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Posted: 12 years ago
hi dear..saw u updated n cld nt wait 4 pm! Fab update! Maan n Mahi try n irritate Geet! She is still angry! Mahi is so cute! Well written! Nahi goes to Sujal! Maan shocked! update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVELY UPDATE
MAAN IS ONLY LOOKING FOR A CHANCE TO ROMANCE WITH HIS WIFE
AND MAAHI IS HER DADA'S GIRL
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sweet n cute update Tich...:):)
Maahika's n Maan's Scene was Superbbb, cute, sweet..:):)
Maan's teasing was haha hilarious..;);) kitna tang krte hai mere Geet ko..
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 75
awesome part...
OMG i have never seen such possessive men...
Maahi is really naughty...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb!!!!!!
loved each bit of it...
truely amazing...
maaneet-mahi moments wer superbbb :):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing
Maan n Maahi pairing up leaving
Mamma Geet alone. Geet angry
At Maan. Woh Geet ko bhaav hi
Nahi deta. Geet cribbing while
Father-daughter having fun.
Loved that part. Maza aa gaya.

Geet frustrated at Maan's behavior.
Him telling her to feed Maahi n den
Not giving Maahi to her. Aise kaise
Chalega. Maan possessive bante ja
Raha hai

All the moments were so cute.
Maan romancing wid Geet.
Maahi chain chod nahi rahi.
Maan phas gaya.
Opps Maahi getting hurt. Everyone
Runs to her.

She is getting happy to get
All the attention specially boys.
Geet looking at Shiv surprised
By his non sense accusations.
Maahi still loves her Dada over
Shiv.

Ab Sujal bhi aa gaya. Uff Maan
Ka kya hoga ab Shiv bhi hai.
Its going to be fun.

Continue soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
geet is avoiding maan geet should give taste of his medicine to maan by spending time with sujal
maahi went with sujal so easily poor boys maan n shiv both are jealous
plss continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting

Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

@Heytal dear ur comemnts and concern always touch me deep my heart, love u a lot...

@Crazydream @maanshi @Desigirls12 @geetsrir.maan i wanna thank u all specially, ur LONG comments just made my day, i loved it a lot and thank u sooo very much for the longgg comments...

i wanna thanks each n everyone who liked and commnted on th thrd, thanks a lottt guy...


thanks to everyone who had pressed the like and commented without any PM, thats shows ur love for K3 thanks guys...



Part 76

Maan looked at geet who was smirking seeing maahika happily hugging sujal,, maahika is a girl who can go with anyone if she ever had seen him or her with her family or dada mumma' her little brain is nave to understand her surroundings and whoever give her love n affection in a fraction she will be with them, here sujal always makes her happy with his kisses and funny face' sujal always forgot his all tension holding maahi close to him but he was oblivious to the fact 2 more men was watching him with fuming eyes as maahika neglected them because of him' dev saw his brother in amusement, geet shook her head and dev chuckled in a tone tune fearing for his dear life'

Meera: sujal what r u doing here? Arrangement is complete?

Sujal: I m here for office work, needed geet's sign urgently, the clients want to leave for Daman, so they wanted to meet her..

Geet: one min, did we crack the deal..

Sujal smirks : yeah

Geet: ohhh my God, u guys didn't tell me before..

Meera: u were not well geet, kaise batate, me n sujal are handling the project, we informed maan and he is also helping us'

Geet looked at maan with a new zeal of glee, her face was glowing with the news and respect for him develop double time in her heart,, having so many problems fights still he was there to fulfill her dreams' maan saw her looking at him, a delightful smile spread his face showing no matter what happen his love for her will always remain same' their silent romance got disturb when a sudden cry made way to their eardrum'

Maan saw maahika crying while sujal was tensed and checking her whats happen.. geet saw his enrage eyes which can blast any moment, she hurriedly took maahi from sujal'.

Sujal: what happen to her suddenly'

Geet: she wetted her nappy' everyone smiled'.

Shiv: how much she can wet, I see half of the time she did it'.

Meera laughed while saanjh gave him deathly glare, though shiv was afraid but the glare he received from maan can make him shiver,, he pouted and left the room'

Sujal: geet I need to talk to u, can u please come..

Geet looked at maahi then saanjh, saanjh assured she will take care of maahi, meera also accompanied' geet looked at maan who silently nodded without showing anyone'

Geet and sujal walked to the privet garden, where geet read the paper and signed it, she was happy' and that was showing on her face'

Sujal: u r really happy with this project..

Geet: yes I m, u remember sujal I always told u I want to do something in telecom world'.

Sujal: yeah I remember, and now u r fulfilling ur dream'

Geet: no sujal,, sujal looked ta geet with knotted brow.. geet smiles' I m fulfilling maan's wish, his wish to see my dream to be a success.. if there wasn't maan I couldn't have done anything'.

