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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome..superb Update...Loved it alot
hahah poor shiv..burning in jelousy😆
Maaneet moment were superb😳 aww geet gussa ho gayi..uff maan
awww precap/Teaser..,,🤣
maan n shiv 💔 ab kya karenge
waiting for next.continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Badha wala thank u for completing 200+ likes, really loved all the comments... 🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank u sooo very much for all te likes and comments, me actually famished with all teh love but i think my hunger will rise only... sorry for not replying individually, u know till i can reply anyone i start typing another part ;) so pls understand it... Thanks a again for those big comments, i trully loveddd them...

PS: Abir Singhaniya is actually a bengali film star in Real, his name is DEV/Depak Adhikari.. as being living in Kolkata,, i have seen Bengali films as well, so naturally in this kind of role Dev is best in my vision so i had taken him here, hope i haven't offended anyone..

Part 78

Whole day was hell for maan as geet purposely ignored him.. whenever he tried to say sorry she just walked out.. it was not enough that maahika was also angry with him, and that's why whenever he carry her she would probably cry or wet his shirt' Shiv was again busy in meetings, so he couldn't come there.. but his heart was not at peace.. remembering abir's proximity with saanjh he felt anger rushed through his vein but why he was feeling so he himself wasn't sure' and here abir was enjoying both girl's attention.. they got him after 5 yrs so ofcourse taking extra care of him'. Maan sometime envy Abir's plight, the way he was enjoying it he felt like he is doing it purposely to irritate him' but one thing was good maahika didn't like abir much, because of him her mother n massi not sparing glances towards her so it was making her angry'. That's why whenever abir tried to take maahika in his hand she would gurgle making her saliva smudged his shirt, or slap his hand, sometimes wetted his shirt.. she would shook her head indicating she doesn't want to go to him' Abir would make faces and maan enjoyed seeing it'

Maan cancelled the meeting, so that he can be with geet who was hell annoyed with his never ending romance in front of anyone and everyone, and when she would glare him he would say he will stop once she forgive him' though geet was enjoying the attention but sometime it become hell embarrassing' he would occasionally call her in the room for anything n everything' family all knew something is cooking up between two but the most teasing person was abir who silently made her face flushed with his teasing smirk'

Geet entered the room for the ninth time'

Geet: ufff maan huya kya?

Maan: geet I couldn't find the file, please help me.

Geet: which file

Maan: Mehra's

Geet looked at the bed where the file was lying,, she took the file and saw all the work was done.. she looked at maan angrily while maan gave her baby pleading look'

Geet: I m telling u for the ninth time, don't waste ur n my time' she was going from the room when he pulls her wrist.. with the force she collide with his hard chest'.

Though she was angry but his closeness always makes her lose herself, she tried to push him but he slipped his hand in her bare waist bringing her close' she looked at his desire filled eyes, something crunched in her stomach' a deep shade of red hue covered her cheeks as his eyes roamed on her plump lips' his finger laced on her soft skin making her throat dry, her chest touched his as he was pulling her closer to him.. her palm clutched the collar of his shirt tightly in a fist.. she saw the mischievousness on his face'.

Geet: don't think u can pacify me by seducing'

Maan: do I need to seduce u? he said rather mischievously' just then she felt his breath near her earlobe, she tried to suppress her moan but nothing helped'

Geet: maan' her whisper made him smile victoriously, he felt her surrender herself.. he kissed her neck softly, then nipped her earlobe.. she clutched his shoulder' her breath was quick, her aroma was so intoxicating that he felt he will lose himself.. he placed few open mouth kisses around her jaw'

Maan: u can make me mad for u,, I love u so much' he whispered desperately' his hand rubbed her breast above the saree, squeezed it softly' he groans dipping his face in her neck.. she tried to resist him but nothing helped her as she felt warmness spreading her body' maan saw her vulnerable state.. he controlled his desire and kissed her forehead' she felt frustrated as he stopped,, she scratches his shoulder'

Geet: I hate u'. she said irritatingly..

Maan smiles: I love u' just few days more'

Geet: I hate u more'

She tried to push him but he held her in his arm, locking his both hand on her waist'.

