Deewaane Hum teri Mohobbat Me OS * last part will update epilouge - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
nice update
maan suffered a lot in his childhood
nd maan express himself to geet wow


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love maan teasing
geet is innocent
till now she didn't even realize maan kaha se aa gaya
Edited by lovesia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Awesome update dear

Loved it

Continue soon

Waiting for more

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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
wow so much happened with them right
and he had to grow up before time
and no wonder he doesnt like sam's family and sam
well they are all just greedy ppl
but at least geet was able to take care of his siblings some what right
and its funny she was getting jealous of maan's angel who filled his life with happiness and hope not realising that she is the same angel
man it was so funny when she was cribbing about the angel who is her only
and so cute naa when she realised that she is the angel when he made her look in the mirror
man she is so cute and sweet maan's mishty
she couldnt understand how maan got in considering she had locked the door behind her
and maan teasing her of the same god how sweet
pls do continue with more soon

Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

just read it now

plsss plss plss plsss update soon

its a beautiful story ..

i love the way maan n geet is thr for each other everytime ...

plzzz update soon ..

n do pm me plzzz

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part1--

aoww I just loved the unconditional Love Maan n Geet had on each other just loved how over each step Maan n Geet were for each other how uncondition and innocent their loved was for each other

hushh she gave away her dream for him and he is ready to give away his being for her...aowww I actually wonder kya Maan n Geet jaisa love aaj b aise hota hai yaa nahi??

Aowww this was all sooo cute and mesmerizing yaar...their sacrifises and love for each other was an epic in show and in this FF as well the untold bound is just owsome!! Love it

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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

Part2--

hushhh this is todays world where ppl chance in a friction of scnd jus to see the wealth and prestige the other hold in his power aowww hate those bloody brij n Sameera KKC hai wo dono

aowww so aftr all this Maan came back to his Life, his mishty his geet aoww surpirse k sath wo b aowww ni main marr jawan he is sooo cute sometyms yaar...hehehe end pasrt where he say ab kaha jaaogi...LoLz blushing...Ab Maanu apni mishty ko kaise mnaayega?? Aoww so cute na!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Sanam1234u: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome and lovely os dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Last Part...

she look at maan...Maan ap andr kaise aye???
maan just shake his head at her foolishness...he come long way befor and now she is realizing that how he come to her room...but he smile noughtly and said ...misty daewajese aur katse aubga...tumbhina ..lgtahe tumhari tabiyat thik nahi he jo aise ajib sawal puch rahi ho...
nahi maan mene sachm darwaja lock kiya tha ...sachii...to ap kaise ander aye??she asked inocently
maan just smile at her inocence...mishty mebhi sach kehraha hu me darwaje sehi aya..
lekin maan ye kaise hosktahe jab mene darwaja khola hi nahito???
to mene kab kaha ke me is darwaje se aya...saying so maan pointed at her rooms main door give alopside smile...
to fir ap kahase aye...
maan said wo mera secret he...nahi bataunga...
secret ????maan ap yaha pehli bar ayehe itnesalose yaha rehkr muje nahi pata aur apko pata chal gaya?

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------It 's has been 2 days since maan is come to HP...he is busy with mohinder rano and his siblings..ofcource how to forget his mishty...there romance is in full swing...but still both dosent confess it to each other..
here Sam is finding ways to impress Mann and get access to his power...Balveer also is in same thought to make maan his son in law...he want to marry maan sam to by hook or crook...
He gose to HH in pretext of meeting with maan...
Are maan bete itne din hogye tumhe aye but tum apne uncle se milne nahi aye..said balveer ever so sweetly...kahi apne is uncle ko bhul to nahi gaye..
Ap bhulane wale logomese nahi ho...said maan with straight ...though balveer notice scarsam in it but choose to ignore it...
Maan bete me wo darsal tumhe shamkeliye dinnerp bulane aya tha...then looking at maans facial expression he imidiately said...dekho beta na mat kehna ekto hamare simrn ke bete ho tum aur itne salo bad ayeho please ajana muje acha lagega...
maan thought for a while ..though he is list interested ...but he wnat to know intension of his suddenly so call sweet talks...and he noded for yess..
tumme bulkul simrn ki jlk dikhti he beta said balveer showing fake tears..
Maan geting piss off seeing his drama...and leave from threre saying i have some work to do... without giving any glance at balveer...
Later at evening maan in geets room...Mishty tum bhi chalo,me akele bore hojaunga...
maan tum akele kaha ho tayaji taiji he fir sam he ...bhrij virji honge tum in sbme akele kaise huye?bolo? tumbhina itne bade business tycon ho but kabhi kabar bacho jaisi bat krte ho...saying so she started to laugh...
Maan instad of geting angry get lost in her ...she look so prety while smiling...he think...
Maan tried many more time but geet didnt budge...so finaly he went alone ...as dev and vicky outright denied to come there...instade they said they want to spend time with geet...maan roled his eyes but smile seeing there bonding...
here balveer make extra effort to butter maan ...he inform his wife that he invited maan for dinner and make arrengement ...sam listening to this started geting ready...as balveer asked her to prepare and impress maan any how...he thought as sam is beautiful he will easily trap him in her daughter's beauty...he got to knows about geet and maans closeness when he visited handa haveli...so he thought to trap him as soon as possible...