Sujal looked at her for a brief moment,, he can see the love on her face, he wonder how can mere 1 yr relation be so deep,, and on the top that relation which started with a scare, maybe she had forgot the night also' maan's love was powerful and he made her forgot everything'. Geet saw him looking at her, she raised her eyes brow asking what happen.. he shook his head in negative'

Sujal: u r insanely in love..

Geet smiles cutely: M i? sujal nodded and then laughed' she saw him smiling and for the first time it was from his heart,, though he accepted geet loves maan but some corner of his heart wasn't ready to believe it till now' now seeing him happy from his heart geet felt a relief swift over her shoulder..

Sujal: what happen?

Geet: what is it sujal?

Sujal: what?

Geet: u know what I m talking, don't talk in riddle spit the bean'

Sujal: gosh u girls na, mills n boon k kitab chodhke detective wali pakadli kya'

Geet: shut up sujal and tell me what u wanna speak' we are still best friend remember??

Sujal sighed: hmmm'

Geet waited but it was more than 10 min sujal couldn't said a word, her temper was already rising and sujal knew,, before she can stomped sujal hugged her' it was so sudden geet couldn't understand anything'.

Sujal whisper: I think I m in love' Geet was dumbfounded, she blinked her lashes to resist his word but all she could look at him in confusion' sujal broke the hug and cupped her face' Do u think I can love her like u love maan? geet saw him with tears of happiness, she can say her frnd indeed in love cz that shows in his eyes.. she nodded happily'

Geet: u r and will be perfect trust me' she hugged her Friend that lost so many month ago,, now she can say yes its only her best frind and guide, her teenage friendship' she happily hugged him showing her happiness for him' I m so happy for u,, she will love u that u deserves'

Sujal: how can u say that, u haven't met her'

Geet: I can see that in ur eyes' both broke the hug, geet smiles looking at his face and pointed his cheek' U r blushing sujal for the first time' she giggle, sujal tried not to show but yes he is blushing and happy, but the glow he saw on geet's face knowing he loves someone else, finally moving in life made him feel proud on his friendship'. But when will u meet her to me huh? And when all this happened?

Sujal: relax yaar,, hmm we met few month before and our meeting wasn't good, it was always fights, and usually she start that' geet looked at him suspiciously' ummm u remember I was fighting with a girl in ur godh-varai, her mother was the event organizer' u remember u were asking me why I was fighting with the girl'

Geet: it started there? she ask unbelievingly'

Sujal: erm no,, we met in a mall and fight over a silly thing,, then again we met in office, we again fought, and in short carrying fights we fall in love'

Geet: great love story, she laughed and sujal too' ok now when she will meet me?

Sujal: jab tum kaho,,

Geet become silent for sometime: sujal, did she know about u n me? I mean apart friendship we,,

Sujal nodded: she knows everything, u only said if we love someone we have to share our deepest secret with them so I told her everything, and she gladly accepted' she herself had a past and told me she want to move on in life. She wanted to meet u and want to know my secrets'

Geet: issi liye nahi milaya aaj tak, sacchi me sujal main tumhara har poll kohl dungi'

Sujal: dare u geet..

Geet: huh try me'.

Sujal gave her mocking fuming look but after few min both busted laughing' both hugged each other'

Sujal: I missed our friendship'

Geet: me too'

Both broke their hug only to meet fuming pair of eyes of maan, geet saw the intensity in his eyes' his eyes were on sujal's hand which he was placing on her shoulder, sujal couldn't understand his look as he was not showing his anger or any emotion, it was blank'. But he can feel geet's uneasiness.. he bid good bye to them and geet saw maan lost in his thoughts'

Meera went to to office for some urgent work, and shiv too went for his office, dev went to KC and and rest of the family got busy in preparation, saanjh told geet she will see maahika, and they(maaneet) need to sort out things'.

Maan saw geet anxiety filled face, he remember shiv's words that he said before going for office'

Shiv: maan this time geet needs u, I can understand fear in love, in fact jealousy is ok in love but insecurity and mistrust will tarnish ur love,, once I had seen for myself don't want ur n geet's relation to suffer. I know u both are possessive for each other, but don't let possessiveness come in between ur love' I want to say something more, but for now first make up with Geet, rest we can handle later'. Maan silently nodded his head but before shiv leave once again he stopped and looked straight in maan's eyes' Maan, Stay Away from SAM'

Shiv left without anymore words neither maan asked, but he knew something is cooking, shiv knew something, he need to know it fast before it gets too late, he was going to pacify his angry wife when he witness her laughing and giggling with sujal and then hugging him, it burnt him.. he doesn't know what they were talking but definitely the closeness he didn't liked' something kicked hard in him'

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Once geet came inside maan trapped her way, geet saw his hard face, she knew he was angry. No one know him n his possessive love better that her, but she is afraid, don't know what will he say again in his anger.. she couldn't bear more hurting words and behavior from him, she tried to avoid it and passed him but he trapped her between his hand and wall, she looked deep in his eyes so see only confusion and pain'

Maan: what was that?

