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Posted: 12 years ago
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guys that was the half part so here is the full one enjoy and sorry for that
now viren finally find jeevika and both are in jungle thinking wat to do next
viren-main rasta bhul gaya hun jahan se aya tha
jeevika-kya tum bhul gye plz yaad karne ki kosish karo
viren-i can't understnad ki mein left se aya tha ya right se kyunki tum achanak se aa gyi woh bhi dari hui
jeevika-toh mein kya karti main darr gyi thi
jeevika and viren were wlking in the jungle suddenly jeevika's leg got injured by big stone
viren hold jeevika as she about to fall becoz of that stone
viren-tum thik toh ho na
jeevika-hmm i am okk (with pain )
jeevika is not able to walk properly finally seeing this viren hold her in arms
jeevika-nhi main chal sakti hun tumhe mujhe uthan eki koi jarurat nhi hai
viren-nhi tum nhi chal paogi aur waise bhi hum iss problem mein meri wajah se hai hume raat guzarne ke liye koi ghar ki jarurat hai
jeevika-yaa but there is nothing
suddenly rain started viren-ohh god baarish ko bhi abhi hi ana tha
jeevika-wow such a lovely rain
viren looked her and said-tumhe pata bhi hai agar hume rukne ke liye koi jagah nhi mili toh hum beemar padh jayenge
finally they found a small cottage
jeevika-koi hai yahan
viren-lagta hai koi nhi hai
jeevika feel some cold
viren-i will arrrange sum born fire..
jeevika-ook
jeevika put her hair on side and started to dry her long hairs
viren lost in her when she was doing that and looked her without blinking his eyes
jeevika looked at him and siad-kya hua
viren-hmm kuch nhi
jeevika continues to dry her hairs
viren came close to her and jeevika stands and looked in his yes
viren-tum gele balon mein kitni khubsurat lagti ho
jeevika said nothing and looked him viren came more close to her and hold her from back.. and abt to kiss jeevika on her lips
suddenly jeevika stopped-tum yeh kya kar rahe plz leave me
viren stopped -sorry i was just lost in u
jeevika-looked him and said -kyun??
viren-i think tum mere liye bhut kass ho... now i felt that i really feel sumthing for u
jeevika stands staight and freezed
now wat will jeevika say to viren that she also feels sumthing for him or not
i will update it in next part till enjoy this comment guys fast how this ??

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Posted: 12 years ago
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woow 1st one to comment suberb ypdate

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brilliant plz continue soon yaar this time really fast
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brilliant
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Superb update
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Woh awesome update.
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wooow loved it love to see jeevikas words..
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