#1:Making You Mine,Ch 1-6,thd 2 link pg 150[COMPLETED]

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~PROLOGUE~


S-e-n-s-e-l-e-s-s !

yeah, he wanted to fu*k her senseless. That pert,round,tight bottom of
hers, hanging in air as she bend to pick up the fallen tray is tempting him to do things that he had promised,he never will ...


Atleast,not to his wife !



He let out a short laugh as the word 'wife' hit his mind.



WIFE.



Khushi kumari Gupta..his wife of almost 2 months. They were
newly wed so, they were definitely expected to involve in such
activities.He remember his sudden urge and desire at times to just grab her, put her over his shoulder and lock them away in d sanctuary of his bed room and to take her hard and fast in every damn possible way..till she
reaches d height of her esctacy and screams his name by clenching and convulsing around his manho*d...all this was possible, if only they were normal couple.


The irony of this whole situation was that ..they were not like any NORMAL couple .




he jerked back to present when he felt a tap on his shoulder " arnav ji..will you take tea ?? "


Nooo, I want to take YOU..that too right now ..he wanted to scream this on top of his voice.


CONTROL... the thing Arnav Singh Raizada was famous for, was quickly slipping away from his hands like sand granules AND all because of this hell of the sexy woman*no, don't use the s word ryt now,he reminds himself* standing in front of him staring with her almond shaped eyes and who happened to be his wife.


He mentally slapped himself for behaving like a lusty teenager salivating after his innocent wife .He just answered a simple emotionless " NO " and continued typing furiously on his laptop..the keys were now the victim of his wrath. Furious with himself, he shuts the laptop with a loud thud
and headed towards the washroom for the cold shower !


YES..He definitely need
one ..!





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|| INDEX ||



chapter 1- page 2

Chapter 2-Page 14

Chapter 3-Page 39

Chapter 4-Page 65

Chapter 5- pg 94

Chapter 6 -pg 122

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Lovely_Bajwa_ thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome!
Please contineu soon!
And Please PM me!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sounds quite dark..
Continue soon.. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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luks lyk writing is not my cup of tea..IDK ..low response..tell me ..shall I continue coz m thinking of discontinuing it ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Why don't you try posting chapter 1 and see the response you get after that..
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Originally posted by: Amanda.Lim

Why don't you try posting chapter 1 and see the response you get after that..



hey ..thanks will do dat soon..after New yr :) btw wishing u in adv :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good start!! Onc u strt writing readerS cm eventualy, u cnt sy withouT trying rite!! So i guess u shuld continue!! Rest is upto u!! 😃
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Originally posted by: rotten.tomato



hey ..thanks will do dat soon..after New yr :) btw wishing u in adv :)


Okay.. Don't get demotivated by the number of likes and comments you get in the beginning.
It takes some time.. :D
Advance happy new year to you too..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shweta.5216

Good start!! Onc u strt writing readerS cm eventualy, u cnt sy withouT trying rite!! So i guess u shuld continue!! Rest is upto u!! 😃



lol..oh, it was my first..I just posted dat for d fun of posting..haha. n dn I thot ,,it must be lyk really sh*t *facepalm* ;) thnxx..will try to post more crap dn !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amanda.Lim



Okay.. Don't get demotivated by the number of likes and comments you get in the beginning.
It takes some time.. :D
Advance happy new year to you too..



aww..thank yeww buddy !! few words of motivation means a lot <3

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