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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

beautiful update
thanx for the pm...

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lalita

@BusyIndivaBee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: princess_mimi

thanks for the lovely comment dear...
u wanna try wat???
wrestling to control anger or the way Taani selected dress????😕😆

the way taani selected her dress 😆

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lalita

@BusyIndivaBee

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

tihs was superb re

swayams dream was funny

n that shivam was 🤢

continue soon!!

thanx for the pm

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

part 8

Awesome part..Loved it

thankx for pm

Edited by Gcs-girl - 12 years ago

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#275

Awesome update
Swayam is really cute lol his senses made sense to miss no nonsense...:p
Waiting for next part

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Ahhh Finally you updated. It was great to see your PM regarding the update on your FF in my PM inbox. Even it has been days this FF was imprinted back in my head especially Swayam's character. It was one of its kind approach to his character and you had nailed it. Both the update were awesome but I would prefer the second one. Because it has Swayam's dialogue in it. And as I have told you before in this FF each dialogue of Swayam has been a gem. Vicky's running commentry was nicely done and liked the word play in the end aboout Swayam's nonsense making sense to miss no non senses. Masterly done. And yeah poor Rey bhagwan mere dushmano ko bhi ye din na dikhaye. Can't wait to read further. Update soon. Is baar bhual mat jaana is FF ko.

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Simren

@DanCing_DiVa_SK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

Awesome Updates loved all the update please update the next update soon and please do PM me dear...i have sent you a buddy request please accept it.⭐️