IFLD-new updt pg 32 10/8/13

ILL FATED LUCKILY DESTINED...IFLD


Hey guys...my first-ever abhiya os...hope u like it..
Precap...abhay and piya surprise meet ...

prologue

Hey..c'mon madhu,wake up sleepy head...gosh! This girl madhu...Ridhima screams...madhu still doesn't wake up..Ridhima pours cold water on her...madhu yells and jumps of the bed...she is wet and furious...Ridz u r so dead...and both start yelling and jumping on bed...running behind each other. Finally both fall on bed and r laughing like mad...
M- hey Ridz! Is this the way u wake up ur best buddy and 2 min r elder sis...
R- hey Madz ! Is this the way to make ur best buddy and sweet lil sis wait...u do remember it's our last day of school and..this is the day we both turn 18...
M- hmm...happy birthday lil sis..
R- to u to my buddy...we r officially 18 ...they both start jumping with excitement...so dearest sis we can legally elope and marry now...wow.and we can officially drive mien.wow..this 18 is so special...and both start laughing and throwing pillows at each other...
M- it means I can finally kiss any guy...and winks...
R- haha haha as if ! Don't tell me.u liar,u haven't ever kissed ur byo...that idiot..that would be self called super star ,The RK...u guys r dating since last 6 months...I don't believe u...
M- well ok...u caught me..& wat bout u...miss sati savitri..
R- hey what bout me? What I did yaar????
M- ho ho ho..loz...whats ur scene with Arman...that intern u met at sanjeevani...I have seen u guys smooching..literally u tore his shirt...how about that despo...it's been 6 ths since you dating him to...so till which level u guys have reached...huh??? Care to tell...
R- hey u were keepivan eye on me that day...gosh thats so cheap...see dud I ever tell u that u and ur loser rk..I mean rishabh were trying to make out in a car...omg...in a car...uff...atleast we were on stairs...
M- yupp that too in a hospital...so despo...and u watched me ...how cruel...both are giggling and start hitting each other again...m- so r you guys serious...R- yupp very...since he is an intern...and I need to complete grad...so we have time and soon..I would be assisting him...coz am gonna join the same hospital...as my...study projects...what bout u and rishabh...though I hate that guy...just met him once and he gives.so much arrogance and attitude...gosh the waty he behaves..completely a spoilt brat...u r so sweet yaar...r u guys serious...
M-... I dunno..why you two hate each other so much...what u have met once just for god sake...u two have made ur self appraisal pictures about each other...u both r like volcano...uff forget it...we r serious about each other...he wants to go into glamour industry...once he gets his first project we gonna marry...and u have to bear him as ur family...R- ok..ok..ok..I take it...I know u guys r crazy bout each other...u though I hate him from bottom of my heart...but since u r happy ..I can see he lives in ur heart...nowadays...u live and breathe him..so it's ok for me...M- gosh I wonder how armaan jhelofy u...but I know u both too love each other madly...madly...his name brings a glow on ur face...so I forgive so what r the plans for today...where's grand ma...R- must be in her room...she's a bit gloomy lately...somethings bothering her...
M-may be she's also missing Mom dad...hmm we love u Mom dad...but sorry we love our grandma more...Ridz..lets go yo DS...
DS-hey my little angels...come here. Gimme an hug.. U r my life...so congrats u have turned 18 today...and so u can now officially own and drive a car...here take ur car keys ur birthday gift from me...ur fav beatle is waiting
Both Ridz and madhu r shocked...and surprised...they became ecstatic and ran to see their car...
DS is in her room..she feels something in the air...she is surprised and closes her eyes...after few min she opens her eyes shockingly...she runs towards her phone...hello..Sugandh ,it's me...I think the time is near , I didn't no it would happen so soon..I couldn't see it all clearly...but m worried...we don't havemuch time.. .they both have turned 18 today...and they don't no yet but...I think they will realise strange things by tonite only...no..they dunno anything bout it...but we need to be prepared..I think the time has come when u come back to Mount Abu..ASAP...she keeps down the receiver...goes towards the window ,closes her eyes and starts chanting...something...

