IFLD-new updt pg 32 10/8/13 - Page 4

Originally posted by: janvie

Awsome Update. 😊
How does Arman knows about all the changes madz-ridz.?And about who they are..?
Seems like Arman is also some Supernatural and I guess RK as well.Pls solve the mysteries soon.
Waiting for Abhiya's entry. 😉 Unki entry jaldi se kara dena.
Cant wait to read more.Pls Update Asap. 😃

Thanx yaar...mine is a big thriller story...have updated part 3... Revealed all ur anser...and about rk...well he is l a human but specially gifted

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story
my name is alicia pm me

Thanx a lot...yupp the plot is quite different...it's a mega budget affair with superhit couples 😉 .. 😆 ...sorry I won't be able to pm from mobile and some prob in my computer...it's not typing any new msg..or reply to any post...so plz bookmark it till then... ...wait for more dhamaka...

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

who is that lady in clock... thank god they meet.. k i knw abt madhu, ridhima, arman... but who is rk...

Rk is a human but specially gifted...u will know in next update..lady in cloak...well she's the most lovable character we all adore her so much... 😆 😉 ...so how was it written...was I able to create thrill and suspence...I hope I succeeded as ur expectations.. If you feel something missing do point out plzz...it's my first attempt at thrillre series .. 😃

Superb AND Awsome Update.Thanks so much for answering to all my ques in your update. 😊
You really write very well.And you are doing really a great job in writing this thriller-suspense story and fulfilling your reader's expectations.Keep up the good job. 👏 👏 😃
Now I am just waiting for Abhiya's Dhasu entry as you said..And also that their entry would be a shocker for us...Hmmm..Waiting for the next part...Pls Update Asap. 😊
Thankyou so much for the pm.

Chapter 4

All the four r staring each other...feeling strange for the first time...finally both the couples hug each other as there is no tomorrow for them...both the sis glue to each other...both feeling fearful experienceing strange feelings...both can feel a storm approaching in their lives...madz looks at Ridz intensely...both have a long eyelock...as if talking with eyes...both rk and armaan noticing this interchange between sis...shocking expressions. Passing through their faces...suddenly Ridz shouts...no it can't be...no no no..she starts crying...gosh...I can read ur mind...we r not humans.. .everyone is shocked...Ridz is furious...she faces armaan...omg...u too...I can read u too...everything u said to madz...u lied yo me...all the while u knew...atleast we never deceived anyone...but armaan...how could you...she seed GUIlt in his eyes...feels sorry for him...all three stare each other...HELLO GUYS.ME HERE TOO WHATS GOING ON...WHAT R U GUYS TALKING...WHAT LIES..NWHAT DECEIT...MADZ WHY R U CRYING...RK YELLS HURRIEDLY...ALL THREE LOOK TOWARDS HIM...RIDZ IS GLARING AT HIM SHE SAYS...strange...I can hear everyone thought...even the humans at disc...but not this lecherous bf of its madz...armaan says...it's impossible...he us a human...Ridz wonders.n..yeah...but I cant read him...strange...Rk- hey I am human and u r aliens...madz these two have gonemad...it's risk leaving u with them...come here...he pullsmadz towards him and..holds her...it's time we go home...amaan take away ur obnoxious girl friend away...all this is because of her and if anything happens to my madhu...I will make her suffer in hell...both armaan and Ridz are staring ay each other...they both hug each other...armaan starts crying AMD hugs Ridz...will we ever be the same...shouts A...Ridz shouts...i dont no...but thismoment. I love u...but when i dont b a human anymore...i dont no armaan...qe r so illfated...madz cries seeing their condition...she isafraid...she runs howard Ridz...hugs her and says...no one an seperate them and thn she looks towards rk and says...she would prefer to die as human...coz when she changes...she and rk cant b one...and rk is confused...he isn't understanding any talks between the three...he is puzzlepuzzled...but senses that weird things r happening...its all strated with this bithch rridz...rk thinks angrily...while madz and Ridz r in a hug...suddenly both feel strange wibes...they r feeling very angry...when they see a lady in a robe...black cloak with a few people approaching...they pull rk and armaan( still a human) towards them and warn them that it's danger approaching them...MAHAEPISODEMAHAEPISODEMAHAEPISODE

Originally posted by: ifians

gr8 update

Thanx...am still updating...

