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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hai friends,

Actually I am a silent reader.

But today, I thought I would try a FF.

If you like this, plz reply……

Note: I dont know much about the medical field and moreover I am not so good in English so there may be some ( no.., many) mistakes so……plz ….plz….. pardon me….

BRIDGE ACROSS THE FUTURE

CHARACTER SKETCH

Maanvi's Family

Maanvi Chowdary :

Medical student in AIIMS Ansari Nagar in South Delhi.

Age :21

Her ambition is to become a cardiologist.

Actually it's her parents wish.

Her parents died in a plane crash when she was 10 years old.

She have some property left by her parents.

Local guardian : Madu Chowdary, brother of Mahesh Chowdary (father of Maanvi).

She is staying in a flat alone.

Deepa Chowdary :

Wife of Madhan Chowdary.

She hates maanvi.

Madu Chowdary :

Local guardian of Maanvi.

Considers Maanvi as his own daughter.

He always help maanvi secretly.

Also the care taker of Maanvi's property.

Dilip chowdary :

Son of Madu and Deepa.

Age : 20.

Hates maanvi like hell.

But always have his eye on Maanvi's property.

He is helping Madu in their family business.

Also a BBA student.

Virat's Family

Virat Singh Vadhera :

A famous and successful Bollywood star come singer, most often called as rock star.

Age : 26

Home town: Delhi.

Handsome and arrogant at the same time.

He is not interested in social parties.

He never believes in commitments and relationships.

Karan Sing chowhan:

Best friend of virat.

They are childhood friends.

He is looking after his father's business (Chowhan Exports).

Age :26

Viren Singh Vadhera :

A successful and efficient lawyer in Delhi.

Age : 28

Brother of virat.

But they always treat each other as best friends.

Shares everything between them.

Jeevika Viren Vadhera :

Wife of Viren.

Age :25

Sweet, loving wife and a caring mother.

Have a 4 year old child : Jeeva

Always get tensed for the silliest of reasons.

Vanshika Vadhera :

Mother of Viren and Virat.

She loves virat more.

Vijay Singh Vahera :

Grand father of viren and Virat.

Swamini Vadhera :

Daughter of vijay singh Vadhera.

She is more attached to Viren.

Remaining characters are on their way…………………………………

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Love dthe concept and the character sketch.Interesting.

pls continue soon and pls pm me wen u continue pls😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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cont soon...
sounds interesting...
pm me wen u cont
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really interesting!!plz continue!! N pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hai friends...
thank u all 4 ur comments...
i will update the first chapter asap...
first chapter will be in two parts...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 1(A)

Maanvi's POV

The sun rises into the sky with the warmest smile. Her face was shining in the morning. Rays of sunshine kisses her face through her crimson colored window. Because of her overtime duty, she slept late at night. So that she was not at all ready to open her eyes. But when the burning sensation of rays in her soft and delicate skin increases and also because of her stupid alarm, she was forced to open her eyes. Even though her alarm helped to wake her up in time, she hates it. But she is helpless, because the alarm was gifted by her friend, otherwise it would have broken into millions and billions of pieces.

She slowly opened her eyes and stared through her window and welcomed the new morning with her cute smile.

She thought "Another busy day".

Actually she is fed up with all the over time duties physically, but mentally she is not.

She is a medical student; she always worked with her heart, not with her mind. She loved her profession to the core, becz, it was her parents wish to see her as a doctor.

She wanted to become a cardiologist. Her friends always teased her as "Dil ki doctor". But truly, she loved it. Yes the name,"Dil ki doctor" perfectly suits her., because she is the owner of a worlds most beautiful anf fragile "Dil"😉. Most of all, her friends treat her as a child due to her innocence and childish antics.

She is a fun loving girl, a bubbly type. Always wants to live her life according to her wish. She is living her life on her own terms. She is least bothered about the society and her surroundings. She made decisions straight from her heart, may be because of that, her friends and those who knew her love her a lot...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start...n Intersting concept...seriously wht i liked was the age difference..i know wierd...but wanted u to know...😆PM me when u continue..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept

But add some virika scenes plz

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys ... i am back with the next part...
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CHAPTER 1(B)
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She lazily moved her eyes to see the clock. "Oh! Shit, it's already 7.00 …
She stretched her hand and made a yawning. It says how much tired she is. Really, she is tired and she doesn't even get a proper sleep. But she have to be there on time. She had promised him, her little angel. For your kind information, little angel is my new friend, who had been admitted in the hospital last week. She never used his name; she called him as little angel.
Yes, she need to get there on time, today is her little angel's operation. She thought "her little angel have a good heart but not a good valve". he have a problem in his valve.
She had promised her angel that she will be there before her little angel gets shifted to the OT. She doesn't know what occultism her little angel had made, but within the last few days she succeeded to create a good bond with the angel. May be because of the similarities they shared. Now it's her daily routine to visit her whenever she got time. Within 20 minutes, she got ready.She took her bag and the incomplete assignment (which she failed to complete,becoz of her little angel. She spends her time that she used to write assignments with her angel). But she is least bothered about that. She only wants her angel to be happy…
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The doctor's words flashed her mind………
*********FLASHBACK*********
Dr.Bakshi :Maanvi…. Since ur goal is to become a cardiologist, I think, this case will help u.
(I am Dr.Bakshi's favorite student. It makes many of my friends to see me with their jealous eyes. Yes,it's true, rather than my professor he is a father like figure.)
Dr.Bakshi : Maanvi, u know this is is a risky operation.
Anyway, hope for the best……
******FLASHBACK END******
Hello honey--- bunny--- honey----bunny-----tuku tuku---------------------------"
Her cell phone rings.This brought her back from her thoughts….
Yes, she know, actually this is a stupid ringtone for a medical student. But what to do, the bubbly nature inside her loved this ringtone a lot ……This made her friends to confirm that she is nothing more than a child.
Brushing away her thoughts, she attended the call.
M:Hello
Jeevika(J): Hello mannu
M: Gd mrng, di.
J: gd mrng mannu…I can't handle ur angel more……he is asking for u……
M :Ok Ok di, I will be there within 15min
J: mannu, plz come soon….
M: sure di, bye….
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As with angel, maanvi also created a great bond with jeevika and jeevika insisted her to call her di and called maanvi as mannu, (the name given by her angel). Along with her things she left her flat and made her way towards hospital…………
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FINALLY I COMPLETED CHAPTER 1...
PLZ GUYZ...
I NEED YOUR SINCERE REPLIES...
I AM NOT A GOOD WRITER... SO PLZ FORGIVE MY MISTAKES...
Edited by Ammu_Darling - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great update.. Loved the concept and CS.. Its really interesting.. Manvi as 'dil ki doctor'😛 and Virat as rockstar .. Manvi's pov is well written.. That honey bunny RT suits her personality 😆.. Loved her thoughts on her angel.. waiting for Virat's entry.. Please add me to your pm list.. Take care 😊

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