Deewaane Hum teri Mohobbat Me OS * last part will update epilouge

Hey everyone...i'm back and thought to continue this OS as an SS...give some more parts or may be Epilouge about there after married life and office life????

what say???

pls tellme if i can do his or not????

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Hey gues this is an OS and will finish in 2 or 3 parts ...please bear my english and spelling mistake...and give lots of coments and likes please...if u enjoy it...😊

Part 1

A 8yr old boy was seting bending his head and cryingconinoudly'without making any noise

An 7yys girl come and see him crying scilently'she come andsit besides him'

Ya hua???asked the girl'

No reply'

Auntyne paise nahi diye na??

Still no reply'

Yelo'she forword her hand which has money'

That boy keep looking at her and money alternatively'

Ye mere he sachi'said girl pinching her throught'god promice'merepigy box mese layi hu'abto lona'please..she cutly said to him..

That boy stop crying and wipe his tears with bak of his palmand take money from her'

U r most cute person u know that???said boy giving a kiss on girls chick

Jantihu tum hamesha hi kehte ho'said girl abto smile karonatum rote huye bilkulbhi ache nahi lgte'I want my sweet maan back'

And maan gave a cute smile to his mishty his geet'

Yes these two are none other than our maan and geet'maansfather left her mother and since then his mom is living with her brothers inthere house'she do lots small job for her daily expence'and she struggl a lot to raise the four kids on her own'maandev Vicky and little any'

Geets dad mihinder handa is unemploteed there daly needs areprovided by her maternal uncles 'her mother save every peny for her childrengeet raji and tito'though they have lots of land but due to lack of rain allare unemployed 'geets father and maans mother simran asr siblings..they haveone more brother balveer who also live in same house but there condition isgood .Balveer's son is working in some company and thus there life is smoothgoing'he didn't bother to look after his siblings as what r they are eating orhow they are living'though they live in same house but still all live are separate'balveeron ground flor which contain lots of room and also full furnished'all thedecore r done during when family is joint'as when all the interior is donebalveer make anoncmet that now onwords he will live separtly..balveer was notbad persone but due to his wife and mother in law who eventually liv with himchange him completely'he has four children 'younger one is dev then par,simiand sam.sam is of same age as geet.

She is cunning 'and too much selfish'alwaus treat maan asdirt and slave and always taunt him that he is living in there house '

On second floor maans familylive and on third and last floorgeets family'maan and geet always come on terac and play with each other'geetis to much sensitive towords maan at this smaal age to ..the bond between geetand maan is unknown to everyone as they never show there concern towords eachother or u can say no one is interested in knowing it..everyone is busy inthere life'

Today as usual last date as to pay fee and simren dosenthave any pany'so she scolded maan and got busy in her work'.at this small agemaan is become much mature due to cruel world..at this tender age he come toimportance of money in live'he himself is living example of it'

Geet as useal know that maan dosent pay his fees and brokher pigy and gave her saving to maan 'she never able to see him sad'the moneyis given by her maternal uncles to her whenever she goes to meet them or whenthey come'for choclat'but she never spend any of it as she also know theimportanc of it'she save it and when need use it'so she gave to maan'

There life always like this one always knows what otherwants...

Maans mom adore geet but she always says that when maan growshe will make riji her bahu'as simren is fond of riji'

Time pass now maan is 13yr and geet is 12yr'

Due to cotinous illness maans mom hospitalized'

Its been 2 months but there is no im provment in simrenscondition 'little any numerous time cride for her mom'

At that time maan and geet look after her as rano geets momis with simren in hospital'

And then maans world colaps completely'.simran finaly livethis world'leaving maan and his siblings behind to liv by themselves'maan nevercried on her mothers deth'all thought that may be he gets shok as he is stillsmall and missing his mother'but at that time something chand in him'he becomcold by then towords everyone 'though they still liv there hi himself took careof his siblings'as maan is brilnt in study balveer says that he cant able totake responcibility of all children..he said I will look after maan and dev asthey both are young enough to do there chore with demselvs'leaving any and Vickyto be look after by mihinder'

By now mininder is stated earning some money'.

