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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: pooja1_76

hi aditee,

this is the best part this brings back my memory of that churchgate and all other places i visited.
the details make me think i am their in person watching the whole sceen. specially the one where JW telling her can't drink that ganna's juice and pushing her in car.

this is amezing.
please continue soon.

pooja

Same here.😛
Aditee, I really loved the way Banee is acting like a kid & JW pampering her.😳
It's really sweet to see.Plz continue it.

Mai toh chahti hun ke woh' Mere Belgian Choclates kahan hai kar ke ro pade!'😭😆Phirse JW pamper kare.

BTW what happened to that choclates?

Waiting for the next parts.
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Posted: 18 years ago
too good Adi!...ur JW cud write a book on "how to wriggle an admission out of your stubborn girlfriend" 😆 ....love the way he corners her everytime...she is really testing his patience now!....High time u forget Atulya girl(not that u wud ever choose him over JW!), if you want to see him live to play with his grandchildren! 😆...awesome as usual!

love
Ritika.
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Posted: 18 years ago
What can i say im at a loss of words for the first time in my life..it waz just magnificent...the back forth taunts are too good and funnie..plz plz continue soon..your fanfic is one dat i will never forget to read...great job hun! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
lovely update aditee ........ lage raho, the flashbacks are turning out to be quiet a trip down memory lane, am enjoying each and every part ...... bani kabhi nahin sudheregi, sometimes i feel she deserves a nice little whack on her bottom from jw, and ur ffwala jw ke toh kya kehne, what a relief from the one being shown on KS. thanks for the treat dear.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Amazing Adu,

Jai needs to put Bani in the swimming pool for being so stubborn. Really love her childish tempers.


Loved the way he corners her for accepting THEIR engagement 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
just superb 👏 .Plzzzzzz continue soon......... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Di,
Part 45 was awesome and like always left me speechless, thanks a lot,

Di pleaee...........please...........please...update soon, I know that I am becoming very greedy but I am helpless, please continue soon and give us freash oxyzen to breath..........

Khusboo

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Posted: 18 years ago

Hai😳...........Love Jai Walia in your FF - especially as he's trying to control his anger around Bani's childish behaviour!

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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 😆 😆 .Fantastic adi (Part 45). 👏
How to handle a stubborn girlfriend by behaving more stubborn than she is. 😛 😳 He always wins.😳
Who would not like to get defeated by this way? 😉
(Banee dear keep it up with ur tantrums.They r always profitable for u,JW & us.)
Loved the way he is chance maroying, 😆 (sorry for the Hinglish),she was getting irritated,Suggesting about D's presence( by eye moments),He, holding her hand to irritate her to the death😳, finally the favourite 'Clip attack'.
One more thing, the way she was hiding the 'Novel' from him. 😆 So cute!(this kind of scene will really suit to Prachi.It reminded me Ram-Prachi doing the fun on the sets. 😳 )
Bas!😡 Enough of my 'Popatpanchi'. I can go on & on....
Tum likhti hi aisa ho! 😛
I told u na, that how much ur FF affects me these days. 😆 Yeh 'part' padhne ke baad mai 'cooking' kar rahi thi,(These two were in my mind) 😳 OMG! I was pouring the oil in the wrong pan.'Bartan' gira rahi thi. 😆
My mamma always catches me when I start laughing or blushing after reading ur 'FF'.
Thaks a lot.
Love
Trupti.
Edited by saniya9919 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Oh!. Posted the same messege twice.
Edited by saniya9919 - 18 years ago

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