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kashev

@kashev

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Amazing start to the story!!!

Can't wait to read more!!!

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

I simply love attitude with a capital A. It makes my toes curl...in a good way and both Arnav and Khushi have it. They are well matched, each with supreme confidence and a need to tally all scores and win. I would love to find out well they know each other and when they met, what they thought etc. they seem to know each other...question is ...how well.

Poor Akash...he is attracted...whether he likes it or not.

While I liked the update, it seems a little toned down from the electricity and the emotion of previous updates. I think the chess set is being laid out here before the players begin.

I hope I get to read this when you move it to to restricted...I would not want to get attached to a story and then have it be taken away😭.

Edited by Anamika100 - 12 years ago

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Anamika100
I simply love attitude with a capital A. It makes my toes curl...in a good way and both Arnav and Khushi have it. They are well matched, each with supreme confidence and a need to tally all scores and win. I would love to find out well they know each other and when they met, what they thought etc. they seem to know each other...question is ...how well.

Poor Akash...he is attracted...whether he likes it or not.

While I liked the update, it seems a little toned down from the electricity and the emotion of previous updates. I think the chess set is being laid out here before the players begin.

I hope I get to read this when you move it to to restricted...I would not want to get attached to a story and then have it be taken away😭.

BOOYAH! you got it :')

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Romma

@Romma

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

I am reading your work for the first time. Interesting characters & written well. Please keep me updated.

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

This is the first time that I'm reading your work. And, I'm blown away. That's the simplest I could have put it! ;-)

A very unconventional story and I'm hooked. Can't wait to read further.

Keep up the good work! :-)