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shillu.arshi

@shillu.arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#361

really cute update dear👏

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Nisha

@Nichuss

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+ 33

Posted: 12 years ago

#362

nanda thnx for the Pm...🤗

raj: a friend of mine is searching for a bride, n i guess even u hadn't got your mr. perfect. so, i was wondering if u can meet him.who told u she didnt find her mr perfect...she has found out mr perfect...yet she

havent realised😳

khu, " hey devi maiya, its so scary, save me. n yuck! the guy is actually a animal freak."ha ha ha ha...first impression itself -ve

khu (uneasily): yeh, i know... sorry... your hand. it was just in the dog's mouth. []kushi this is just start🤣

khu gave the dog an i-don't-like-u-buddy look.

no-worries-sweety-i-don't-like-u-either, replied scooby's eyes. [🤣]

lolsss

vir hopefully: would u like to have another meeting?

khu thought,"so, u won't run away till u go to hospital, right?"this was hillariouss comic..kushi...i just loved it with proper timing...poor viren...lolss...

khushi muttered: goal!! victim 4 en-route to hospital.this was hillariouss comic--i cant stop laughing imaging the scene...roflsss roflss...

loved the post...omg...whta comic..n laughing part...

is lav,,,rajat..suhana..conspring for to get kushi -arnie...

wow im waiting for that time...arshi romance,.,...

pracap sounds payash romance...n bubbly-lakshmi-kushi..😆

waitingg

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cutelittleangel

@cutelittleangel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#363

Yayyy...you l0st the bet, shree di... :P :P :P
[well, d0es we really had a bet? :S] well u said that i wouldn't be able to read all ur parts b4 ur next update...and see i just did... :P :P :P :)) :)) :))
*pats my back*
okieee...So La and Arnav br0ke up...awww...feeling bad for b0th of them...but this is kinda gr8... :D :D *devilish smile*
and really i must appreciate khushi the gr8...she actually took a cr0wbar wid her?? lol
that was hilarious...!
What real harm could a cr0wbar can have and that too on Arnav...hee hee hee
And n0w i'm puzzled and m totally in suspense abt that lavanya thingy...she is acting weird...! what is she hiding...t0 kn0w have to wait for ur upd... :( :( :(
i wish i cud read ahead...but i finished all the 18 parts... :'(
anyways...the wh0le Arshi scene was just amazing...!
And he opened the d0or shirtless again...hmmm...
and aww khushi's hand...! hmm so i w0nder that Arnav's chest is really that hard... :P :P :P
i wanna experience it...ahem ahem [no no...i can't do that...i can't betray Ryan ☺️ ]
omig0d...kahan se yaad a gaya... ☺️
n0w i will keep blushing for an h0ur... ☺️
okie n0w back on t0pic... :))
Well actually arnav asked her to stay for dinner...and i was literally like..."ohh g0d! sum1 pinch me plz, am i reading this right?"
then to make it sure, i read it again and yeah it was true...hmmm that was INCREDIBLE...!
and what a m0vie to watch...hehe
paranormal activity...hmm gr8... :))
i was scared that they may watch (dot) (dot) 😳
but thank goodness, there was nothing like that... [omigod i just realized that i have a guttery imagination too...shhh..that was a secret]
omig0d they were too cl0se to each other...awww
i can't believe that she actually slept...lol
and that too f0r a l0ng tym...that it was 2 am...hee hee hee
Their rabba ve was amazing...
and then i'm just thinking that who were th0se figures who talked on ph0ne about khushi...hmm
pr0bably shyam...but the question is that who is just giving him all these details?? :/ :/
well there are alot of questions in my mind...u have a lot twists in ur st0ry...! and the answer is there in the future parts, for which i have 2 wait...ahhh...!
and a date with viren...hmm...interesting...!
h0nestly speaking, i st0pped liking viren when u menti0ned that he l0ves animals...cuz h0nestly speaking, i'm really scared of each and every animal, insect birds...
really, dun ask me...even if would just spot a spider 2 meters away, i would like, "ohh god...plzz save..me...i'm gonna get killed..." 😆 and i hate this thing of mine... :((
wait...lemme have the look outside the window...
actually its raining too hard... omig0d...eeekss
sub ko mujh se shakayat hai k mein ziada bolti hu ab mein kya karu...see...c0mment bhi kuch ziada hi lamba ho gaya...h0pe apko gusa na a raha ho.. *innocent face*
okie n0w back to the SS...have to wind up quickly...
and see...the thing i was waiting for...the disaster...!
p0or viren i must say...! lol
and la is seeing sum1 else... :O :O :O
haww haye and she even din tell khushi abt it...h0w c0me??
i can feel sumthing bad...really i can feel as if they w0uld fight ahead...and sumthing like this...h0pe this is n0t true...
And yeah the m0st imp thing that shyam actually was there at khsuhi's place...and that too for asking her proposal...omig0d...
and on the other hand khushi is thinking to end the man-hunting...omig0d...this can't be happening...!
and hah! 10 lakhs a year...shakal dekhi hai shyam babu ne apni...! 10 lakhs a year...! *mimicking him*
well i want to read m0re n0w... :((
Update it s0on...!!
waiting...!
xoxo

