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All I can say is 👏
You are a master at words Aditee...

Aditee,

I am new here.....and shall I say how much I regret not reading this before.....😭 But on the other hand, its good that I got to read so much in one go and didn't have to go crazy waiting and waiting for the next part...😃 (I couldn't wait for you to post the 45 part, when I read 1-44 only on Saturday)

I simply loved the story till now.....Loved is actually quite an understatement, more like I was stumped, bowled and lots more....The Banter, the Chemistry, the attention to details, the way JWs' hair curls when its wet😳 You have formed a perfect image of your version of JW....It is so well described, that I can see him just in front of my eyes (Like the way JKR saw Harry Potter fully formed when she first thought about him) and have to say, that RK comes nowhere near to our guy here! Your JW is GOD incarnate!😃

I am so swooning over him.....and no, its not just about looks, its his wit, his anger, his power of persuasion, his masculinity, his sensitivity and so much more! Coming back to the author, your mastery over words, the detailing (which is a class apart in itself) the story flow, use of wit and humor (Very, Very Good) and the sexual tension(Can't forget Bangkok Episode😳) between J&B is simply OUTSTANDING!👏

Ok, now I have to stop....I have been pestering the hell out of Poo to send me the missing links and then discussing it fulltoo detail with her😆

Will read the lastest part (Glowing reviews flowing in already) and post something then!😊

Yeh kya kar diya Aditee.....Pehle hi ek addition kam tha, ab ek obsession bhi mil gaya!

Cheers and Waiting Greedily and Impatiently for the next part,

MT

OMG the flashbacks are sooo intresting aditee.... loved them

Sec 45:

Its always a delight to read ur now "trademark" parleys b/w J &B. They never fail to amuse , each time they address a unique & novel dimension to their dalliance.
This one meanders from raillery to admonishing to exasperation to seductive to tantalizing to sometimes puerile. Janet Dailey & Atulya bit added to the piquancy of their tete a tete.

B is holding on tight to her security blanket ,the familiarity being mother to her sisters and striving very diligently to ice out the alien ,unexplored vista of being Mrs. Walia.

That brings me to the B's musing "either he annoyed her too much or he was indeed too old for her" Well B finally gets to be the "brat" and vent all her bottled up whims and be indulged by the "old" JW while concurrently having been the bedrock of the family she resents being towed around by the "annoying" JW. The irony of the situation!!

Thanx Adi for yet another helping of ur delectable tale. And may I add that ur innate esprit always spikes up that additional zest.

CAT

Thanks Aditee for these wodnerful parts.

Reading your fanfic and CAT's comments, tehy surely make my day.

👏

Hope you post soemthing soon to allow me to carry on.

Cheers

Aditee,

I have enjoyed all parts, but 44 was super..
always waiting for the next part..
you are gifted writer, may be you should think about a part time career...

awesome Aditee!! 😉
👏
plzz continue soon!

I had to read a lot to catch up.. and i must say it was really worth it!!

it was fantastic..

plz do continue!

loved the last line soo far.. so ur engaged with me!

As always, Aditee, awesome part and again, whenver i read ur updates all i start obsessing about is the next one!

GREAT GOING!!!
Pls, don't ever stop writing....

regards-armana

Thanks a lot ALL of you! Neenam, cat, nibbles, sangita, munni, fsam, jigna, and all the other "old faithfuls"😊 and thanks MT for a glowing review. Good to know,my storytelling is proving to be adequate diversion for you compared to the inspid fare on tv each nite.........

Thank you all Mumbaikars for loving the trip down memory lane! I LOVED that city! 😆 I had "help" with the MMB, JAG and ofcourse the ganna waala! 😉 Thanks Sowmya!!
I am trying to take JW & B to my "ilaaka", 😆 i.e., Delhi, but pata nahi kab hoga, I cud write that one in my sleep.......... hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Cat, I need a pre-paid voucher for lessons in English language and a dictionary from Santa for Christmas plz..... (SINCERELY! I mean it). Your reviews are astounding!
Cat, its not "my" tale its "ours", my AF sakhis egged me on to continue to write and write and write some more 😉
Warna right after part 1 is quest ko abandon kar deti. ENTIRE CREDIT goes to them. I just bring to paper what they want to read abt........

Saniya, Iam sorry its messing up ur cooking, not intended to be that way at all. Love ur reviews and comments.
I am glad we all have found a tiny niche that helps us escape from drudgery of daily life! Writing this FF is mine, hope reading it helps lower the boredom factor of real life......... by a notch or two for you all.

LOTS AND LOTS OF THANKS
A