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Amanda Lim

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: rotten.tomato

aww..thank yeww buddy !! few words of motivation means a lot <3

Hahaha.. anytime..😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

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CHAPTER #1

Arnav Singh Raizada was one hell of a complex character!

He had learned from his past experience not to TRUST anyone and he was following that rule completely .

ASR, 28, was the youngest self made millionaire, a successful business tycoon and the owner of one of the leading fashion house in Delhi . He was The next 'big thing' as often quoted by various business magazines and analysts. He had made his way to the TOP in a very little span of few years.

He was a man of few words. His work speaks strongly for him. But there was this another thing about him thats making rounds in social gatherings recently . His choice of girls .

yes, Girls !

ASR, was famous for changing his 'arm candies' like he changed his attires . He never dated a girl more than a week normally . The longest fling that he was involved in, lasted for 2 months.Not that he prefered in 'use n throw' . He entertained a girl as long as its a NO STRING attached thing . He preferred this kind of arrangement only because this way He got someone to warm his bed and they got their 15 minutes of fame plus all material comforts . As soon as they start expecting more, he dumped them . So, all in all it was very hard to tangle him in the web of relationships and commitment, and marriage is definitely not the word in his dictionary.

Only one relation matters to him more than his life and that is with his Di 's .

His Di, Anjali

his life,

his heart beat,

his soul ,

his every thing .

everything.!!!

His motherly figure n his strongest pillar of support when he decided to conquer this cruel world.

Life was not always like this battlefield for him. He used to be a normal carefree boy , being loved and utterly protected in the warm cocoon of his family. But life took an ugly turn that day when his mother shot herself to death owing to his father's infidelity and within a matter of few hours the notion of his happy prosperous family came crashing down. His father left them for a girl half her mother's age, so they became practically orphaned that day too. As if that was not enough, they got thrown away from their house on the streets by his own uncle as soon as the cremations were over .

That was the day when the transformation of ASR from arnav begin and Today is the day when no one can guess, he is the same cute,once shy lil child named arnav.

He never let anyone to have a glance at that child except only one person ..Di !

He had vowed that day to give his Di all the happiness in the world that one can Desire and he is fulfilling that promise very superbly. His parents would have been very proud of him ,had they been alive . He can never deny her anything.. NEVER !

Even if she asks for his life , he will give that too happily.

*

He was reading the text sent by his Di for the 10th time hoping it would change, but all in vain.

It's d same.

" ASR, you are getting married and that's FINAL!"

It was just a single line, but he could sense the anger with which it was written because the endearment 'chotey' was missing and the presence of ASR just confirmed, something deadly was waiting for him.

He lost his appetite in the naked blonde beauty, his latest armcandy, waiting, for him to join in the shower in his penthouse,for a raunchy make out session followed by hard FU*K till the wee hours of the night as planned earlier!

He grabbed his car keys and made his way out of his house , informing the driver on his way to drop the 'unlucky' girl to her home first thing in the morning!

The luk on his face clearly telling

ASR was definitely in BIG TROUBLE !

*

Chapter 2

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

I think you did a wonderful job for your first story. You should keep going.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nidsubh007
I think you did a wonderful job for your first story. You should keep going.

awee..u think so??...thnk yew! :)

gal., it may sound dumb but how do I update d heading?? idk . lol ..temme

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: payel3004
its different...
</div><div>you should continue.

thank yew! :)

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Amanda Lim

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Interesting..

Continue soon.

Thanks for the PM.. :D

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Originally posted by: Amanda.Lim
Interesting..
Continue soon.
Thanks for the PM.. :D

thnk yew..BTW, u motivated me, ab bhugto ;)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: gom3090

continue soon.

:) yup..let's see,hw it goes !

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shweta.5216

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Posted: 12 years ago

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M glad u posteD the first chaptes and i wuld b even more glad if u post the second 😉

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Originally posted by: shweta.5216
M glad u posteD the first chaptes and i wuld b even more glad if u post the second 😉

lol..thnk you ..m glad u like it :)

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