Geet: don't tell me u were jealous'

Maan: yes I m'

Geet stared at his state forwardness, she didn't expected him to realize what he is doing out of jealousy but now he himself agreed it, will he understand her now? will he understand what she felt looking at him and samaira'

Geet: why?

Her voice was meek and full of helplessness,, maan came close to her giving goose bumps, he held her waist,, and slammed her petite body with his'

Maan: I hate anyone touching u, be that ur friend'

Geet: if it wasn't sujal would u feel and react like this?

Maan stares at her blankly,, yes its true he is freaking obsessive but is she right? Will he reacted same way if jay or shiv hugged her.. no probably now cz he trust them, jay treats her like sister and shiv, he knew shiv more than shiv himself.. he only loves her as frnd.. then why it felt awkward seeing him close to his WIFE' geet saw the confusion and conclusion on his face, she tried to shove him'

Geet: no, the answer is no, u wouldn't reacted same, because its sujal u r behaving like this'

she was successful freeing herself but before she can run maan again slammed her body on the wall but carefully not t hurt her'

Maan: yes, yes its because somewhere I don't like his closeness with u, yes I m damn possessive geet'

Geet shouted: so m i' I was too jealous and hurt cz I don't blv that samaira'

Maan now understand her insecurities, its not because the closeness or frndship but the old relation that can never replace on other spouses eyes.. he can understand her pain, when sujal is a good human still he doesn't felt good seeing him close to her how can he expect geet to understand what he was doing with sam, maybe he was saving her for humanity but still no wife can see her husband close to his ex fianc'

she tried to go away from him but he pinned her and slammed his lips on her supple lips,, she wriggle in his grip but he was nowhere to stop, she doesn't shut her eyes and he didn't let her do so,, sucking her lower lips angrily,, geet tried not to respond and stared at him with a hurt expression still he didn't stop, both was lost in anger and after a brief moment she closed her eyes and tears fell down, he left her lips and licks the tears away,, I LOVE U GEET, ONLY YOU,,, she tried not say anything and he captured her lips with immense love and she surrender herself, and pulls him closer kissing with all her love and right... U ARE MINE MAAN...

maan: I M URS, and U R MINE GEET'..

precap: shiv jealous?

next Part 77

I know u guys must be thinking why maan over reacted or why geet is behaving like this when they know both only love each other' guys I don't know u r in love or not,,, but in love or relation like hubby n wifey no spouse can tolerate his/her partner to be friend with their ex' trust me on that, its natural perfectly, though in my case it never happened LOL but I know uneasiness will remain always no matter how friendly relation they bond, I hope u will understand K3's maaneet as well as K2HY's maaneet both suffering same'.

Guys on twitter there is contest going where I nominated Kagaz ki kashthi, if u wanna make it win then be ready on twitter today till 11pm.. u can follow me @Tich_mg.. u have to retweet @Brand_Gurti's link where K3 will be tagged' readers have contest on 2-4 for the winning ffs'

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Thank u amrutha (maaneetmaahi) for the wonderful thread to discuss my ffs,, and thanks to all my frnds who commneted there.. wanna thank specially @deepa(spvd) , @shoba (sdlife), @sobia(sobia4maaneet) @MonaSWrites @tammy(tamanna1391), @valli22 di @ jssood, @.bloom. @mansi.tripathi @dona86 @ preethia @samy (Dipti_Sam) @ leeguru @rsusmita @impoojaverma @khwaishfan @ushankitvc @ amrutha (maaneetmaahi)


Thanks a lotsss guys and specially for those long discussion...


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Edited by tich.1990mg - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yeh me first again🄳

Awesome update Tich😊

Do billi ke jhagde mein bandar le gaya rotišŸ˜†
Maan n Shiv🤢 shocked with jaws wide open
n Sujal wisks Maahi to him😳

Geet n Sujal reliving their friendship moments again
Friends will always be special
makes u forget all pains n brings a smile on ur face😊

Geet's happiness also shows that finally she guilt free
as Sujal has found His Love

Maan jealous n admits it too
Thank God he realized Geet's pain now

Shiv's casual yet hidden warning alerts Maan
Sam time for pack up
and
Maaneet Patch upā˜ŗļø

Though I missed Maahi today
How I wish Maahi had kissed Sujal
Mazaa aa jata 🤣
Maan n Shiv n Sujal Bechaara

Continue soon
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Edited by heytal - 12 years ago

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