FF: The Raizada Brothers 2.0 *Ch 2 Pg 5* Coming Up

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Hi! A couple of you may be knowing me.
I just got this idea when I got up today so decided to give it a shot.

A/N: This story is my version of IPKKND if it continued after Barun left. This is MY idea and I am NOT fond of people copying my work and claiming it as theirs. If you are a new reader, please send me a buddy request for PMs on NishaSobtiPM.

I expect people whom I PM to comment or like, whether its a word to paragraphs I'm okay but I would love constructive feedback.

I humbly request those amazing authors to please take a couple of minutes and comment on my work, areas of improvement and so on. 😃

And also since I'm writing from when Barun left there will be no Arnav-Khushi for a while. I will gradually bring them in. As in my dreams I thought that Barun would come back. And the story takes a 8 month leap.

And yes beneath the banner you will see the author as DancingDiva.
No worries I'm planning to change my Username so yeah. 😆

This Fan Fiction is dedicated to the person because of whose stories I joined IF. Zara thank you so much! You are my biggest inspiration to write.

Here we go!



Written By: DancingDiva

Prologue

July 2013

New York, USA

Cupboards were flung open.Suitcases were zipped. Doors banged. Things flew. Finally they were ready to leave. A BWMer* roared to life. The airport welcomed them with open arms. The flight took off and within in 16 hours they were back where they belonged 'Mumbai'. A sleek black beast in the form of an Audi was waiting for them at the Mumbai Airport. They hopped in and they set off on their journey to the Raizada Mansion.

An hour later.

He was about to knock on the door when the door was thrown open and someone said 'bitwa'?

*BMWer is the name I call a BMW. 😳

Thats it! I know this might be the shortest prologue in history but I didn't want to introduce the characters in the prologue.

Hope you like it.

*Ducks all eggs and curses*



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Posted: 12 years ago
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PM's Criteria

This account is to added for PMs.

Please DON'T add the main account as I will reject you there.

My man account is for the authors I follow.

I will not PM silent readers as if you don't comment I am not going to take the pain to send you PM's.

Even though I have less number of friends PMs are a pain and most authors will agree.

Kindly do comment and like.
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Update Corner

This is the place you guys should be looking at to know when I will update.

I will comment here to let you guys know when I will be updating next!


Chapter 2: UPDATING IN A WHILE!
Edited by -NishaSobti- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting start..
Continue soon.. 😃
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Yaaay!! I made it to the first page 😃
Now about the FF :
Sounds interesting!
Im really looking forward for the story to open up!
All the best! 😊
and yes the prologue was the shortest in history
Il kill you for that! 😡
Cuz i really really liked what you wrote and i wanted more
Sooo not fair

Anyway thanks for the pm
And i dont know if i can comment regularly..
But i will try to..
I have my preboards going on 😭

goodluck again! Tc mwuuuah 😊
Edited by sanchi333 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey you are back with another work.
Happy about that.
Let's see what this one has in store😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kuch samaj hi nii aya prologue se so cn't give detailed comment on it...
Nd one more thing yr when u pm pls do check if d link u have added in ther is working or not coz its a headache to copy nd paste link on mobile phones...hope u tk cr of dat in ur next...cyaa...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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what the? who said "bitwa"? cliffhanger!!! 😡 😆
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Originally posted by: evrydayirabbave

what the? who said "bitwa"? cliffhanger!!! 😡 😆


Wait and watch!

But if you guess who are the people moving back I'll give you an exclusive sneek peek of chapter one what say? 😃

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