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aparna velayudhan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Loved it yarrr...
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athira

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

nice part

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varshini karthik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Beautiful... Arjun understands Arohi... But i think Arohi needs to open up atleast a bit to Arjun... I mean, now that they have come pretty close, Arjun deserves atleast that much of assurance from her... especially after all that Arohi has done, like she has always reacted horribly whenever Arjun did something nice... So she needs to clear her feelings to him, before even expecting him...

Edited by Varshu_Karthik - 12 years ago

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shreya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

awesome aupdate dear. arjun is palnning something for him..

picnic??? lets see humara arjun kya karne wala hai.

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Nira Mukherjee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Part:-30
Next day morning Arohi wake up hearing Gouri's voice , she is arranging all necessary things for picnic.
"Arohi . . .uth jao aur jaldi ready ho jao . . ."---Gouri says removing curtain from windows.
Arohi get up from the bed & ask---
"Arjun aa gaya?"---Gouri turns to her , her lips become a little bit wide , then she again removes curtains.
"nehi mei bas aise hi puch rehi thi . . .normally"--- Arohi says & tucked some hair logs behind her ear.
Gouri left without giving her any answer , she thought---"mei kyun soch rehi hu Arjun ke bare mei . . ."---she get down from the bed & going for bath.
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The front-yard of the house is become a mound of bags. Arohi is standing in a corner. Her eyes are finding the very special person. But Arjun is not there, She at last board in the bus & surprised to seeing Arjun sitting beside a window.
"Tum yahaan ho?''---She ask.
"haan . . .waiting for u . . ."---Arjun says.
She smiles. Gouri , Uncle & all kids are come to the bus, the bus moves on. In the bus they all enjoyed the journey with singing, playing antakhsari. But Arohi was so much silent today.
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They reaches at the picnic spot at noon. The place was so beautiful , so calm, fresh. Gouri is standing near a tree , while Uncle come to her & says---
"Gouri ek baat kahu?"---She turns back to uncle.
"Haan . . .uncle kahiye na . . ."---She says.
"Tumhe nehi lagta ye Arjun ke ane ke baad Arohi bahot khushi khushi rehti hei . . ."---He says looking at arohi , who is preparing food.
"Haan . . .lagta toh hei . . ."---Gouri replies.
"Toh . . .undono mei . . ."---Uncle stops , because his thought was seems an impossible one.
"Uncle . . . mei samajhti hu . . .lekin mei kya karu . . ."---she is looking at the hill.
"Gouri nehi ab jo bhi karna hei mei karunga . . ."---Hearing this familiar voice they both turns back, it was Arjun. "please par ab koi sawal mat puchiye . . . mei sab kuch sambhal lunga . . ."---he added & left.
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Arjun is playing with some kids while his heart & mind were not with him. His gaze was stuck with Arohi.
"bachho tum sab khelo . . .mei abhi aya . . ."---Arjun says this to the kids & going to left.
"Are ap kaha ja rahe hei . . ."---one boy ask.
Arjun give him no answer & left , one boy ask to another---"ise kya ho gaya? . . ." the next boy replies "pyaar . . .chalo hum khelte hei . . ."
Arjun come to the place where Arohi is cooking ,
"Kuch chahiye . . .??"---she ask without raise her head.
"nehi . . .kuch help kar du . . ."---He says.
"Help . . . aur tum??"---She is laughing to hear this. "toh thik hei jao Uncle , Gouri aur bachho ko bula ke lao . . ."---she added & left.
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After lunch it was time to go back home , Gouri is packing all things when Arjun come close to her & says something to her ears, Gouri nodded. Then she says---
"Arohi . . .yahaan pe upar jo hill-side hei na . . .jahaan se sunset dikhta hei . . .tum jake Arjun ko dikha lao na . . ."---Arohi frown at her . "Lekin Gouri . . ."---she stops As Gouri says---
"Are kuch nehi hoga . . .hum bus mei wait kar rahe hei . . .par jaldi aa jana . . ."---they left without giving her no scope to reply. Arohi look at Arjun for sometime then says---
"chalo . . ."
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They are walking through the narrow road , it seems like a silent march.
"Tum itna chup kyun ho aaj . . .??"---At last he says to Arohi.
"nehi toh . . ."---she give him the short reply.
"tum yahaan pehle bhi ayi ho . . ."---he again ask.
"Haan . . ."---she now give him the shorter reply.
They already reached on the hill-side; Arohi is standing near a big tree, far away the sun is trying to hiding its face. her face is also looking pale in that setting sunlight. A cold breeze is blowing. He come to her & says---
"You know what . . .ye dubta hua suarj aur hamare zindegi mei bahot similarities hei . . ."
"similarities . . .?"---she ask.
"haan . . . ye dub jata hei ek nayi subah ki intezaar leke . . ."---He says.
"lekin insaan ke saath aisa nehi hota hei . . ."---she left & sit in the bench.
"jaise ye suarj dub jane ke baad hum chand ki roshni ke sahare jeete hei vaise hi kisike jane ke baad koi toh jarur ata hei vo haath tham ne keliye . . . andheron ke vajah se hum mar to nehi jate hei . . .aur jina bhi nehi chod dete hei . . .toh . . ."---he stops to seeing Arohi , she is sitting silently.
"kya hua . . .?''---He ask.
"tum bahot meaningful film dekhte ho na . . .?"---she ask & smiles.
"chalo . . .varna bus chut jayegi . . ."---he says & get up from the bench. Arohi is getting up from the seat but suddenly her legs collided with a big stone , she screams & sit there. Arjun come to her , sit beside her , he says---
"kya hua Arohi . . .r u alright . . .?"
"no . . ."---she says painfully.
"Aao . . .yahaan baitho . . ."---he holds her hand & helps her to sit in the bench, he says---
"kaise gir gayi tum . . .kya karti ho . . .ekdum bachhi ho!!"
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Here , Gouri & Uncle are in tension,
"Kaha rahe gaye ye dono . . . uncle vo log abhi tak aye kyun nehi . . .?"---she ask to uncle.
"haan . . .mei bhi vahi soch raha hu . . .bus bhi chutnewali hei . . ."---her voice seems to be worried.
In that time the bus starts to move , Gouri is running to the conductor & says---
"Bhaiyaa . . .abhi tak do log aye nehi . . ."
"Madam . . .hum kuch nehi kar sakte . . .dekhiye bus ki bhi ek time-table hoti hei . . .hume bhi toh apne malik ko jabab dena padega . . .aur shaam ke baad yahaan rehna thik nehi hei . . .ap unhe phone kijiye na . . ."
"Haan . . . already mei phone pe try kiya . . . lekin network nehi hei . . ."
"sorry madam . . .par hum bhi majboor hei . . ."
Gouri come & sit in her place, the bus moves on, far away the hill-side become blurry to her.
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Arohi is sitting holding Arjun's hand, her eyes are witness of her pain. Suddenly she raise her face & says---
"Arjun . . .mei na tumse . . ."---but she stops.
"bolo . . ."---he says.
"nehi rehne do . . ."---Arohi become silent!!
She can't share her feelings with him , her lips are an inches from Arjun , their breaths are unsteady. But she keep her head down. Their lips are silent but glances speak to each other silently . . .!!