Yours,
cupcake... :))

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cutelittleangel

@cutelittleangel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#364

PS: C0ngrats on new thread... :)) xoxo
& lovely cars...as u kn0w m a c0mplete car freak... :P :P

I actually opened this thread again after closing it and it just got in my mind that i din c0ngratulate u f0r ur new thread and i din c0mpliment th0se cars... :))

xoxo

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: cutelittleangel
PS: C0ngrats on new thread... :)) xoxo
& lovely cars...as u kn0w m a c0mplete car freak... :P :P

I actually opened this thread again after closing it and it just got in my mind that i din c0ngratulate u f0r ur new thread and i din c0mpliment th0se cars... :))

xoxo

did i tell u b4 that u r a sweethrt n that i love ur comment

since day b4 i was like "hafsu scrap that u commented so that i can leave every damn work i'm doing n run to read ur comment n grin like a fool."

u must b thinking di's crazy, yep i am n the world knows it 😆

see now ur jalebi bai won't make u wait 4 too long

i'll update very soon

this reminds me i have to write payash date wala part😳

n bubbly n khushi part too

uff!!!! this writer's block😡😡

n hey! u do speak a lot but i love it!!!!😉

keep reading, dreaming of RYAN n blushing

n update HTFL soon😳😳

love u

mwah!!!

ur only paagal di

jalebi bai

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#366

Originally posted by: Nichuss
nanda thnx for the Pm...🤗

raj: a friend of mine is searching for a bride, n i guess even u hadn't got your mr. perfect. so, i was wondering if u can meet him.who told u she didnt find her mr perfect...she has found out mr perfect...yet she

havent realised😳

khu, " hey devi maiya, its so scary, save me. n yuck! the guy is actually a animal freak."ha ha ha ha...first impression itself -ve

khu (uneasily): yeh, i know... sorry... your hand. it was just in the dog's mouth. []kushi this is just start🤣

khu gave the dog an i-don't-like-u-buddy look.

no-worries-sweety-i-don't-like-u-either, replied scooby's eyes. [🤣]

lolsss

vir hopefully: would u like to have another meeting?

khu thought,"so, u won't run away till u go to hospital, right?" this was hillariouss comic..kushi...i just loved it with proper timing...poor viren...lolss...

khushi muttered: goal!! victim 4 en-route to hospital.this was hillariouss comic--i cant stop laughing imaging the scene...roflsss roflss...

loved the post...omg...whta comic..n laughing part...

is lav,,,rajat..suhana..conspring for to get kushi -arnie...

wow im waiting for that time...arshi romance,.,...

pracap sounds payash romance...n bubbly-lakshmi-kushi..😆

waitingg

i'm very glad that i was able to impress u this tym 😃

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#367

guys i'll update very soon

stay alert to grab the 1st comment place

😉

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cutelittleangel

@cutelittleangel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#368

Originally posted by: Shree.Nanda
did i tell u b4 that u r a sweethrt n that i love ur comment
since day b4 i was like "hafsu scrap that u commented so that i can leave every damn work i'm doing n run to read ur comment n grin like a fool."

u must b thinking di's crazy, yep i am n the world knows it 😆

see now ur jalebi bai won't make u wait 4 too long

i'll update very soon

this reminds me i have to write payash date wala part😳

n bubbly n khushi part too

uff!!!! this writer's block😡😡

n hey! u do speak a lot but i love it!!!!😉

keep reading, dreaming of RYAN n blushing

n update HTFL soon😳😳

love u

mwah!!!

ur only paagal di

jalebi bai

awww that is actually too sweet of u di... 🤗
u r crazy but u r cute too... :P :P :P
and i'm glad that u liked my c0mment... :)) :)) :))
plus when i read that "keep, reading, dreaming about Ryan and blushing"
literally i was blushing s0 hard that i can't tell... ☺️
and upd fast...! :) :) :)
aur khabardar jo mere pehle kisi ko pm kya... :P *evil laugh*
i want the first place...!
xoxo