The lady is hooded...it's pitch dark and the weather is turned cold and mysterious...it seems a black magic is woven and the whole city has slept...rk feels the creepy atmosphere...strange not a single stray aniimal on road and who r these people...I am getting negative vibes...he looks to armaan whose having similar thts...dad where r u...we need you...r these the black forces...what we do now...both r worried now...madz,Ridz r feeling peculiar...as if their fighting instincts r waking up...their eyes r burning with anger...but both r worried about rk and armaan..they r calling ds silently for help. ..suddenly Ridz is shaken and she is mentally connected to ds...ds says her to shield themselves...band that only they both can do...if they concentrate hard. They have to do it immediately.. Ridz tells this to madz and both do the same...rk armaan seeing all these feel a smoke coming from them and find themselves engulfed in it...slowly they feel as if they are captured in a glass.. .where they can feel but cant move much...armaan holds rk and says him to keep quiet.. .rk shouts...armaan it's all becoz of Ridhima..see my madz is crying and I can't bear that...I just can't live without her...armaan...we need to do something. .plz tell me what's happening...sorry rk I can't tell u anything for a while...then they all hear a shrill laughter. They see the lady in cloak removed her hood . ...there eyed pop out seeing her face...all three except Ridz see her...coz she has her back to the lady...they r rubbing their eyes...all three looking at both lady and Ridz...lady and Ridz...impossible...madz says...the lady is wearing a red and black Victorian gown...she is extremely beautiful...glowing...but has a pure evil look on her...

The lady laughs again. .shes looking at them with malice...hunger...she says...WELL WELL WELL...SO FINALLY I GET TO MEET U PRINCESS...I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR 500 YRS NOW TO MEET YOU...AND..SEE WHAT I FIND...U WITH TWO LOWLY HUMANS ...YEH NAADAN BEVAKOOF INSAAN...UFF...YEH KAMZOR INSAAN ISS DHARTI PAR BOJH HAIN...MUJHE INSE NAFRAT HAI...AUR TUM DONO...ACHA HAI TUM DONO AUR IN INSAANO KO MAI SAATH HI MAARDOOGI...PHIR ISS DUNIYA PAR MERA HI RAJ HOGA...WELL...CHALO LET ME INTRODUCE MYSELF...mai hoon MAithili...DUNIYA ki sabse khubsoorat aur takatwar vmpire...hahaha
All three r still in a shock...rk- what a vampire...do they really exist...yeh koi shooting toh nahi hai na...I swear. .sabmasale hain ISS story mein...she looks exactly like Ridhima...madz mai bolta tha...yeh itni ghamandi,nakchadi,miss attitude tumahari behen nahi ho sakti...hmm she is this vampire rebirth..ISS liye dono devil hain...he smirks seeing irritation on Ridz face...gud madz yeh drama khatam hone do...I will kill this devious rk...madz tu kaise ISS pagal se pyar kar sakti hai...armaan says stop it you two...kabhi toh serious ho...rk Ridz yeh drama nahi hai...this is real ...I can feel she's too strong...but whose she I dunno...god help us...madz is chanting dheer,Ballmer,apne rk ke saharey...god madz yeh gadha tujhe save karega. .tu uske pyar mein jogan ban gayi hai...rk is angry but keeps quiet...armaan- Ridz u don't turn around till I tell u...u won't believe but she is ur

omg a big twist but wat is rk and ridz, pia and metz are lookalike... plz complete ch.4 soon...

