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Posted: 12 years ago
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seemana ,please continue it dear...we lost our show n there is no hope to get a season 2 of it n now our dream too...😭only our forum n FFn RSs can give some relief to us now
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rashi_anya



shaya y r asking ? just tell when ur going to start?😛

No dear. Everyone is sad 😔. I feel if I write, few will again go to imaginary world of Shayma once again. If everyone is ready to take them only as Anya, I have no problem😊. Can update it from 1st Jan
Edited by Shaya_123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: asihaseen

seemana ,please continue it dear...we lost our show n there is no hope to get a season 2 of it n now our dream too...😭only our forum n FFn RSs can give some relief to us now

Dont cry dear. Please smile😊. Dont let things effect your life. Jo hame khushi de wod karna chahiye. If my writing will give u happiness I will write
Edited by Shaya_123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I think you should continue writing.. you have always used Anant & Navya and the characters evolved around them.. so I guess if you maintain this and write no one'll have any complaints..
your FFs & RSs are enjoyed by many and it keeps the us as well as the forum going.. I hope we'd get the grand opening of Yaariyaan on January 1, 2013.. with a New year's wish.. :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaya_123

Guys,

How are you all doing🤗? I just wanted to check with you all one thing before I write this FF. Since most of us are aware that Shamya thing is over now, do you still want me to write this? Pls tello friends as I dont want to make anyone sad by doing something. Though I wrote my last 2 FFs keeping them in mind but the stories had nothing to do with their personal life.
Waiting for your comments😊


may b shamya doesnt exist in real bt fr us there is shamya nd ll b forever...nd you should continue to write...😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yes i want to read shaya... its navya forum.. not shamya forum... we will cherish navya memorie through ur FF... navya still lives in our heart... and alwayss will
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1😊
Its 11:30 at night and everyone is busy decorating the hall with different colors of balloons and ribbons. They seem to be dam excited conversing with each other in whispers. There is one guy with big turban standing near a room guiding it. It's strange that even the small kids with boys having turbans and girls with long pleated hair don't seem to be sleepy at all. All are nicely enjoying seeing their elders running here and there. When they make noise, they are shut by others by putting finger on lips and they in turn put double fingers on their own imitating. A pretty girl of fair completion wearing a pink color two piece night suit comes out of the kitchen by the hall with bare foot holding a big chocolate cake and keeps it on the table placed at the centre of the hall. Soon the table is filled with gifts wrapped with different colors of glittery papers. The others around comes and looks at the black forest home baked cake where it was written in white 'Happy Anniversary to best grandparents in the world'

'Its 12' whispered the guard of the event.

'Guddu! Switch off the lights' a lady from the crowd whispered to which the girl in pink nightwear went and obeyed.

Then slowly from the only room from where the light is coming, two elderly couple came out who were woken by Jassi in behind saying that Guddu, their most pampered granddaughter in the house is not feeling well. Both are worried, though their faces can't be seen in the dark room.

'Surprise!!!' a group corassed with the sound of balloon bursting and the lights were switched on and they could see their big family standing in semi circle with happy faces excited to see their expression.

The couple with glitters on their head is delighted to see the decoration and everyone's presence. Grandma was attacked by few coming and hugging her tightly saying 'Happy Anniversary'. With the acknowledgement of 'Thank You', she kissed the forehead of everyone coming and wishing her. In the midst suddenly a voice called asking 'Where is Grand Pa?'

'Aa jayenge. Gaye honge laane' grandma said with a smile and others agreed by nodding 'Ya! Grandpa will never change'

It's hot in early morning also. No wonder people say Chennai is the hottest place in the country. Even though Navya is used to the heat as she studied her engineering in Delhi, but at least there the heat is only for few months and not throughout the year. The day when she got the job though campus in one of the renowned software company in the world, she happily accepted the offer as it's going to be a big start for her career. But later became a little sad when she came to know about the location as she didn't want to leave Delhi, as most of her friends are there and her home town, Amritsar is near. Currently she is at a distance of more than 2,264 km from her parents. Her mother is relaxed as she has her younger sister staying in Chennai where her only daughter can stay for initial few days before she could get a good PG.

'Are Navya! Finish you chapatti and then go' a lady with grey hair sitting at the other side of the dining table said to the girl wearing a maroon plain kurta with white pattiyala bottomed and white dupatta with her beautiful long silky hair left open, hurrying for her first day at her first job.

She is mother-in-law to her Masi who stays with her son and daughter in law in Nandy Palace Apartment in Perungudi.

'Nahi Dadi. I am getting late. Need to reach there at sharp 9:30 am' she replied washing her hands in basin next to the dining table.

'Manna is there na to drop you'. Manna is her son whose real name is Rajeev whom she loves to call by this name which he gets irritated in front of new people.

'Dadi. I will go on my own. Will catch an auto from the main road' Navya replied as she doesn't want to trouble Rajeev for going early to his office as his shift starts only at 11 a.m. He also works in a software company 10 kms away from her office.

'Nahi beta. It's your first day and the place is also unknown to you' to which Navya came near her and said 'Dadi! I am used to all these. Don't worry, I will manage. Just tell me how to go from here' and smiled and dadi explained the route after which she cupped her face and gave a kiss on her forehead and said 'Ok! All the best for your first day'

The society is very big with around 10 buildings with row houses on the other side. It has all the facilities like gymnasium, swimming pool, kids playing area, supermarket etc. The beautiful landscaping of the place makes it a pleasant place to stay for the residents. But as Navya stepped out of the gate and takes the road heading towards the main road, she is shocked to see the condition of it. She didn't know about it as she was half asleep when Rajeev crossed the road while picking her up from airport last night. The society looks like a kingdom in a rural area.

She is finding it difficult to walk on the road with dents with her black heels. Still she is walking fast with many times her feet getting twisted. She regrets for saying no to Dadi as she is scared that she will get late to office and kept looking at her wrist watch. But soon her attention went to someone who is coming behind her in equal pace. First she thought it must be any other person on the road as it's a free India, but when it followed her wherever she took the turn, she was little scared as it's a new place for her and she is always cautious when she stayed in Delhi. She didn't dare to see behind though she kept looking at the shadow. She walked faster ignoring her heels and finally succeeded in reaching the main road. She crossed the road breathing with relief of saying 'Thank God'

Hope u like it. Want to see maximum likes and comments to keep the forum going😛
Edited by Shaya_123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
First of all thanks for starting this ff and that to before new year :))
Wow awesome start and loved Navya's intro felt like jab we met scene 😉 😛
continue soon 😊
Edited by navya19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
thanq 4 startn a new ff!!! nice update cntnue sn 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woowww u started it before Newyear for that Muahhh
quite interesting Punjabi family and all. so this time we get to know about Chennai 😉

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