine...
virat : thank you mom...
vanshika : take care virat...
whole night virat kept changing the wet cloth and did it till her temperature came down to normal. he held her hand and kissed her forehead. he securely held her hand in his and his mind went back for a walk into the memory lane.
he remembered how they met first through a common friend shilpa.how he fell for her harder everytime he met her. slowly they fell in love and confessed on valentines day. they were so happy in their small world. talking to each other whole day long, going on dates, long drives, playing with harami, our cute little monkey...
and one day hell broke lose on them. manvi's parents got to know of their relationship and her dad strictly disapprove of their relationship as virat didnt belong to their status and her dad couldnt marry his daughter to a guy who was less than them in status. manvi opposed her dad a lot and even told him that she would leave the house if he didnt let her marry virat. her dad in turn warned manvi that if she ever try n do something like this, he would completely disown her. manvi was really not concerned because for manvi money was a necessity of life and not life. for manvi love was life. she tried very hard to convince her dad but of no use. one day her dad gave manvi his swear and forced her to marry viren singhania (son of his business partner) else he would kill himself and manvi would be held responsible for it. manvi called virat one day and said that she wants to meet him. virat went to meet her thinking that his manna must have convinced her parents and sourted everything but who knew that it was their last meeting.

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