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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi yaar plz dnt end so soon i was really enjoying the story plz continue it dnt end in 2 part dear.
N 4 destiny it was really very intersting plz continue that also dnt stop it.
Edited by Virika-luv - 13 years ago
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Hi Guys

Here is the next update I really hope you like it! I know this update is fully irrelevant and kind of a fillers-in but the fate of this story will be decided on the response to THIS particular update. If I get a good response I will continue it. I have this bad habit that when I don't get enough likes/comments I don't feel like updating. Thank you for your appreciation.

Chapter 14

Viren sat on his bed typing an e-mail at his laptop when Jeevika knocked at his door. Viren looked up and blinked his eyes, signalling her to come in. She locked the door and came and sat on the opposite side of the bed to Viren.

"Viren you said you will give my bracelet back to me today."
"I did say that but the condition was if I accept you as my wife."

"But its not your fault that Badi Maa is busy today, and you have promised me that you will tell her tomorrow. I trust you Viren. Now give it."

"Come here." he said patting the bed.

"Keep this away or else I will beak it up into a million pieces," she said as she got and sat in Viren's lap, pushing his lap top away.

"Careful Jeevika. Wait I will switch it off." Viren kept the laptop away and started stroking her long silky hair while she comfortable rested her head on his chest, her hands tightly around his waist.

"Viren"

"Yes"

"What will we do if Badi Maa does not agree to our marriage?"

"Even I am scared. I don't know whether she will agree to our marriage or not but I am pretty sure she will be pretty amazed at my choice."

"What do you mean?"

"Nothing, I mean she will be surprised that inspite of having so many wonderful proporsals I still chose to marry you," he said trying to tease her.

Jeevika pulled back and sat up straight, facing Viren. "You mean to say I am not good?"

"When did I say that?"

"You just said that you had better proporsals."

"Yea so I did."

"VIRENN!!" she screamed and emptied the jug of icy cold water on his head. "You think other girls are better than me."

"Brrr. God Jeevika what did you do. The water was cold. Move I will change my shirt."

Viren took off his shirt and was looking for another shirt. Jeevika came and stood staring at him. "Do you seriously feel that I am not a good wife?" she pouted in a teary voice.

Viren cupped her face and realized that Jeevika had taken his joke way too seriously. "No Jeevika. I was just kidding."

Jeevika lips shaped into a perfect O. He was teasing her and here she was getting serious. Why does he do this? "Haww Viren you were joking all this while! You scared me." She started walking toward him, hitting his chest. "How dare you?" Viren kept smiling taking short steps backwards.

"Darling I was joking! Ouch!" Viren fell straight on the bed with Jeevika on top of him. "Crazy woman!" he said wrapping his arms round her slim waist.

Jeevika's smiled turned into a cheerful laughter. "So Mr Viren Wadhera, you had better proporsals?"

"Ahhan. But I chose the best one," He whispered in her ear, pulling her closer. "I love you!!" he continued nibbling her ear-lobe.

Jeevika blushed. Viren flipped and pinned her to the bed. "Jeevika when was the last time you said I love you to me?" he said as he placed a trail of soft kisses down her neck

Jeevika pulled his hair slightly making him look up. "I hate you Viren!" and placed a kiss on his cheek.

Viren looked at her confused. "Now what?"

"Sweetheart I am different." she winked, blowing on his face.

"Really?" he smirked.

"Come,"she said wrapping her arms round his neck, pulling him in a tight hug.

Viren lay on top of her hugging her tightly, nuzzling his nose against her swan-like neck. The red on Jeevika's cheeks increasing with each passing second. They finally let go. Jeevika got up and fixed her strapless dress. Viren smiled looking at standing shyly by the window fixing her dress. Jeevika sensed him slowly moving close to her. She turned around slightly to see his eyes filled with love for her. Love. Pure love!

He came and traced his fingers at her back, placing soft kisses on her shoulder. Jeevika closed her eyes, letting out low moarns, breathing heavily. He held her shoulders and turned her round. She blushed furiously looking at his shirtless, well sculpted body. Placing her hand on him, she traced it around his bare torso. Making him stiff under her touch. He gripped her hair and bought her face closer. There lips mere inches apart, their warm breath increasing the desire. She wanted him now. He smirked devilishly looking at her and moved away. She opened he eyes at his sudden move and looked at him with anticipation, "Viren..." she groaned.

He lifted her and placed her on the bed. "I love you Jeevika." he said, while kissing her forehead, followed by her jaw, eyes, shoulders.

"Love me?"

He smiled and finally placed his lips on her. She too smiled and pulled him closer, deepening the kiss. Her hands massaging his scalp while his roamed her back. They continued kissing each other passionately.

The night burnt away with their moarns and groans becoming louder, the warmth and passion rising!!

Remember the response to this one will decide whether I will continue or not.
So Please leave a comment and press the LIKE button!
Please read the note above!
Edited by Kashy15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Okay first thanks for the pm. And once again I'm first. Please don't end this ss and if you are than u have to promise me that u'll come with another one but I don't want this one to end your ss is simply amazing. And you know what I'm always waiting that when will I gat the pm of your ss. It's different, interestion and cute. You have a very creative mind and your an amazing writer, so keep it up. And now lets come to the update it was romantic and cute. I love both the characters really very much. "Keep this away or else I will beak it up into a million pieces," she said as she got and sat in Viren's lap, pushing his lap top away. I loved this part. I hope you'll get a good response and we'll get more to read. Keep rocking. Enough of my bak bak no bye😛
Edited by Virika11 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awnnn such a cutie pie viren !
I also want a hubby like this yaar
loved the cute romance !
continue soon
it;s 3am and im reading this lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it fully romantic plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww this was sooo cute
loved it to the core
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
its jst awesom!!!!!!!!!!!
and plzz continue its awesome story and u a brilliant writer
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update..! I guess now either they owuld say to swamini or she would find out her self...thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was simply awesome...!!
super romantic...!!
totally loved this part!!
thanx for the pm and please dont end this story...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
its awesum...
loved it...
bs ab jaldi badi maa ko viren batade

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