KR OS: Love makes life beautiful prt3 pg22 pms ltr

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Posted: 12 years ago
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HAPPY NEW YEAR GUYS!!

Here's my new OS.

Part 1:

****Rey's POV****

Gosh she's so beautiful. Her eyes, her face, her angelic voice...everything makes me fall head over heels for her. The way she smiles, her cute pouts, everything make me go crazy..crazy for her. Oh! Common rey...whats wrong with you, She's your brother's would be wife, Stop thinking about her. But I'm helpless, every time I look into those mesmerizing eyes, they tell me that they want me..But Sigh!! this can't happen. She engaged to my bro..

****POV end****

****Kriya's POV****

Oh god what happening to me. Why do I keep dreaming about him. His eyes, his nature every thing of his attracts me towards him. I've fallen completely for him. Oh!! girl get a grip. You aren't supposed to think about him. For heavens sake you are engaged to his brother. But what do I do...I just wish to spent my life with him. Those chocolaty eyes of his tell me they want me...but Sigh!! this can't happen. I wish I had the power to turn the tables around.

****POV ends****

Kriya and rey were sharing an intense eye lock which was broken by the mehendi designer.
"ma'am plz don't move"
It was the mehendi function held at Singhania mansion. Rehan Singhania, rey's elder brother was getting married to Kriya Ghai. But kriya knew she doesn't has any feeling for Rehan. All she cared was for rey.

Both of them love each other but don't have the guts to confess it. She sat there remembering how she and rey got engaged unofficially.

~~~~~Flash Back~~~~~
It was kriya and rehan's engagement. It was the time to exchange rings. But rehan couldn't put the ring in her ring finger as the ring mistakenly was of a smaller size than kriya's finger. So he had to put it in her little finger. Next day Rey's mom told him to take kriya to the jeweler and get the correct ring. They went and brought the ring. Kriya was about to waer it but rey took it from her and slid it in her ring finger as if she was going to be his wife. They were engaged but unofficially.
~~~~~Flash back ends~~~~~

Kriya just sighed and looked around and found rey already staring at her. She passed him a warm smile and he replied the same. They could read in each other's eyes...love was clearly visible for each other. Again their eye lock was broken by the mendi girl
"I'm so sory ma'am"
She looked at the girl confusingly and then she pointed towards the place where the groom's name was supposed to be written. Since there was a small gap only 3 letters could fit REH but by mistake instead of writing REH the girl wrote REY. All the ladies gathered and told her not o change it as it would spoil the mehndi. Kriya was happy that rey's name was written. She wanted him to be her groom but sigh!!.

Even rey saw that and he was happy. He was even more happy when he saw kriya caressing his name.

So, how it???
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pms later


INDEX
Part 1: pg 1
part 2: pg 11
Part 3: pg 22
Edited by lovely7010 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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yipeee...!!! I m d frst one to comment...:) nd this concpt is oossoommm...:) loved it...:) eagr to read more... Plzz update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow another amazing rocking os fantastic
Happy new year
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awwiiie...

loved it...

it was so sweet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice os ..!
Update soon..!
Happy new year !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept 👍🏼👍🏼
do cont soon
n pm pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg.. A new OS.. Tnx Mannu :)

N n n n

A very happy new year to u n ur family 😃

Cumin to d update.. Its amazinnn..
Both Kriyaansh love each othr madly buh Yeh Rehaan,ufff.. Kaha se beech mei aa gya
O God,y thr always hav to b a Haddi in btwn dem... Sigh !

Omg dat Ring scn was amazin.. Reyaansh's mom askd him only instead of Rehan..
Indirectly,uski mom b yai chahti h ki Kriya ka marriage Reyaansh se ho 😆 😆

N n dat Mehndi gal.. Bot acha kaam kiya usne.. Rehaan ki jagah Rey.. Hayeee

Evn,Universe G is givin dem Signs.. Kriyaansh b na,kbi time pe nhi smjhte.. Hufff !
Waitin fr d nxt update.. Update soon :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing concept...
plz update soon n thnx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was amazing update
loved it
thanx for the pm
update soon
happy new year
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rey apni babi pe line maaring 😲
Mehandi...awww rehan ki jagah rey 😳 universji bi yahi chahte yeh ki kriyaansh ek hojaye...
Rey ne kria ko ring pehna diya... 👏 lovely
Updte soon 😊
Sry fr nt unresing it till nw
Edited by kreya_pearl - 12 years ago

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