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Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 12 years ago

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aparna velayudhan

@aparna4karanika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Ayyo dey missed deir bus,.
How il dey go back?? Wel if arjuhi s with each other den i ve no problm haha

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shreya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

awesome update yaar, so cute, going for picnic n missed the bus, reminding kmh2. wanted to know more. pls update soon.

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Nira Mukherjee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Part:- 31
Arohi is still sitting there with Arjun . She raise her head & says---
"Ab yahaan baithke kya hoga . . ."--- she stopped for a minute then she take a long breathe & added . . ."chalo . . ."---She get up from the bench. Arjun also get up with her & hold her shoulders " Tum chal paogi ab . . .?" --- he ask her with a worried voice. Arohi smiles & then look at her legs , "Haan . . ."---she replies. They are walking slowly , when they come to the bus-stand , it was already evening then. Arjun is looking here & there , but there is no sign of bus. The road was almost empty , except a group of men who are sitting there in front of fire. "Bus kaha hei . . ."---Arjun ask Arohi , it seems a scream. Arohi is also thinking about that , now she says---" mei bhi toh . . .bus chut toh nehi gayi . . .?"---now she ask him , it also seems a scream, but the difference between them is it was more louder than Arjun's. "Are agar aisa hota toh Gouri hume jarur bulati . . ."---Arjun tries to console her , but he is in tension. "Toh fir. . ."---Arohi says & sit under a tree , "tum ekbar Gouri ko try karke dekho na . . ."---She added. "Are network hi toh nehi hei . . ."---Arjun says looking at his phone.

