taani and rey os (confession)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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guyz this is the first tym i am writing an os ! plzz dont mind if itz nt good ! :)
tarey confession
part1
scene 1 :
rey and gang were having fun, then suddenly some terrorists enter st.louis college.
d3 gag hear the sound of guns being shooted.. all panicked...
they started to rush towards the fir escape..
rey and gang managed to escape from the college...
rey : omg ye terrorists achanak se hamare colg p attack kyu kar rahe hai
swayam: Pata nahi , ruk mai police ko iske bare mai abhi inform karta hu
vicky: kagu r u ok ?
rey: acha hai taani aj colg nai aayi
neha: rey telling wrong, taani ayi hai morning se ...
rey: wat ??? that means she is stuck there ?? between all the terrorists
scene shift:
taani listens to the sound of guns from the colg.. she gets afraid...
she tries to call swayam but his mobile is buzy... (crying)...
taani to herself : lagta hai puri gang safe hai !
she was in the class with few other students... all were trying to hide...
taani was crying immensely and she remembered the rasiya sequence...
she knew that she was soon goin to be shot by the terrorists
taani to herself: mai marne se pehle ek baar rey ko call kar leti hu ! :( unhe apni feelings k baare mai batana jaruri hai ! ;(
taani call rey
(tring tring)
Rey picks up the call
taani: hello...
rey cuts her line n says
rey: taani tum thik to ho na ?
taani mujhe tumhari fikaar ho rhi hai
taani : mai thik hu... mujhe pata hai ye terrorists mujhe mar denge
rey: shhh taani aisa mat bolo (with tears in his eyes)
taani : rey meri baat suniye
isse pehle mujhe kuch ho mai apko ye batana chahti hu that i love u a lot... aj se nai jab se colg join kia hai tab se
rey : taani !! tumhe kuch ni hoga ... aur tum kaunse room mai ho batao mai aa raha hu
taani: nai rey mai nai chahti ki mere wajah se apki life danger mai aye mai nai btaogi
rey: par taani...
taani- disconncects the call
rey to himself : love u 2 taaani ... mai aa raha hu tumhe bachane k liye .. kucvh nhi hone dunga tumhe ! ;(
rey rushes in to the college via fire escape
to be continued...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
part 2

Recap: terrorist attack on st Louis colg...

Taani expresses her feelings to rey...

Rey rushes to find her

Part 2

Scene 2 :

Rey rushes to the colg... police with barricades don't allow him to do so... he pushes them all and rushes into the college premises...

Rey is hiding and is trying to search her everywhere

Rey to himself : tani kaha ho tum ?? mujhe ab tumhari bahut jyada chinta ho rhi hai L (with tears in his eyes)

Rey tries to call her
(tring tring)

Rey to taani : kaha ho tum ?

Taani: rey maine aapse kaha na apko andar aane ki koi jarurat nai hai... yaha p bahut khatra hai... aur mujhe pata hai yaha se nikalna bahut mushkil hai .. byee...

Rey : ruko taani plz phone mat cut karna... mai colg mai enter kar chukka hu... agar tumhe sach mai meri parwah hai to batao tum kaha ho ...mai yaha se akele nahi jaoonga... jaoonga to tumhe sath mai lekar...

Taani ... rey(wipes her tears) mai room no 203 mai hu
(suddenly a terrorist enters from back , taani drops her phone as she got afraid with the sound of the guns)

Taani :oouch
rey : kya hua taani ?? taani kuch to bolo ??

Rey to himself : oh god ! ye taani ko ho kya gaya hai ?? mujhe jaldi hi 203 mai jaana hoga...

Rey reaches to 203

Its full blood shed everywhere... rey tries to find taani... looking at all the bodies he gets afraid.. n say s nai taani tumhe kuch nai ho sakta

And he starts screaming.. taani... taaniii ?? kidhar ho...

Suddenly someone covers rey's mouth with her hand and pushes him behind the cupboard...

Taani : its me rey ! mai yaha p hi chuppi hui thi ...

Rey is full of tears... he hugs taani tightly... kisses her on her forehead and lips...

Taani pushes him back...

Rey : taani mujhe b nai pata yaha se hum safe nikal payenge ya bhi nai par mai tumhe ek baat kehna chahta hu

Taani: use pehle mai kuch kehna chahti hu

Sorry rey for all the arguments we had.. sorry that i mis understood ur friendship as love.. mai apse maafi chahti hu rey

Rey puts his fingers on taani's lips: shhh... kuch mat kaho aur meri baat suno

Rey : taani mai tumse bahut pyaar karta hu.. jitna mai kriya se karta tha usse bhi jyada... tum mere liye bahut matter karti ho

Tumhara hasna, tumhara rona, tumhara gussa karna sab mujhe affect karta hai L

I love u taani !

Taani: sach rey .. and they hug each other tightly/...

(rey hears a gun shot )

And hez shocked to see that the terrorist shot his ove- taani
immediately the cops handle the situation and they catch off the terrorist and so the terrorist doesn't shoot rey..

Rey is all shocked to see her llove—taani bleeding so badly...

He cups her face and screams taani wake up.. but gets no reply...