Maan always took care of his siblings'

He started part time job for his brother and sistr'he neverwanted them to depend on other'geet all time liik after little any and Vicky'devwas busy in study'

Maan is intelegnt kid 'so he only concentrate in class andlater after shool he work'

Life is going like this only'whenever he gets frustrated orangry he used to come on terac and to vigroys excersiz'in school he learn taichi'he do daily practice of it'

Later maan and geet are in same class as they both choosesame strm..science'.where as sam is in commerce'she dosent have any interestedin study'rather she is often busy to enhance her buty'maan stop talking to samlong back due to her nature'neither sam concern about it'she is rather gladthat she wont need to talk to such low class people...but she is friendly withgeet as she need her help in study atlest to get pass'.

When 12th result were out maan top in whole state'hegot sclorship and admission in reputed college'but college is in another city'andhe is not willing to there'geet make maan understand that if he will completehis study with that college then he got the one of bestest job in india and hecan look after better any and Vicky and dev'they r still in school'maan got convincehe thought only 4 yrs then he will look after his siblings no need to depend onother '

He always fullfill all wishes of his sibling by doing 3 parttime job after school'he barly got to sleep...

Maan left for city'while living he liik for geet but didn't findher'he then search her for in her room she is not there also'he know where shewill be'and he go to terec at there hidout place'there she was siting andcrying silently'

Maan hart pain to see his mishty like that 'yes by now herealise that he love her insanely'to his mishty who always supported him in alltime'who look after his siblins share his responsibility while hi is busy inwork'now also she is one who assure him about any and Vicky as dev is capable to look after himself'now also shegave him confidenc that bhe can become successful'that he wiil achieve all hisdrems'

He calld her coming out of his thought'.

Geet'janese pehle milogi nahi???

Geet didn't respond'

Mishty I will not able to meet u for 4 years please'

And geet turn and hug him dearly'still crying'

Tum muje bhul to nahi jaoge na???asked geet innocently???lookinginto his eyes ..

Koi apne dhkan ko bhul skta he bhala???asked maan'me apni mishitko kaise bhul skta hu'ha bolo mishty'

t m muje leter to lokhogena??she asked innocently'

Maan smile at his cutemishty'ha baba likhumga'and apna khayal rakhna'and any our Vicky ka bhi'sayingso he hug her closing his eyes'trying to capture the moment'knowing that hewill not able to see her complete 4 years'then he separated 'chalo mishty timeagayahe'I have to go'

Geet noded dtill tear drop from her eye'maan geltly wipe itand kis it'geet please mishty tum muje cmjor kar rahi ho..u only said ke me jauplease muje hske wida karo'wrna I will not able to live properly knowing u rcrying'please for me please give me smile'my bubbly geet back'geet gave faintsmile'

Maan gone to complete his studies'he kept writing leter togeet as promiced all possible time'there also he took an part time job at anconstruction firm'they scholarship money also he save 'he spend rarly o anything'he started to learn the rule ofbusiness side by side doing study'

Now maan is 20 yr and geet is 19

He open his company with the money he save from childhood'heis master in computers and due to his this much experience he knew the all waysof business by now'he started his construction business'but he needed largespace for it for that he needed more money 'he always kept geet updated withhis track'only she know he is starting his company and through his last letershe come to know that he neede mony for buying land'geet is persuing her studyin computer'due geet only maan is master in it'as geet teache him it'and fromlast 2 years geet is working on something for which last month some companyasked her for that software'but geet denied saying its her and she will notssling it to other..its her achievement she will not give others name to it'maanalso new about it'as nobady knows that geet has made any such software'hertalent is hiddn from all at home'

But now as she come to know that maan required money'shewithout thinking twice contact the company and set appointment with them'

She sell her software and transfer all amount in maansaccount'.and said maan to check his account'

When maan check his account he got shoked that how come thismuch amount come in his account he imidiately called geet asking what is ut'geetthen said that she sell her software '.maan is shoked as he know she outrightdenied for that then y she sal it???