The night is beautiful , The autumnal moon beams its mellow light. The moon is gloss like a piece of glass. it looks beautiful in the blue autumnal sky. The sky in Autumn is clear. Here and there a few patches of white clouds float swiftly. The moon plays hide-and-seek with these bulging pieces of clouds. It is very pleasant to look at the sky at the time and to hear the night-birds play their sweet notes in the moonlit sky. But they are in no mood of enjoying that.

"Ab hum kya karenge . . ."---Arohi says hopelessly.
"Ruko . . .vahaan kuch log baithe hei . . .mei baat karke ata hu . . ."---Arjun is going to left , but Arohi's sudden question make him stops---" ek second . . .tum vahaan jake kya baat karoge . . .?"---she ask him. "Are next bus kab hei ye puchna padega na . . .?"---Arjun answers , he left. Arohi sitting there alone , she is don't know very happy today. Actually she is enjoying this night with Arjun. it is true that she is in love with him, she is starting to love him even more than Aakash . . .may be!!

"bad news for us . . .bus fir kaal subah hei . . ."---Arjunsays , standing in-front of her. "Tum pagal ho . . .toh fir aaj raat hum kaha rahenge . . .?"---she says loudly. she is already get up from the ground , & with that Arjun go & sit there , "are tum baith gaye . . . utho . . .chalo . . .kaha rahenge hum . . ."---She is screaming , But Arjun give her no reply.

"Madam . . ."---hearing an unfamiliar voice Arohi turns back, Arjun also get up from there , seeing the man Arohi screams & hugs Arjun. "kya chahiye . . .?"---Arjun ask him , a man is standing in-front of them. There was a frozen darkness so they can't see the man exactly. "ap dono itni raat ko yahaan kya kar rahe hei . . ."---he again says , now Arjun says ---" bhaiyaa . . .hamari bus chut gayi hei . . .yahaan rehne keliye koi jaiga milega . . .??"---the man look at Arohi , she holds Arjun's hand tightly. "ye ladki kaun hei . . ."---the man ask. Arjun thinks for a moment & then says---"ye meri wife hei . . .hum yahaan honeymoon karne keliye aye the . . .aaj yahaan sunset dekhte dekhte late ho gaye toh bus chut gayi . . ."---Arjun give him a long speech. "Accha . . .chalo mere saath . . .mei kuch karta hu . . ."---the man left.

The man took them in a small house , the house is similar with any haunted house. "Light . . ."---The first word Arohi uttered entering in the house.
"Nehi hei . . ."---the man reply. Now he look at Arjun & says---" dekhiye ye ek ghar hei . . .ap yahaan reh sakte hei . . .lekin khane ka koi intezaam nehi hei . . .aur light bhi nehi hei . . ."---the man added.
"chalega . . ."---She answers , "thik hei . . ."---the man left. As soon as the man left Arjun come near her & says---
"chalega matlab . . .andhere mei kaise rahenge . . .?"---She hold his hand & took him to the front yard of the house , the front yard is floating in moon-light.
"dekho itna toh hei light . . .ye kafi nehi hei . . .?"---she says.
"hmmm . . .!!"---he is smiling.

Beside the front gate some men are sitting , they are listening songs in the radio. Arohi & Arjun sitting in the yard, she is looking at the moon, Arjun is gazing at her---
"kya dekh rahe ho . . .?"---she ask.
"tum aaj bahot khubsurat lag rehi ho . . ."---he says.
"Flirt kar rahe ho . . .?"---Arohi wink.
"are nehi sach . . ."---he says.
"Tum flirt karte ho toh accha lagta hei . . .!!"---Arohi says.;
"tum bhi flirt karna shik gayi ho . . ."---Arjun says with a cunning smile.
"itne dino se hum dono ek saath hei thoda asar toh hoga hi na . . ."---she says.
They are smiling , suddenly he feels a soft touch on his hand , he sees that Arohi is hold his hand, Arjun says---
"Are . . .ye . . ."
"No . . .please . . .i feel better . . ."---she says.
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The song stops , "Arohi ab andar chalo . . ."---Arjun says to her.
"nehi Arjunn . . . mujhe tumhe kuch batana hei . . ."---Arohi says , Arjun stops & frown. "kya . . .?"---he ask.
"Meri past ke bare mei . . .tum nehi janna chahte . . .?"---Arohi look at him.
"haan . . .lekin tumne hi toh . . ."---he stops .
"Aur aaj mei hi tumhe batana chati hu . . ."---she get up from the yard.

Arohi's face looks like a mystery , Arjun is gazing at her , may be he is trying to solve that paradox.

Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 12 years ago