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i just realized, i haven't commented in a while, so i thought why not give it a shot today. lol, anyways, that was TOTALLY AMAZING!!!!!! lol, plz do continue soon!!!

aditee THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!
Bani Bani Bani don't you realoze that you can't win with Jai Walia!!! 😉

OK, thanx all u Afians who propelled Adi to commence & continue with the ff. It has now attained the dimensions of a full fledged novel and riveting one to boot.

Adi, thanx for liking the review .Ur ff inspires my Muse. U possess far more important ingredients for producing this ff…literary elan & perceptiveness. Keep keying in our fix of OUR ff .

CAT

Awesome aditee. Nice to see B all comfy around JW, enough to let go of her mask. 0h how she dares him, darti nahin na. Her funny side, guessing darshan got engaged.. so funny. Fits Prachi to the T as bani. Oh, so she is counting the days..
Loved it. thanks

Hi Aditee,

i was reading the entire FF again and God your JW is one and only one in entire universe. He is just too good.

each part has something will make me blush and blush and blush. i have been living in this JW fatasis for 6 months now and can not get my self out of it.

you name it every time either it is driving, reading a book to my daughter, cooking i think about him.
rereading this again and again. sometimes few parts some times just few lines within parts makes my day.

I know you have started working have a family of your own so can not force you into updating this everyday but hay please do not stop updating. please continue soon.

waiting for the next.

pooja
p.s. i know i am not your one of the best replyer how ever i am silent reader.

hey adi! that was great once again! but do i really have to say that? 😉 im sure u must know this already! adi that was an amazing part! i hope u continue soon! 😊

hi Aditee,

can you please do this. it is a request.
let sanjana see/hear the conversation between both of them specially in the most comporomizing situation.
i know that will be end of the part but you can still add that.
one more scene she is falling from stool or something and jw catches her. (i know that has happen in real how ever would like to see how you can put it in words). (rember Aiana movie)

i have a long list but this will do for now.

pooja

,my storytelling is proving to be adequate diversion for you compared to the inspid fare on tv each nite......... I agree with u.😃

Thank you all Mumbaikars for loving the trip down memory lane! I LOVED that city! 😆 I had "help" with the MMB, JAG and ofcourse the ganna waala! 😉 Thanks Sowmya!! Thanks to both of u.It means Mumbai trip is finished here.Sometimes I m too greedy.😡Ignore me.
I am trying to take JW & B to my "ilaaka", 😆 i.e.,(ilaaka sounds like 'Shaitani ilaaka' one of the Ramsay's horror movies.😆)
Delhi,I love Delhi.I visited it twice.If possible take them to 'Sight seeing' of Taj Mahal, Agra.( like Bangkok)😉I know my ideas 🤢.'Romantic Place' hai na isliye yaad aaya.😳
but pata nahi kab hoga, I cud write that one in my sleep.......... hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm


Cat, its not "my" tale its "ours", my AF sakhis egged me on to continue to write and write and write some more 😉 Loads of thanks & love to them for gifting us a wonderful FF.👏
Warna right after part 1 is quest ko abandon kar deti. ENTIRE CREDIT goes to them. I just bring to paper what they want to read abt........
U r too humble.God bless u.😛

Saniya, Iam sorry its messing up ur cooking, not intended to be that way at all. Love ur reviews and comments.
I know it was not ur intention but JW from ur FF is so...!Ab mai kya bolu.😳😳😳I can not stop thinking about him.U know na from 3rd OCT06 , he is my new BF.🤗
AAAAAA! 'sorry' mat bolna,😭yeh 'Dixit family' ki 'Nahi' jaise ho raha hai.Mai bahot baar bol chuki hun .😆Ab tum mat suru hona..😳
I am glad we all have found a tiny niche that helps us escape from drudgery of daily life! Very true.I m very glad that the writer is feeling the same.😃😉
Writing this FF is mine, hope reading it helps lower the boredom factor of real life😡.........Its really working😃

Thanks Adi.I do just 'blurting'.Me too is really thankful to CAT, for doing fabulous reviews regulary.She justifies ur work.👏

Originally posted by: catcat

OK, thanx all u Afians who propelled Adi to commence & continue with the ff. It has now attained the dimensions of a full fledged novel and riveting one to boot.

Adi, thanx for liking the review .Ur ff inspires my Muse. U possess far more important ingredients for producing this ff…literary elan & perceptiveness. Keep keying in our fix of OUR ff .

CAT

Cat,

Most def Aditees FF has attained the status of full fledged novel as you so aptly said!

Aditee...loved this new section! You have not only brought to life the character of JW that we have all fantasized about, but also a Bani, who is his match in every way. Your attention to detail, the lovely, spunky banter between the two, the touches, the looks, the atmosphere of Mumbai...all is brought to life to defltly! Its amazing to read...and quite an experience.

As one of the first readers of this FF... I can only say,....the rides been wonderful as a reader.... I can't wait to see what happens next.

Soapaddict