Xerox except she has straight hairs and u r s is sexily curvy...he winks at her both rk and madz r smirking as well...Metz is watching all these...she frowns . She shouts...nadan logon...tumhe mujhse darr nahi lag raha. U people r smiling...strange why cant I hear u all...its impossible...jitna mera gussa badega mai itni buri maut doongi tumlogon ko...rk is smirking...rk khud rk se darta hai...kisi aur ko himmat nahi rk ko darane ki...Ridz..glares at him...aise sadu dialogs maaroge toh film siperflop hogi...tum dono humdono ki wajah se safe ho...and dont worry ds aa rahi hai...all r nervous and confused as to what to do...maithili..is watching them smiling...shes getting more and more furious...she calls out ..Siddhartha...a man in a hood comes forward with his head bent...all three look towards the new man...Ridz wants to turn but armaan stops her...the man removes his hood...rk is shocked...he says bhai...they can hear Metz but she can't...Metz-huskily,she smiled at him...u do love me no Sid...u r a very powerful vampire...we two make a very good team...now I want you to go and kill those two stupid humans...now...they r irritating me...prove ur love for me Sid. .
Sid-BUT Y KILL THOSE HUMANS...WE NEED TO KILL THOSE PRINCESSES RIGHT...U TOLD THEY AREN'T GOOD FOR US...
METZ- U DONT LOVE ME SID...IF U DO...U WILL KILL THEM...
Die-hard FINE...I WILL PROVEMY LOVE TO YOU...HE TURNS TOWARDS THEM AND GETS THE SHOCK OF HIS LIFE ...HES STUNNED SEEING RK...HE CANT MOVE HIS LEGS...HORRIBLE EXPRESSIONS ON HIS FACE.. ..my little bro...he wants to cry but can do nothing...
All r shocked hearing rk...what he's ur bro...rk stammered...yes but he with maithili? Howcone? He died 4 yrs ago in an accident...he had fallen from the cliff...madz - was his body found. ..
No said rk...so he is converted omg...rk cries for the first time...both the bro r seeing each other intensely...Ridz is shocked hearing sids thts...she tells everyone...Sid recognized u rk...he wants to cry...he's been ordered to kill you...and if he doesn't...Metz will kill u...he's worrying for u but he's helpless...coz he's chained by Metz ...this spell can only be broken by Metz if she herself says he is free...mentally u have already broken his spell...feelings for u r so powerful within him that he's come to no the truth that Metz is deceiving him..he too wants to be free...
Mets has enough...she's shaking with anger...she starts chanting something to break the safety shield...both Ridz and madz start getting pains...their heads start spinning..madz says I am feeling very week...Ridz I can't hold more...Ridz too is striving hard to concentrate...madz pales and falls down . Mets laughs...Ridz is angry...she's burning in rage...she turns towards Metz and glares at her ..every one is shocked...her eyes r spitting fire...Metz is flewn towards a tree...Ridz has lost all control. .she burns almost all 5 6 vampires by her glare...she runs towards Metz . Ridz...u hitch...just coz of u my sis madz is suffering...I will kill you...rk us holding madz crazily...he's crying...Metz yells for Sid... What r you doing moron...go and kill all the three if they r dead...she will alone be of no use...Sid is too clever...he's understood her true colors ..he's wicked plans an idea to free himself...he tells.. METZ...I CANT DO THIS...U HAVE CHAINED MY POWERS...I CAN KILL HUMANS BUT NOT PRINCESS TILL U FREE ME...
Metz-Dont u dare cheat me Sid...I free you but u gotta come back to me...I havemade u what u r today...just remember that...
SID-U KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE U...U SHLD TRUST ME AS I DO...I DONT CHEAT WITH TRUTH...METZ FREES HIMSELF...HE RUNS TOWARDS HIS BROTHER...
Ridz ABD Metz are blazing fire with there eyes ..she smiled...so u little one ...u r the real chosen one...I wont let u live...I have killed you 3 Times before in previous births And this time too...her eyes become blood red.. Her fangs r out...she jumps on ridz...but ridz too moves away with ab amazing speed...ridz- not this time u moron...u hurt my sis...am gonna kill you...shes started feeling weak...her head is spinning...she glares at Metz...Metz- you know as ur sister weakens so will you...she jumps towards her to rip her off...but is thrown back by armaan...her eyes widen...Metz shouts you not a human...oh no...u,r son of pratham And gauri...u slayer wizard.. Ridz- oh ARMAAN...what DoD you do...u accepted ur rights...oh no..y u never wanted this...