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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update di
saare raaz khul gaye iss update me
rano ki death ka raaz pata chal gaya khurana family ko
nd maaneet marriage also
pooja aut raghu ko bhi pata chal gaya
aur abhay agar tum vicky ko pehle bata dete to tumhe tax nahi dena padta
sab logo ko MU ki geet is no more
bas maan ko hi yakeen hai

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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
Hope Maan wil find Geet soon..
thanx for update.. waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
⭐️⭐️ Happy New Year ⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww yar amazing update.
loved the twists and turns in this update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update dear:)

i hope mohinder suffer to helll ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved the strong believe in maan..
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Posted: 12 years ago
di aapne double update bola tha
aaj koi update milega
year ka last update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
liked a lot
sorry for the late reply, had exams
continue soon
waiting
HAPPY NEW YEAR
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 19

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Happy New Year 😊 May all your dreams come true. 😊

This Update is as a new year gift as well as my birthday day, Oh yes Jan 1st is my B'day too 😊


Once again Happy New Year 🤗




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"Maan" is the first word came from geet's mouth when she first opened her eyes in hospital. Geet opened her looking here and there. She is confused thinking where is she. Like to answer her questions abay entered into the ward. When he saw her awake he smiled at her. "Abay?" questioned geet. "Hey geet, how are you?" asked abay. Geet smiled a little and told "I am fine, where am i? what you are doing here?" asked geet. "Oh geet, you were fainted on the road 4 days back. And you were unconscious" told abay.

A layer if tears formed in her eyes thinking about that night, the night she came to about her fathers truth. She is missing her maan, she want her maan by her side. "Abay I need to go home" told geet and was about to get up. But abay stopped her. "Geet , Vicky and his family are in India" told abay. "India??" asked geet confused. Abay told how dadi and Vicky are misunderstood that she is dead. Abay and his family came to know about this by the neighbours. Geet is shocked with the piece if Information.

"Babaji, what is happening with me? babaji do you want to tell me anything?" thought geet. "Geet, I know you are angry on me now. But jaan, I am so sorry your going to London is needed. You wont be alone there mishty, Vicky, dadi and annie will be there with you. Geet, in London myself or maa wont be there you have to take care of your self dear. But if you have any problem just call me, I will be there with you. But you should face every situation bravely. I know you will be worried during exams, don't worry think about babaji. He will help you for sure" told maan before the night geet leaving to London. Remembering that geet opened her eyes. "Yes maan what you told is right, babaji is there with me now. I think I should be in London. The person who killed my mother, I wont leave him so easily. He has to pay for what he did" thought geet.

"Now what should I do, I don't know any one in London. How can I live here alone?" thought geet. "Geet dear" someone called. She looked at that person. "Geet, he is my dad" introduced abay. "Hello uncle" wished geet. "How you are feeling now?" asked Mr. Raichand. "I am fine uncle" told geet. Mr. Raichand smiled at geet. He checked geet again making sure that she is fine. "Ok geet, you can go home now dear. You are perfectly fine. Abay take geet to home, make sure she eats well. I will come in the evening and check her again" told Mr. Raichand.

Abay nodded and took geet to Raichand Mansion. Seeing geet abay's mom is happy. "Omg geet, finally you are home. I was so worried beta seeing you in that condition. oh geet why you are standing there beta. Come inside, no no abay take her to guest room. I will bring lunch to her" told Mrs. Raichand. Geet is over whelmed to see their love and care for her which missed in her dad. thinking of her dad, her anger and pain grew 1000 folds. Geet lied on the bed, closed her eyes. "Hope you are there with me today maan. by seeing abay's mom and dad, I am missing pooja maa and raghu papa" thought geet, tears made their way to her cheeks. She immediately wiped her tears. She sat on the bed and saw abay talking on phone with someone.

He hang up the call and looked at geet. "Hey geet, take rest yaar I will come how contact Vicky and tell him you are safe" told abay. "NOO" shouted geet.

In India:

Dadimaa, Vicky and annie reached Delhi. soon they reached KM too. Pooja hugged dadi and cried. "Maa, what all this happened. Hamari geet maa" cried pooja. "We don't know the real face of mohinder pooja. We failed to fulfill the last wish of rano. She wont forgive us" told dadi coming out of the hug. There was a drastic change in KM, no one is happy. All are in pain. they are guilt that they couldn't save their geet. A day passed. None saw maan from morning. But poja understood that he need time its not easy for him to digest the fact. Vicky is trying to talk to maan, but maan is avoiding all. Maan is not able to concentrate on his classes, his mind and soul are revolving around geet and lost in geet's thoughts.

Adi, karan and aparna decided to talk to maan. They know geet is his life, but he has to face the truth that geet is no more. In the lunch, they dragged him to college garden. Maan was silent didn't talk anything or react anything. "Maan, what is all this. What happened to you? You are not yourself maan?" asked adi. Maan was silent didn't speak anything. Maan's phone started ringing. Without replying to adi, he took out his mobile and saw its from some new number. When maan was about to answer the call, adi snatched the mobile from him. instead of maan, adi answered the call. "I am sorry, now maan is busy please call after some time" told adi and was about to cut the call. He heard a voice which made him root at his place. He is not able to believe, he is really dreaming.