Maan: I m sorry, maaf kar do na abb? It brought back the reality, she didn't said anything but some kind of pain was in her eyes,, he sighed and placed his forehead on her.. I know how it feels, u were good with me, I was feeling like strangling sujal' a small smile came on her lips hearing his honest confession, how can she be angry with him knowing he is truly sorry for unknowingly hurting her'

Geet: I fear to lose u maan,, I got this happiness after a lot of hardship, I don't want to lose u'

Maan: no one can separate us, trust me.. I love u a lot' she hugged him tightly fearing if she loses her grip he will vanish, he sensed her fear and tighten his grip'.

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It was dinner time and both the men specially Shiv was staring at Abir like his stare will burn him alive' he was observing saanjh n abir's closeness' shiv came here with the false work of office' maan knew he is feeling insecure and thought to help him with his feelings, but before it he need to confront geet.. he need to make her belief shiv is right for saanjh, whatever happen geet maybe forgave shiv but she can't accept him for her sister anymore. Knowing saanjh maan can say she loves him only and no other guy can take the same place as shiv'

Shiv: Maan don't u think tera ghar dharamshala ban gaya hain, jo aata hain yehi rukta hain' maan chuckled at him knowing what he meant' abir smiles at him forcefully, but evil grin was visible on his face'

Abir: yeah like u glued them like chewing gum'

Shiv: excuse me, its my nanima's house'

Geet passed the rice bowl to abir but as he was denying she put some rice in his plate.. he smiles sweetly and held geet hand..

Abir: its my geetu's house too' he said sweetly,, geet smiles but maan felt strangling him for holding his wife's hand' he glared at geet who chuckled at him, then his anger goes on abir who immediately left her hand'

Shiv murmured: pata nahi kab tak chipka rahega

Abir: ohh I forgot, why I m here.. Geetu Sanju pack ur bags we are going rano massi's house next morning for further marriage preparation'

Maan chocked his food on his plate where shiv by chance lost the grip on glass and it fell on the dining table making everything shattered' maan glared at shiv who was just dumbfounded with the new information..

Shiv: what do u mean?

Abir: Its ritual, and rano massi told me to come with them.. that's why I m here' he smiles cheekily looking at maan to shiv and shiv to maan'.

Nt spoke then: can't u guys talk after dinner,, abir tried to help to control the mess but nt stop him' Aree Abir ye aap kyun kar rahe ho, we are here na,, we will clean it'

Abir: Bhabhi u r elder to me, in that sense I m ur brother like, so brother should help his sister na' Nt smiles at his sweet talk while dev was shocked with his wife's smile, she never shared any deep relation with her own family and here an unknown person is making her sister..

Saanjh: motu tu rehne de, I will do it'

Maan couldn't digest anything, he looked at geet who was in same state, her face was showing mix emotion, happy to meet her family and spending time with frnds but sad to leave him, he coughed to get her attention and she looked at him, he made baby face but she was helpless.. it was his plan to get married again.. due to ritual they have to be spate for 4 days'

Shiv greeted his teeth seeing abir happily smiling at them, he is indeed happy to burst the dream bubble of the 4' saanjh's face was sad as well, shiv saw her sadness but she was trying to cover it her fake smile'

Maan: but if geet will leave how will maahi live without her'

Everyone looked at him like he had grown 2 horn.. he saw everyone gaping at him and then abhinash broke in to laughter, dadima and nikita smiles knowing his condition while aniee n nt whistle'

Dev: bro maahika will be with bhabhi only na'

Maan gave his famous angry look to everyone, he definitely didn't like the idea of sending his life far'

Maan: but we can do the marriage here na?

Dadima: maan last time the marriage took place at our temple but this time I think geet's parents has the right to fulfill their dream'. Maan saw geet face, she indeed want a wedding in her own house. He agreed grumpily and left the dinner table' shiv gave a look to geet 'its because of abir' and then he too left the place'

Aniee: ye lo, abb inhe kya huya

Abir: mirchi lagi' he said while pushing one more bite in his mouth while smiling' saanjh gave him disapproving look, he just ignored, but geet was worried for maan' she excused herself and ran towards their room'.

