KHNK Ff-Will kunal get his love?Pg.7Pt10

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This is my first fan fic so bear with me n i knw im not a very good writer but will try my best so that i dnt let you guyz down

It starts from where at the metra station where kunal proposed to nimmo

****Most of my characters are the same but will change them as i go along with the story****

KUNAL: nimmo i know that i hurt you a lot before but i never had this feeling inside me before whenever i see you i get this strange feeling inside all i want to do is stay with you for the rest of my life (before he could say anything else some one interrupts him)

NATS: kunal what are you saying i thought you loved me and now you i cant even express my feelings i did not expect this from you kunal i can not believe you kunal how can you fall in love with nimmo i mean seriously to nimmo no offense but i thought kunal's taste in girls was different.

NATS came to know that nimmo was going to leave the city so she came to thanx her for helping kunal but than heard what kunal was saying n got the shock of her life.

KUNAL: nats i know what you are saying even i thought i loved you but now i know that it was nuthing more than an attraction. To nimmo: nimmo now i actually realize what love is it something that i never felt before i met you(interrupted by nimmo this time)

Nimmo: Kunal i do not believe you, you are so confused before you said that you loved nats now you are telling that you love me how am i suppose to believe you.

Kunal: i know you would not believe but for the past six months i realized that the feelings that i have for you are more than that of a friend i can not live with out you nimmo i just cant i know it is hard to trust what i am saying because of everything that happened between us but still trust me i know what i am saying

Nats: kunal than what about me, you know that i love you i alwayz have

Kunal: Nats just answer one of my questions would you still have supported me if you knew that what dadaji did to was just his way to make me understand my responsibilities, would you still love me if i had no money left?

Nats keeps quiet

Kunal: that is what i thought you do not love me you just think you do but actually you just want to be with me so that you can tell the world that i married the great kunal seghal. you just like all the materialistic that i can afford to get you

Nats: Kunal you know that's not true even before that you are my friend n i truly care about and the marrying kunal seghal i can get much better guys than you

Kunal: if you truly loved me you would not even be thinking about that (interrupted by nimmo)

Nimmo: can you both please stop it i have to go now my train leaves in 3 minutes and before i leave i do not want to see you two fighting if you guyz actually loved eachother

Nimmo thinking: Kunal i love you but if i stay here for one more minute i know i am going to breakdown so itz better if i just leave rather than breaking you and nats apart. We come from different worlds kunal we could never understand each other.

Kunal: nimmo i know what you are thinking trust me i truly love you i know that you are concerned about the fact that we come from different worlds and our ideas do not seem to clash but believe me you made me realize that life is not about having money so that you could buy the things that you want. It only satisifies you for a while but it does not give you happiness that you get from the moments that you spend with your loved ones.

Nimmo: kunal i am getting late i have to leave i can not listen to this anymore please kunal let me go.

Nats: yes, kunal lets go we can not change nimmo's mind if she decided something i am pretty sure she thought about it and who are we to stop her since she did not even bother to tell us that she is leaving and we found out from someone else if she does not consider us to be her own people what right do we have to stop her.

Nats thinking: Kunal by listening to you i realised that you do not actually love me but you love nimmo i will make sure that you to get back together i will move out of the way since i can not see you unhappy. (in my fanfic nats is not a bad character atleast yet).

Kunal thinking: what the hell is nats talking about i mean why is she acting this way she knows how much i love nimmo than why is she doing this.

Kunal: Nats what are you talking about are you your senses you know nimmo always considered us like her own people she shared things with me that she never shared with anyone else she is the closest person to me she always understands what i want to say even before i express my feelings she is the best thing that ever happened to me and you are telling me to let her go i can not do that how can i tell you that I love her (i love her is echoing and everyone turns around and looks at them)

Nimmo: Kunal now see what you have done you made a issue out of nothing anywayz i better leave(acting as if it did not affect her even though she was on cloud nine when kunal said he loves her)

Nimmo all this while is thinking please kunal do not make this harder for me than it actually is if you keep saying this i will breakdown and i do not want that to happen

Kunal: he gets down on his knees n takes out a box and nimmo is thinking what is he upto now is he going to propose to nats infront of me (had to make nimmo believe it) nimmo and nats are standing together than he says NIMMO will you marry me????

What will be nimmo's reaction? Will kunal have to be hear-broken again or would he get his love???