He hsas tear in his eyes'having geet in his life'here hejust mention his problem and withought thinking for once sold her drem 'justfor him'

Where geet scolded him for thinking such thought'she madehim relax saying that its not that important'though maan knew she is justtrying to calm him'

Waise maan muje bhi nahi pata thaw o log itne paise deng issoftware'but anuways achahena ab tumhe kisi bat ki tension nahi tum ab aramseapna business start kar sakogena'said geet chirply'

Maan just smile whole hartdly'his mishty never care abouther self when it come to him all things are faded from her mind'only thing shecare is her maan'he thought how lucky I m

Hii...so how was concept...first time i gave this long part...hope u guyes like it...and its an real story with some changes done by me...😊

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Part -2

When maan check his account he got shoked that how come this much amount come in his account he imidiately called geet asking what is ut'geet then said that she sell her software '.maan is shoked as he know she outright denied for that then y she sal it???

He hsas tear in his eyes'having geet in his life'here he just mention his problem and withought thinking for once sold her drem 'just for him'

Where geet scolded him for thinking such thought'she made him relax saying that its not that important'though maan knew she is just trying to calm him'

Waise maan muje bhi nahi pata thaw o log itne paise deng is software'but anuways achahena ab tumhe kisi bat ki tension nahi tum ab aramse apna business start kar sakogena'said geet chirply'

Maan just smile whole hartdly'his mishty never care about her self when it come to him all things are faded from her mind'only thing she care is her maan'he thought how lucky I m

Now Maan started his business as he has much cash to stat it by buying new land made a office…he new he have to save some money as its start only and one never new at white time what problem will arrived so instade of larg office he build quite good and better office with full furnished…as he had many contsct through people …he called all of them and inform about his business..

Its now one year and maans business is BOOM…

In small span of time he become popular…in businessworld he become so popular…first his looks as he workout daily…any one who first look at him got lost in his charm though be either it men or femal…then his attitude is kill for…he is rude arrogant…sharp minded and always focus…he never takes its personal…he is through professional…his ideas in short anything about him made anyone to go gaga over him…in this one year he become most promising busenessman…People from business world now crecognise him by name MSK…no one has the guts to call him by his first name…

One day maan was as usual busy in office…today is most important day as one of the foreign delegates are going are going to come…if meeting and all goes well then he will bang 100 cror deal and then he will stand on number one position in whole delhi…and he working realy very hard for it…last night geet he was in total panic mood last night but after talking to geet he become relax …

His door knoks…

Come in…said maan still ingross in his file…

s…irr wo..oo stammer adi his one of the trust worthy employee…and head account of KC..

maan gets annoyed by his stammering…spit it out adi…I'hv lots of work than listening to urs bkwas whole day…said maan angrly..

soory sir…wo deligates will be here within 10 min…inform adi in full speed and then take full breath before stop looking at his boss for next instruction…

ok adi chek conference room onnc again and inform me at there arrival..said maan

adi noded and gone from there…

within no time deligates arrived and all followed to conference room…when maan arrived in room he get formally introduced with them…but one porson is most shoked or can say is stood rooted seeing maan as md of Kc…its none other than brij…yes he is working for this XYZ mnc and as its going to expand there business in india they want to construct there branches in 3-4 place in delhi and panjab…

but maan showed no imotion seeing him…as for him he is nothing than a mere employee of this XYZ company..brij tried to impress his bosses by showing them that he knew maan infact he is his Big BROther…but his happiness shortlived as maan address him as Mr.handa it will be preferable if we start meeting I don't hv whole day for U..stressing on last part…and brij feel like his nose cut…still he try to give nervous smile…

later meeting goes well and as expected maan get the deal now within 6 mon th of completion of this project he will be on no 1 position in delhi…