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As geet entered the room, she saw the most serene scene, a small smile crept on her lips but her heart pained to see how maan was clutching maahika.. he never thought they have to separate for this occasion.. for the world he is the most ruthless businessman but for her he is just like a baby' maan was holding maahika and patting her to sleep. Maahika was peacefully sleeping on his chest like she got the most peaceful place'

She went close to them and placed her hand on his back, the look said how much he is feeling helpless'

Geet: maan'

Maan: Geet don't go na, how will I live without u and maahi' I can't live without u two, don't go please'

Geet: u wanted this marriage,, and we have to go by custom then?

Maan: then I will come to ur house.

Geet whined: maan'

Maan: u know angel can't stay without dadda then why u r trying?

Geet: maan its just matter of 4 day, and she will be fine'

Maan raises his eyes brow: r u sure?

Geet: hmm,, there is everyone, and in the function she will be happy, anyway u will be busy in office'

Maan: geet I m warning u if I hear my angel cried for me I swear next day u n she will be here in this room'

Geet: accha possessive dadda dekhte hain kon kaha jata hain'

Maan: Geettt,,,

Geet giggle,, he kissed maahika's chubby cheek

Maan: jana zaruri hain kya?

Geet: hmmm as per the ritual u can't see me before mahendi'

Maan: gosh its on the 3rd day. How will I live without u n angel'

Geet: u will be fine, shiv bhi hoga na'

Maan murmured: ussi ka darr hain'.

Geet: hmm kuch kaha?

Maan: no, I, wo, I will miss angel'

Geet: hawww miss angel only not her mumma? U r so mean maan, chalo hatto,, I will talk to u, even don't see ur face'. rehlo mere beigar'

Maan pulls her hand and she came directly on his chest, she saw maahi snuggling close to her dadda'

Maan: soch lo geet, u n angel also can't live without me'

Geet: huh dekhte hain'

Maan: dekh lena..

Geet made faces and tried to take maahika but being dadda's girl she held his neck tightly'

Geet: ye bhi dal badlu hain, huh ja apna dadda ke pass,, mumma ki kya zarurat hain' she went to bed taking her place and soon maan n maahi join her on the bed snuggling close to her' after much fighting she gave up and took maahi close to her then snuggle to his chest' maan smiles at her antics then engulfed both the angel of his life'.

Precap: Maahi back in action, will she do anything to get her dadda??

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Edited by tich.1990mg - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
🥳

Loved the update
Maan n Shiv stole the show today
Hai hai Mirchi Oof oof mirchi 😈
Dinning table fiasco was awesome🤣

Maan n Shiv trying to kick out Abir
ulta he turned the tables and whisked
their three damsels😳😆

Aw Maaneet temporary seperation😒
Maan cranky🥺 n Geet confused😕
Shiv livid😡 n Saanjh unhappy😔
and Maahi umm 🤔
I guess will have to wait for the next update

Precap exciting😎
Dadda's angel Maahi in action🤣
can we expect Abir in trouble

Continue soon
😃
Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update

this shiv and maan ufff reaIIy pagaI hain pyar mein

shiv does nt knw tat he is in love with sanjh

me waiting fr mahi action
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update ...maan n shiv lol
wow maahi on action gr8
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊I think Mahi is the main attention graber in this story...
loving it hey
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
truly loved it...
Aww geet is angry from maan...
Maan is manofy his angel's mumma...
Loved their romance...and nok-jhok...
Loved abir too he is sooo cute...
Aww shiv is jealous from abir...
Maan too...
Well abir stay away from saanj and geet varna vo dono tumeh kacha kha jayege...
Table fiasco was awesome...
Maan and geet had to seperate for weeding...
Well maan grumpy and geet is confused...
Shiv jealous and frustrated and saanj unhappy too becoz of seperation...
Well shiv really need a push for relieasing his feelings for saanj and i thik maan can do that...
Aww mahi can't live without his dadda...
Now dadda and mahi in action...
I relly want a seen in which both dadda and mahi trouble abir and shiv can also help them...can i expect this scene plzzz...
Precape is interesting...wating...
Continue soon...
I don't really think so story is boring...its quite interasting and in this story our cute little dadda's princess mahi is story stoler...:)
Edited by mish123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW LOVED THE WAY MAAN AND SHIV WAS TESED BY ABHIR😆.WAITING FOR D NXT UPDATE
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Posted: 12 years ago
hii i just love the update
maaneet momemnt are superb
continue soon

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