Index

character sketch...pg 1
prologue pg 1
ch 2 pg 2
ch 2 pg 3 contd.
ch3 part1 pg 4
ch 3 pt 2 pg 4
ch 3 pt 3 pg5
MAHAEPI CH 4 PG 6,& 7
ch5 pg 8,9[/B
Upcoming PROMO pg 11]
[B]CH 6 PG NO 13,14
Ch 7 pg16
Ch 8 pg 17, 18
Ch 9 pg 18
Ch10 pg 19
Ch 11 Part a pg 20
Ch 11 part b, c, d pg 21
Ch 12 pg 23
Ch 13 pg 26
Ch 14 pg 27
Chapter 15 pg 30
CHAPTER 16 PG 36

character sketch

DS- daadi Saab...aruna irani
MADHU- DRASHTI DHAMI
RIDHIMA- SIKIRTI
RISHABH KUNDRA- RK-VIVIAN
ARMAAN- KARAN SINGH GROVER
PIYA DOBRIAL- SUKIRTI
ABHAY RAICHAND- VIVIAN
SUGANDH. DOBRIYAL- SAME AS IN PKYEK she is the mother of twins...whom her daughters consider as dead[
]PRATHAM- THE SLAYER KING,HITEN TEJWANI
GAURI-.FAIRY AND BFF OF SUGANDH,GAURI[BR MAITHILI/METZ- SUKIRTI
MANYATA- PRIYAL GOR
UDAYVEER - ASHISH KAPOOR
SID/SIDHARTH - SIDHARTH KARNIK
PANCHI-VAHBIZZ[
Misha raichand- priya wala
CHAND & HASEENA- SAME AS PKYEK
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DS is a vert mysterious and influential lady...she loves her grand daughters and is hiding a big secret from them...but now the time has come to reveal all the secrets to her grand daughters...

Madhu and Ridhima are twins...they have been brought up by their grand ma whom they call D S lovingly...they have been told that their parents have died in a car crash...both sister don't look alike accept they share same curly hairs
They both love each other to core and not a single secret is between the...madhu loves rk and Ridhima loves armaan

Rk is a young guy of 22 yrs age and a struggling actor from a rich family...he's very arrogant and hates Ridhima but lovesmadhu to core...

Armaan is a very handsome guy of 22 yrs age...he loves Ridz..mad about her and wants to be a doctor

I wrote so bad kya...so many views and only one like...or am a new member on this forum...arey yaron. Ache na sahi. Coments toh karo...atleast I will no ucdidnt like it...

nice concept
continu soon

no jeni its nice start... u know a lot of mysterious... i love mystery plz continue...

Originally posted by: meerubzara

nice concept
continu soon

thanx 😃

Hi friends...I hope u like this update...plz do comment...it really helps...and encourage me...thanx...it's a new concept...so bear with me...luv u guys...

CChapter 2

Madz and Ridz go on a ride in their new car...they were ecstatic...racing it zoom...they called up armaan and rk for a race...Both RK,ARMAANbeing very good friends decide to accept the challenge together...all 4 met at an hill top...rk and armaan...said..." so challenge accepted girls...Congo on new car..but what's at stake...we don't race without an award...so put up ur quest..."they both winked at each other...they had not yet wished their girlfriend's birthday...both Madz and Ridz were fuming...they hadn't yet wished them...Ridz pulls madz towards a corner..." look madz..these guys how dare they forgot our birthday..let alone a gift...they haven't even wished us..." madz" yeah Ridz u r right ...seriously how could they forget it...I am so angry...yaar I just wanna go and smack RK...how dare he aur upar se Humein challenge...not fair...lets teach them a lesson"...
R- yeah I know...I too am furious...ISS armaan ko toh mai dekhna...batati hoon...but ,she starts giggling...I like ur idea very very much...lets me do the honour I will smack ur idiot bf...would wipe that smirk on his face...god dis u r so cute ...let me go and s mack him...how could he forget to wish you..."...madz is shocked...startled...she knows Ridz won't let a chance go by to irritate RK...UFF THIS GIRL IS TOO MUCH...
M- stop joking and lets go...

RK AND ARMAAN

RK-hey...it's so fun na...they have become officially 18... I think I will elope with madz...uff she's gonna kill me...and it's a risk am taking not wishing them...so I wanna win this race to,school buddy...
A- WOW...and am sure my Ridz is thinking to kidnap me and carry me away...gosh it's strange...u and madz...me and Ridz...so opposite...yet so much in,love...Ridz is gonna be so so mad...my life is on risk...she will not leave me bro...yeah we surely need to win...
RK-...seriously...that Ridz is so mad,obnoxious,pig headed,bull headed stupid female...my madz is so cool calm and collected...how they become twins...so different...amazing...god how do u jhelofy her...she's so ...ugh I just hate her...woh agar madz ki behen nahi hoti na...toh...forget it...she's so selfish...
A-oh god what's with you both yaar. .this is the second time u guys r meeting...thanx that u two r not alone...who would have been Alive then I wonder...y do u both hate each other so much...it's weird actually...but since she is madz sis...well U AND UR ENEMY R MEANT TO LIVE TOGETHER ALL LIFE...WITH PEACE OR HATE OR SOME OTHER WAY.. How would u manage. .and he starts smiling seeing Rks shocked face...and goes away towards his love...rk is throwing daggers at his back and he sighs.. .and goes towards his l love madz...
Both the couples meet now...so..they decide whoever wins will be free to ask whatever they want...and also decide that madz won't drive if rk drives and Ridz wont drive whenn armaan drices