this incidenc change many lives some in good way some in greedy way…

when brij found out that maan is now owner of Kc which is worth of 10000cror he then understood that why he brought his siblings from HP…as he never care about them so he never bother that y he would bring them with him and where he is staying …but niw everything is clear cryatal…he said all this thing to his parents and …now balveer's and his family s perpective about maan change completely…especially his wife and his MIL….now they thought to trap maan by showing fake love on him…and most importantly Sam …when she first look at his pic in magzin she didn't belived her eyes that this id same maan whome she insulted god knows how many times…she now curs herself y she do that…but don't worry…stiil I will get him as who will say no to buity like me…thought SAM …now she wanted maan as he has power and money fame…and looks to kill for…he looks dedly hansome…

here our geet is as usuall…busy behind any …yes any still stay with geet she refuse to go without her geet di…as she consider her as her mom…any was to small when her mom take last breath so she remember only geet …as geet had taken her responsibility…she hate sam …sam always tount her and make fun of her…now…when everyone stated showing there fake lov on any she got confuse with there behavior…

balveer and his wife try to oversweet with any…but she directly refuse to talk to them…she hated there mare presence…she loved to get pamper by rano and geet…she loves them dearly…

now maan is 24 and geetis 23…

in this time balveer try many times to meet maan but he never get chance to meet him as he will always busy in his meeting and all…and specialy its not easy to take MSK's appointment…

balveer dosent knoe maans whereabout…his home address…he only knew that he linve in delhi…but know no proper address…as maan never come HP as he promiced geet that he will come only after finish is study and later he want to do something big for his mishty…

now maan is famous in whole world…he is no 1 position in india…he brought dev and Vicky to delhi as for there further studies…he never let them feel lonely…or alone he is there every steps in there life as there support…by now dev and Vicky also knew that maan and geet love each other…and they also only listen to geet only…they are to much attach to her…she is the one who supported them in HP when maan was in delhi for his study…maan brought an big haveli for minder in HP and he made him stay in there only with any and geet…

now maan was returing to HP o her after what feels likes ages…he is so much happy to see his mishty after so long though he talk almost daly still he didn't saw her neither…she they promice to each other to see oneanother at same time…and here he is going to his mishty…dev and Vicky also tag him as they r also desperate to meet geet…seeing respect for geet in his siblings eyes maan felt proud of his mishty…how easily sge handel every thing in his absence .and not to forget his rano aunty make his siblings great personality…

As four cars stood infront of haveli bodyguard come and open door for maan …he come out wering his famous black outware…listening to cars sound balveer and his family also come outside as handa haveli which maans brought is biside of balveer house…sam mouth fell open seeing so much handsome maan and the aura the power he poses …her eyes shine looking 4 new black BMW standing infront of HH…she is now more than desperate to get maan…get ready maan I m going to make u mine…and will use this much of welth of urs…hahaha se smile cunningly…but what she don't know is this is no more maan but MAAN SINGH KHURANA…the great MSK…who is terror in businessworld…and sam is like ant infront of himself…

He step out of car and goes to HH…rang the bell….

Ayi …come a melodious voice…his hert skip several bits and he knew owner of voice mishty he whisper gently…

In tranc he forget that he is still pressing bell continuously causing geet to get irrited…as she is engors in teaching any and this impatient intruder is no where to stop from pressing the bell..cursing the person whosoever was she marched towords the door…

Geet puttr dekh to kon he…kbse bell baj rahi he…pata nahi kon he bechara…

Bechara my foot…ek to mera constration kharab kiya and then continous beel rang kar mera sar dard karnelaga he…

Bas ekbar me drwaja kholu sach kehrahi hu babaji use to me chodungi nahi…muje geet handa ko tang krne ki hiimt ki….