Sorry guys but have to end it here need to finish some work i hope you guyz liked it n plz tell me if i should continue it or not i will wait for ur replies hope you guyz like it

sorry if i used any in appropriate language

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Posted: 18 years ago
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24 views but no reply i guess itz not good so not sure if i continue anymore 😒 💔
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hey its nice 😊 and u write pretty well too.
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hey nice story....pls pls continue.........thnsk...
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thnx i will continue it tonite i actually have 4 parts done already just have edit them
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Part 2

Nimmo: but wat about nats than she loves you a lot and i dont want to come in the middle

Nats: nimmo i can not forget what you did to bring me and kunal together but i guess it was not meant to be and may be this is the way it is suppose to be may be i m a way to bring you guys together

Nimmo: i do not know what to say i have to think about this

Kunal: nimmo you can take as much time as you want to think about and i know you wont let me down

Nimmo: ummmmm Kunal before i decide anything i need to talk to you alone

Nats: sorry i will just leave see you guyz later i hope every thing works out between you guys.

they leave from the station and go to a coffee shop to talk

At coffee place

Kunal: nimmo what do u like to have?

Nimmo: kunal i think we came here to discuss something

Kunal: yeah i know but lets have something first how about just coffee

Nimmo: okay

Kunal: waiter one iced latte for the madam and one cappicuno for me

Nimmo: kunal how did you know that it was my favorite

Kunal: nimmo for the past couple of months i have been observing you day and night and i know all about your likes and dislikes

Nimmo: ohhhhhh i just thought... never mind lets just get over with this

Kunal: nimmo you wanted to talk about something

Nimmo: oh yeah i totally forgot kunal woh....

Kunal: nimmo you know you can tell me anything just come out with it

Nimmo: Kunal i do not think i can live in seghal house i am not even sure if you really love me i mean you just got everything back and before you did not have anything may that is why you are thinking like this

Kunal: nimmo you know that i can never lie to you just listen to me

Nimmo: okay kunal i trust you but before i say yes i want you to agree to something --it goes mute

Kunal: okay nimmo i agree but

Nimmo: and kunal you can not tell anyone about this deal to anyone okay

Kunal: nimmo i am happy that you agreed to marry me that is just enough for me i will do as you say.

Nimmo: but kunal there is a bigger problem

Kunal: now wat nimmo

Nimmo: how do we tell everyone i mean they just found out about our contract marriage this going to be weird

Kunal: nimmo do not worry i will handle everything

Nimmo: okay kunal

Kunal: now let's go and tell everyone that we are going to get married again this time for real

Nimmo blushing and getting shy

At seghal house
Everyone is sitting there except dadaji, samar, pam, n aniket.
dadaji is yelling at samar since pam n aniket blamed samar for everything

dadaji: samar i did not expect this from you

samar: but dadaji (interrupted by kunal this time)

kunal: dadaji just let it go what ever samar did was because he misunderstood me but i do not have anything against him not atleast today so just leave it i have good news for all of you

dadiji: kunal i know what you want to say you are getting married right?

kunal: dadi how did you know

dadiji: i can tell by your face i never saw you this happy before

shraddha: beta i am so happy for you

dadaji: i knew this would happen i am so happy for you finally you decided to get settled down

pam: here we go again hunny buns i hope this time you are not going to do a contract marriage like the last time

all this while samar has his head down but for the first time he thinks that kunal actually cares for him and stood up for him infront of dadaji

samar: kunal ummm woh bhaiya actually i want to say that i am sorry and i truly am happy for you

kunal: itz okay samar you did because you were misguided

dadiji: now kunal where is the bride where is nats i want to meet her

kunal: but dadi nimmo

dadiji: i know kunal i know everything nimmo was the one who got u and nats together and i appreciate her for what she did

kunal: but dadi woh

dadaji: now enough of this talking lets go and talk to nats

Kunal: woh

they wont let kunal talk he does not know what to do he is just so confused as to how to tell them that he likes nimmo not nats

****plz post your comments as i would like to knwo what you guys think about my story and leave ur comments good/bad i dnt mind it will be really helpful to know people actually like it or not****

thnx sry if i used inappropriate language

Edited by sokkerchc - 18 years ago
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OMG HOW CAN U LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT. IT WAS GOING SO GOOD. HOW DID DADAJI FIND OUT ABOUT NATS? SO WHAT'S THE RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN SAMAR AND KUNAL? I'M LOST. ANYWAYZ GREAT STUFF KEEP IT UP. I KNOW THAT PEOPLE WILL REPLY FOR SURE IT'S SOOOO GOOD I MEAN IT'S LIKE U CAN IMAGINE THE DRAMA. THE CHARACTERS ARE FROM THE DESI DRAMAS. I HOPE NATS DOESN'T COME BACK IN THE STORY I DON'T LIKE HER. I LIKE NIMMO. SO WHAT WAS IT EXACTLY THAT NIMMO WANTS TO TELL KUNAL? ANYWAYZ REPLY! I REALLY WANT TO KNOW THE BACKGROUND.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey plz do continue its a superb fan-fic 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon .
and plzzzzz dont seprate nimmo and kunal
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Originally posted by: letme_go

hey plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon .
and plzzzzz dont seprate nimmo and kunal

i wont as i like them together not yet atleast

Edited by sokkerchc - 18 years ago

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