~Half Cup Empty~ SwAroN FF part 8 updated - Page 29

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Posted: 11 years ago
Ahhh Finally you updated. It was great to see your PM regarding the update on your FF in my PM inbox. Even it has been days this FF was imprinted back in my head especially Swayam's character. It was one of its kind approach to his character and you had nailed it. Both the update were awesome but I would prefer the second one. Because it has Swayam's dialogue in it. And as I have told you before in this FF each dialogue of Swayam has been a gem. Vicky's running commentry was nicely done and liked the  word play in the end aboout Swayam's nonsense making sense to miss no non senses. Masterly done. And yeah poor Rey bhagwan mere dushmano ko bhi ye din na dikhaye. Can't wait to read further. Update soon. Is baar bhual mat jaana is FF ko.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome Updates loved all the update please update the next update soon and please do PM me dear...i have sent you a buddy request please accept it.⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey nice & cute fight

nice update loved it

thanx for PM..:D

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Posted: 11 years ago
@princess_mimi: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