And she went on main while anyn is laughing seeing her plight…

Geet snap at her kya he ku has rahi ho…study me dhyan do…me abhi ayi…and she open the door still looking at backword at any any talking with her…when door open withought seeing person she shouted …dikhainahi deta kya ???log pareshan hote he ….had he…continue rang kiye ja rahe ho…ab ham behre thodi he jo nahi suneng …ek bar m hme sunai deta he…and she went on and on…until she saw the person and her voice got struch in her throught…she lost in his eyes…she shoked…happy…surprise..overhelmed..and what not…she seeing him after like ages…god knows how maby times she imagin him with her …how will he looks now…what he doing and what not some time she desperately took magzin to his picture but then there promice to see each other same time remindedher then she halfhardly put that mgzin…noew seeing him…she just coudent put in her words …she fear to blink her eyes what if it like her dream and when she open her eyes he will disaper like always…she touch his face to make belive her hert that he is realy here infront of her…her maan only her…then he said wisper mishty…softely…only to audinle for herself…listening to him her happiness has no bound…she imidiately hug him out of excitement…

Here maans codition is not less than her…when she open the door…he lifted his ges to look the most beautifull site in the world…his breth cought in hold looking at her beauty…geet grown up to the most georgeous women he would have ever seen…his mishty is looking like out of the world…as he expected…then listning to her voice …oh god he lost again himself more and more in him…its like music to his ears…and the faces she made while talking ..he just want to take those luscious lips in his…she look so cute while making those sweet faces…

Ahmmm ahmmm someone cough to get there attemtion…its vickey and dev…they seen there brow and geet get lost …so to brought them back they …

Geet gets gets embrass…mut maan give his glare to both to shut …but they knew infront of geet they r sfe abd they ponce on geet…

hey geet…geet di…both dev and Vicky shouted and hug geet same time…miss u a lot dear…

geet also reciprocat hug and said mene bhi bohot miss kiya…

then rano and any come…kon he geet kitna shor he...kon ay..she stop in between to see the 3 people there …maan she exclamd in delight…and maan takes blessing from them and then hug her…ranos happiness knew no bounds…looking maan after so much time…she has tear in her eyes seeing him…

seeing her rano mom crying Vicky said to lightn mood …rano mom hm bhi he…hame bhi gale lagao…and puted…

while dev said bhai k ate hi hme sab bhul gaye pehl gee tab ap…hamar akoi nhi he yaha and make fake crying face…

badmash chup…saying rano pul there ear

are maa hm mjak kar rahe the…pls pls pls…hame maf kardo…said both…

thik he is bar maf kardiya saying so she embrass both of them…

bhaiii…shouted any whe see maan after 1 year…yes any used to visit maan in summer during her holiday…

any saying so maan hug any smiling whilehartly…she is his princess..and ofcourse he and geet made shure she never feel less thsn princess…kaise ho asked maan kissing her forhead…

im fine bhai and ap …apne meri gift layi na aur wojo mene apse game lane kaha tha and wo….and she went on and on…until geet interepted…

any tuje pata tha maan ane wale he???she asked any angrily…

and any bit her lips to askd infront of geet for gifts now she will get scold…

wo ummm wo geet di wo…

any ha ya na…

ha lekin…

kya????????tumhe pata tha and tumne muje nahi bataya???me janti hu sab mile huye he…hu jao me nahi krti kisise bat…saying so geet pouted and look at maan from corner of her eyes for his reaction but looking no effect left from there angrily…

while everybody shake there head at geets nutanki…and maan knew it means he have to manifoy her…and he lov to do that …specialy now face to face…

rano said janodo use thodi derm ajayegi tum log fresh holo me khana lagati hu…

ha ranoma muje to bohot joro se bhuk lagi he…said vickye

dev smaked his head aur kitna khayega???abhi to pizaa khayathja rastem…

bro use khakr 2 hrs hogaye…mere bechare pet ka to khayal karo…and they went on and on…

here maan goes t his room showed by any which is next to geet…ans maan has made it himself…he knew every thing ..there is door in between there room which nobady noticed…looking at door

now dekhte he tum kaise nahi manti mishit…saying so maan smirked…

sorry for late but im realy hell busy...as my exam r going to start ...and there is lots of pending work ...anyway how was part...if u like it please likes and gives coments and long one...