FF: The Raizada Brothers 2.0 *Ch 2 Pg 5* Coming Up - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Interesting start. ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Glad To c Yu Back Nisha :) !!
Bt Thz Prologue, Didn' quite Undstnd !!
Introduce The Characterz Soon Plzz !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -NishaSobti-


Wait and watch!

But if you guess who are the people moving back I'll give you an exclusive sneek peek of chapter one what say? 😃


hmm... im like leaning mostly towards buaji for some reason lmfaoo
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Liked it Nisha!
Would like to read this story of yours!

Who was the bitwa?
Who said to whom??

That is Akash!
Edited by rulama - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Aww you didn't have to do this sis. I told you,lol. I should thank you really for thinking I'm your insipration. You had this talent all along😉 But thanks you.

Hope the story becomes a great success :D

xxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This chapter is dedicated to evrydayirabbave. Hope you like it. :)



By DancingDiva


Chapter 1 : Like Old Times

"Bitwa?"

"Dadi?" They said in unison.

They bent down to take Devyani Raizada's blessings.

"Akash"? Said a voice.

"Di!" He ran forward to hug his sister, how terribly he had missed her.

While Payal looked on amused.

"They had skyped every two days and even though this was her husband's condition." She thought.

"Areey Payalji, you didn't miss your Di? " Teased Anjali.

Payal went forward and hugged Anjali and both of them looked at each other fondly remembering the times they spent together.

"Hari Prakash, come take Akash and Payal bitya's luggage into their room, there are here to stay." Said a beaming Nani.

Anjali dragged Payal away saying that she wanted to spend some time with her before Akash came and dragged her away.

Payal blushed and said "Di, aap bhi na."

Nani took Akash to her room and the Dadi- Grandson duo were going to spend some quality time together talking about his 8 month stay in the US.

"So Payaliji, what did you do there? You were comfortable? Di asked anxiously.

"Haan Di, I was fine. Initially the new food, clothes and language were difficult. But now I'm comfortable with the language as I took some classes and I'm okay wearing western as well.

"Areey waah Payaliji! That's really good news."

Payal smiled and thought "It is good to be back home, where we belong."

"Thou why did you come back?"

"Di, I missed the family so much and even Akash was restless so decided to come back as soon as the project was done. We asked Papa to come back with us but he refused saying that he wouldn't until he wrapped up his project."

"And more thing Di, why is the house decora..?"

"HELLO HI BYE BYE!"

"Sasuma, we are back"

Anjali threw a glance at Payal and both of them went to see what was the commotion about. Nani and Akash soon hurried down the stairs.

There stood Manorma Raizada as usual dressed in a deep blue sari and her famous pink goggles as she liked to call them.

Along with her stood NK Raizada and ?


<Prologue

Who? 😆 Hahha sorry couldn't help it, I wanted to gradually get them in.

A/N: If you are a new reader, please send me a buddy request for PMs on NishaSobtiPM.

And thank so much Zara for that beautiful comment. 😳

Feedback time people. Like and comment.

Edited by -NishaSobti- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
i like it...

Want to read more..


What abt ARSHI
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Good one! Initially was sceptical,coz u said that this one starts from BS leaving the show..was afraid that u wud say ASR dead 😭 but thankfully nothing like that. Sooo many Qs in my mind,but smiling as eet ees Manorma 😃
updt soon,plz pm??
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19

Am finding this really jolly and it is a treat to read! <3

Please continue soon…. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
really nice update sis. Nice to see mamiji as her normal self. makes me smile.
xxx

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