when maan come everyone is treating him like anything...showing extra affection towords him...
Sam come and seeing him she just started ogle at him openly...she very seductively come near maan and sit beside him very close...Hi maan meet after very long time...said sam very seductively...
Maan give her his one of stern look...and said sam maintain distance i hope your mom and dad taught u this much manners how to behave with boys...though sam felted insulted she still gives one of sweet smile...
ohh come on maan tum bahar wale thodina ho..jo aise keh rahe ho...afterall we are childhood friends...said sam flashing her one of very sensus smile and she put her hand on his lap lening more on him...
Maan who is trying very hard from begining to control brok his patients...
He push her hard and rored ..MISS SAMEERA HANDA what the hell is this????apni had me raho...tum jaisi lakho ladkiya mere age piche ghumti he is trah ki ghatiya hrkete kar ke MAAN SINGH KHURANA ko hasil krneka spna dekhana chod hi do...tumhari itni aukat nahi he ke me tumhe ak njr dekh saku aur tumhari itni himmt???
Seeing that matter geting worse and out of hand Balveer try to pecify maan...bete kya hua usse koi glti hogyi kya?dekho wo nadan he bachi smj kar maaf krdo...
Darsal wo tumhe pasand krtihe isiliye shayad kuch nadani ki hogi...tumhare pyar me puri pagl hogayi he...mene ise kitna smjaya per meri mane tabna...patahe isne to sara ghar sar p leliya tha tumhare ane ki khume...ye sara khana isine banaya he tumhareliye apne hatose...pagli he...darsal use ye sab nahi pata wo geet ke sath rehkr...jarur usine sikhaya hoga...wrna sam ko to in sab bato ke barem pata hi nahi he...bohot bholi he meri bachi ...said rano trying to put all blame on geet...

Listening geets name maans anger rose to its pik...BASSS..ab aur nahi geet ka nam apni gandi juban se lena bhi mat..said maan furiously...aur kya kaha apki neti bholi he...maan smirk ..and said wo to muje pata he ke kitni bholi he...me wo chotasa maan nahi jo apki bato me ajau...MAAN SINGH KHURANA ko fasana namumkin he...smje tum aur ha apki beti ke late night parties and ha wo one stand wale kisse muse pata he...said maan with smirk...aur apni is beti ko meri geet se compare krna bhi mat ye geet ke peroke ungli ke barabr bhi nahi he smje Mr.Balveer Hanad...saying so maan leave from there...

Next few days pass very son for maan ...in this time he propose geet in very romantic way ...and all the preparation done...now there wedding is fixed for which just a day is left ...
geet is standing in her room looking at window ...maan come from secret door...and saw geet standing near window looking outside lost somewhere...
He didnet like her silent..Geet ..said maan huskily ...kya soch rahi ho???saying so he hug her from back..geet lean on him and said wqt kaise beet gaya pata hi nahi chalana maan??lgtahe he jaise kal ki hi bat ho jab hm yaha khela krte the ...terec per chup chup ke mila krte the...
hmmm...said maan puting his head on her sholder...
waise geet tumne age kuch krneka socha he ya nahi???
mtlb geet said not geting what he said...mera mtlb apna carrer ...tum itni achi ho apne field me..
heet sigh...nahi maan ...jane do...chodo un batoko..
maan turn her arround ..cup her face...geet me chata hu tum apna her wo spna pora karo jo tumne dekhata tha...mene tumhare liye ak surprise plan kiya he...listening to surprise geet smile exitedly...
surprise?kya he maan bolona...
geet bataumga to kaha surprise rage ga jaan...
geet twisted her lips...
mishty please aise face mat batao kal batata huna...please...me tumhe aise nahi dekhskta...and geet smile...suddenly she realised tomorrow is there marrige and maan is in her room..
Maaan...shouted geet...
geet kya hua itna kyu chilaa rahi ho?me yahi ho...said maan inocently...though heknow reason of her shouting..
maan ap itni rat ko mere kmrem kya kar rahe he?ma ne mana kiya he..koi dekhega to ap please jayiye yaha se...
maan is not ready to go..
please maan tum abhi jao please pleaded geet..
and maan has to go..

there marrig has done maan give her surprise by making her MD of his IT company which he open just for geet..geet is so much overhelm with it...
life is going very smooth for them now ...they are happy in there smaal world...dev and vicky to join maan in business and ANY well she didnt leave geet..she also choose computers just like her geetdi and now working with her in Khurana Technology...and they live happily ever after...


Hey friends i knoe this is very fast and short update but i realy didnt get time to update...so thought to end this OS...sorry for late ..i was held up with studies and exams and now with training...please bear the irregular updates..but from now i will try to give regular update atleast once a week...thanku for ur support...and ha give likes and coments..
for PM for another FF add me ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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such a sweet update love it
sam nd uski family geet ko galat bol rahe the
but love the way maan answered them

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