Once Upon A Time...RT-MC FF - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update dear
just luvd it
it feels like m back 2 DV days
so the trio r cumng back frm gurukul
yeh dekho apna veer toh veer hi rahega na!
ever challenging and daring!
Arey koi isko batao yeh superman hain toh kya sab superman honge? rest bhi jaruri hain bhai.
Awe! poor kanha! finally veer melt with his pleading face.
m so damn sure its shera/ananya whom veer has seen on the opposite side of the temple
haye kab hogi mulaqat?
Nah! dear boy she was reality...reality of ur life n not a mere illusion.
update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
oops how can i miss a periodic like this..will follow this definitely
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Posted: 13 years ago
thaks for update
sorry for late comment
so all in palace n tribal all buzy in decoration to welcome three prince
love kanha he must be golumolu!!
and is tht shera-mugz?
the description wall beautiful

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Posted: 12 years ago

that was really adorable part..

loved it..

cont. soon,...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

Whenever i read this story, d days of DV started to flash infront of my eyes. Seriously i like dis story... Nd i must say u r a fab writter whether it is os or ff, u write too well.

Do ud soon...


thank u so much pari...i m really glad that i m able to make u go through those days...
thanks for commenting...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

res..
wil edit soon..

~~EDITED~~

kinna acha caha tha..
dv days ki yaad aa jati h jab bhi once upon a time padhti hun...

kya voh dinn vaps aayenge.. rtmc on tv???😭
missing dem badly...

chalo wid stry..
description on aryanagar streets and palace..
nivitri in temple scene.. kaamal ka likha h di aapne,
i cud visualise it..
its so much capturinf..

veer ki entry..
horse ke duad.. horse race... sand around settleing down..
handsome face cming in view, ka entry h by god...
ek dum champion wali entry...

kya voh shera thi...
haan bolo do plz..
coz veer ko voh psnd aa gyi h...
sirf jhalak hi kaafi thi shera ki veer ko latuu banane k liye, wow...
isliye tho veer bar bar dekhne ka try krr raha tha usse...

han han, chalo jaldi chalo..
aryanagar k mahal main veer ki kheer n dhram n agni ki rasmalai wait krr rhi h...

wait tho baki ghar wale bhi kerr rhe h, but .. voh sab.. kheer n rasmalai k samne itna matter nhi karta😆


desperately waiting fr their 1st meet...( me in dreamland already)

ud soon di
lov u



awww...me too miss those days sweety and don't worry they will return back on tv and that too together...
and yes that girl was shera but you will got to know more about her nature soon, she is actually different from the serial...
and about their meeting, well you guys have to wait for it...i think a little long...
thank for your lovely cmt...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago


thank you shaffy...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

that was a lovely update..

pls do update soon..

and that girl is Ananya right.

wanted to c their first meet..



yup that girl was anu but u hv to wait for their first meet
thanx for your lovely cmt :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ASRsweetKKG

👏awesome part dear

</div><div>loved it

thnx 4 the pm😊



thank u for reading it n leaving ur cmt. :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: glossyglassy

All the preparations were described beautifully by u...

I could see everything happening

Kanha is so sweet and cute

Loved the mysterious stranger...I love such scenes full of intrigue

Eagerly waiting for next part

lov u...



thank u ritu for commenting
glad u liked it :-)

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