By sunita <3

To be continued


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Posted: 13 years ago
#3

Hey guyz here is part 3 J

Recap : rey rushes in to the colg premises to help taani escape...

He tells her that even he loves taani

The terrorist shoots taani and the cops handle the situation and arrest them...

Scene 2:

Rey's eye is flooded with tears... he screams

Rey : taani kuch jawab to do ... taani utho to sahi... taani tumhe kuch nai ho sakta.. tumhare bina to mai...

Scene shift...

Swayam was talking to his gang and he sayz...

Swayam to gang: yaar rey kidhar gaya ?

Waise acha hai jo taani a colg nai aayi...

Neha again repeats her words

Neha: wrong saying swayam... taani subah hi colg aa gait hi ...

Swayam: what ??? nahi usne mujhe bola that tht wo colg nai aa rahi hai...

Neha: maine use colg mai dekha tha bas... baat nai hui ...

Swayam in tension...

Swayam:tum log ne ye baat pehle kyu nai batayi??

He calls taani but her mobile is switched off

He rushes in to the colg premises.. Sharon follows him...

Scene shift...

Taani opens her eyes slightly unconscious...

Rey:taani... oh god... tum kitna bleed kar ri ho...

The hospital team comes with a stretcher to take her to the ambulance...

Rey is so hurt tht he doesnot realize anything... he picks her up and starts rushing towards the ambulance...

On the way he meets swayam

Swayam: (crying) rey ye meri behan ko kya hua ??

Rey doesn't answer he is shocked n emotionally disturbed presently...

Doctors in the ambulance tell rey that taani ko apni aankhe khuli rakhni hogi colg pahuchne tak... she has to be conscious

Rey keeps on talking to taani...

Swayam notices rey's concern for her.. but nothing strikes him as he is too worried for her...

They reach the hospital... taani is taken to the ward...

Doctor to d3 gang: her situation is very critical.. god knows kya hoga... unhe dua ki jyada jarurat hai... hame nai lagta wo bach payengi...

Rey to himself : smashes his hand on the wall ...

Nahi taani ko kuch nahi hoga... usse kuch nahi ho sakta...

Ye sab meri wajah se hua hai ... sab kuch mere karan..

Agar mai usse itna argue nai karta to shayd wo gang k sath hoti aur escape kar jati is incident se...

Taani... tumhe thik hona padega mere liye...

Mai ek aur baar apne pyaar ko khona nai chahta ! L

To be continued...

By sunita <3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#4

Recap : rey lifts taani and takes her to the ambulance

Doctors say that taani is very critical and only blessings can save her life...

Part 4

Scene3 :

Rey is somewhere in his own thoughts... fully heart broken.. thinking about taani... all the d3 gang members except swayam notices rey's concern for her... now they know that rey likes taani !

Doctor comes out of the operation theatre

Doc: congratulations.. ye sab duaa ka hi asar hai... taani ki haalat ab better hai..wo just abhi hosh mai aayi hai aur kisi rey se milna chahti hai...

Full d3 gang is very happy that taani is fine...

Rey : doc mai hu rey.. kya mai taani se mil sakta hu...

Doc: ha ofcourse... wo apse akele mai milna chah rahi hai...

Swayam is not there at present, he is gone to the medical stores to buy medicines...

Rey enters taani's ward..

Rey : taani tum thik to ho na...

Taani : wo rey...

Hawa hawa look...

Nurse enters ... so they break the hawa-hawa look

Aap inse sirf 5 min k liye mil sakte hai ...

Taani : wo rey mai thik hu..

Rey mai apse puchna chahti hu that jo apne confess kia tha kya wo sach h ?

Rey in a naughty mood

Rey : kaunsa confession taani ?

Taani starts blushing ...

Taani: rey wo apne kaha than na that app

Rey: ki mai kya taani ? aur taani tum itna blush kyu kar rhi ho ?

Taani : yehi ki ap mujhse pyaar karte h

Rey : what rubbish ?? maine aisa kuch nhi kaha tha...

Taani with tears in her eyes..

Taani : hey krishnaji

sorry rey agar meri baten apko hurt kari toh

Mai hi pagal hu joy eh soch rahi thi that ap mujhse...

Sorry rey ...

She starts crying

Rey cups her face... kisses her cheeks and says...

Rey: mai mazak kar raha tha taani...

Mai tumse bahut pyaar karta hu...

Khud se bhi jyada...

Taani and rey give each other a tight hug..

Doctor enters .

Doctor : ahem ahem...

Tarey smile at each other...

Doctor to rey : inki health to kaafi sudhri hui lag rhi hai ab

Aisa kya kia apne..

Taani blushes... rey winks at her...

Doc : ab 5 min ho gaye aap jaiye.. rey then leaves...

To be continues

Sunita <3

Precap: d3 gang tease rey (chemistryyy)

Swayam pulls rey's collar and asks him to stay away from taani

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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
really nice.
why dont u post it in D3 forum?
all the taareyholics would love to read it.
sunita786 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#6
tysm for the advice !
did that jus nw ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
HEY !!! its awesome when are going to continue it???
I LOVE IT!!!!!
And want to read it full

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