"Hello" told adi once again. "Adi bhai" came a voice. He is not able to believe, he heard he I mean he heard geet's voice the other side. "Choti?" asked adi to confirm he is not wrong. "Ha bhai" told geet crying. "Bhai, maan I want to talk to maan" told geet. "One minute choti. I am giving him" told adi and gave the phone to maan. maan who didn't listen adi's words took the phone and answered un-interestedly. "Hello" answered maan. here geet is very happy listening maan's after 3 long damn years. She missed him badly and want to her him tight, cry her heart out.

Maan didn't get any response from the other side but he heard some one cry. Geet is crying, his geet, his mishty is crying. Of course he recognized who it is. He is shocked, happy and even angry on his parents. He is right his geet cant leave him and go, she promised him. Maan looked at adi, to confirm he is right. She is his geet, its confirmed when he saw tears in adi's eyes. "You are right" told adi. That's enough for maan. "Geet" whispered maan. Now her crying turned into loud sobs. She is not able to control herself anymore. She is crying, taking her all pain in front of her life, her maan, her savior. Here karan and aparna are happy and shocked. he is talking with his geet finally, adi took them aside, he needs to talk to her. they left from there leaving maan alone to talk to his geet.

"I am sorry maan, I am sorry" finally geet spoke. Maan is still in shock, he is not able to believe that he is talking with his geet after 3 years. That too she only called him. "Geet" whispered maan again. "Ha maan, your geet. I am fine maan. mujhe kuch nahi hua" told geet. Maan sighed in relief hearing that she is fine. He broke into a wide smile, but again he frowned. "geet, what is this all happening? Where were you all these days?" asked maan worriedly thinking geet is alone in london. "You are alone in London" asked maan. "No maan, I am at my friends place" told geet.

"Geet, I will tell you maa and dad. I am coming to you geet. You will be back again. I will talk to mohinder papa too" told maan. maan still doesn't know the truth of mohinder. Hearing his name, geet stopped her crying and her eyes became red because of anger. "don't maan, don't take that man's name. I hate him" shouted geet in anger. "Geet, what you are talking?" asked maan confused. "Then how should I react maan, he is the person who killed my mom and tried to kill me. He never loved my mom, she suffered so much because of him maan" told geet. She told what all she listened that day. Maan is utterly shocked knowing the truth. The mere thought he tried to kill made him mad in anger. But he controlled, if he will shout then geet will be more worried and scared. Maan calmed down himself.

"Geet, you are coming to India now" told maan. "No maan, let all of them be in the thought that I am no more" told geet. "Are you mad geet, just shut up and do what I say" shouted maan literally. But geet didn't react in any way. "No maan, till today I listened what you told. But now you have to listen to me. First promise me that you wont tell about me to anyone" asked geet. "How geet? All are sad for you" told maan helplessly. "Maan, please do this for me. Maan, you always say me don't depend on others and do what I think" told geet for which maan nodded in a yes. "Today I want to do justice for my maa maan. She suffered so much, if that man is punished that maa will be very happy" told geet and cried. Maan too didn't stop her, she need this. She need to take out her pain. thought he is not there with her now, but his support will be always with her.

After some time geet stopped her crying. "Maan" called geet again. "Tell me geet" asked maan. "I will be in London only maan. I want to see that man suffer" told geet with rage in her eyes. "But geet, you will be alone there" told maan worriedly for her. he didn't like her decision even one percent also. "You will always there with me na maan" told geet smiling slightly. Maan want to hug her tight and tell her he will be always there with her and love her so much. "I hate you geet for putting me in this condition. your idiotic promise. Hamesha apni man mani karti ho, you talked with me after 3 years when all are thinking that you are no more. And on top of that you will be alone in London. How can I live in peace here geet" asked maan.

"Maan, you are complaining like me" told geet. Maan smiled a little. "I love you geet" told maan. "I love you too maan" told geet. "At least tell me where you will be staying and don't do anything rubbish" warned maan. "No maan, he has to face the worst. And I don't tell you where will I stay" told geet. "Are you mad" shouted maan. "No, if I talk with you I want to meet you. Maan, if I meet you everyone will come to know about me. I will be back soon maan" told geet, her voice is cold with only pain. She cut the call immediately and wiped her tears which are falling down.

"damn it, she is crazy and most stubborn girl I have ever seen" thought maan. "I am happy today, I am so happy. My mishty is safe. Mr. Mohinder Handa, you killed your own wife. Shame on you. But don't worry my mishty will make your life hell and I will help her. And mishty if you wont tell me where are you, then I can easily find out dear. You know for the whole world you might be intelligent but in front of me you will do all the dumbest things. Thanks to the improvement of technology. Tracing call is very easy you know mishty" thought maan and smirked. "Mohinder Handa, count your days. I wont let you live in peace" thought maan, with anger in his eyes.

Precap: where will geet stay. 😕

Maan-abay friendship. Geet tho gayi 😆😆😆


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Ok friends, here is part 19. How is it?? 😕


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Edited by chinni10 - 12 years ago

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