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...Well and then they finally decided...since both r couples...the one who wins...will ask for award from the other...thats like rk would ask Ridz and armaan would ask madz...and the race started...Ridz and rk decided to drive..becoz..madz wanted rk to win and armaan wanted Ridz to win...all their hatred came in their drive...both reached the school at the same time...and again...as usual...rk and Ridz started fighting as to who won when the bell rang and both Ridz and madz had to run...

HERE IN SINGHANIYA MANSION

DS-... Sugandh...I can feel...the prophecy might come true...I just wish I could know...oh God am so worried ...my powers have already started transferring...I can feel it...how do I tell the girls...can u see something...

Sugandh- my dearest mom...u know how badly I wanna meet my daughters. ...it's been yrs...it's been such a testing time...how I wish arnab could come too...maa saahib...these two r two bodies one soul...I am do afraid that they would be separated today forever...but how...it's gonna be so painful. ..what's gonna happen will be too bad...u wish u could see and stop it...I think..ugh...my head is blasting...maa saahib...it's happening very fast...even my powers have sarted ti radiate...ohh...we shouldn't let them go outta sight today. ..not even for a min...call both of them back from school now...I am going in the locked cellar...and let me try to see what's exactly gonna happen...and what we can do about it...and remember maa saahib...they need to wear gloves today. .their ring finger need to be covered...not a drop of blood...u know na if...exactly atmid night due to any reason they r hurt and their blood connects with the ring finger of any guy's blood...they will be bonded for ever with each other...their ring finger has to be covered...and have u given them that ring...it will save them from all other evil supernatural powers

...all evil powers will be on lookout for them...do anything but forbid them to go out...I will use my spell and become invisible if any of the two come near me...I just hope this prophesy proves wrong...and she goes away...
DS is still thinking if a plan to stop the girls coz she knows they wanna party...when the two come running...
Ridz- hey DS...why u look so worried...we must celebrate...its our 18th b'day and our school is too over...luv u so much DS and she hugs her...
DS Chris her temperatur...she's too hot...same is with madz...so it's started...why r u both so hot...fever...r u feeling strange...
Madz- yeah DS...it's started happening since afternoon...strange...we r hot but not sweating...our friends too could feel the heat...u know what one more strange thing happened...whomever we looked into eyes seems to get hypnotized...for few seconds...strange na ...and Ridz toh DS...started hearing others thts...I couldn't...but she could...and more strange is that only for awhile...what's happening grandmas...y u so tensed from morning...
Well and today I am feeling so much extra energetic...Ridz said...
Both went to change...they both wore exactly same dress...both had planned a secret outing with there lovers and we're waiting for their messages...when DS came and gave them a pair of gloves each...and told them come what may they will not remove the gloves and the ring till dawn...coz it was said by a pandit...both agreed and wore the ring and gloves immediately...And then DS forces them to agree to not have a party or any outing tonight...when both don't agree she locks them in their room...and goes away...already it was evening...both r shocked at this behaviour of DS she's never been like thisvbefore...this was strange...both r talking...Ridz- it's good that we r together...no one can seperate us...if ever we seperate then...madz- simple...how can they seperate our hearts...if one is body...the other is heart...so we r together always...and even God will grant our wish...and a star falls on earth at the same time...both get messages on their fones and they plan to run away out through the window unaware of the looming disaster in there lives...
Unknown to each other both the couples spend some romantic moments and then go to the same disc...both r enjoying their time together...and lost in dance that when they move away from each other ...bang collide both rk and Ridz...u...you...how dare u shouts rk furiously...what r u doing here in these tiny clothes...Ridz- just shutup...my clothes r none of you business ...where my sis...god AAj toh hum dono ko slay rakha hota...someone pushes her and she loses balance...rk holds her and tries to balance ...both r shocked...feeling strange...as if high volts current r passing...she's so so hot...omg r u having fever...y r u both so severely hot today...madz wasvtelling me if strange things happening with u both...