SS - *INTOXICATION* ( last prt-page 55)28th dec- Page 23

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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg Sara wowww read all the three parts nowww amazing
Damn this dips man lol :P
Love our writing
Xxx amazing
Can't wait for the next part now
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveTaaRey

Omg Sara wowww read all the three parts nowww amazing
Damn this dips man lol :P
Love our writing
Xxx amazing
Can't wait for the next part now



Thankyou Marinu !!! :))
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Posted: 13 years ago
Zara read until part 3...G2G now, mom scolding...Fursat mein bakhi ka read aur comment karungi!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Recap


Madhu cut him off gesturing STOP !

And she ran to the washroom sobbing closing the door behind her as hard as she could .

RK stood their numb !!


PART 6

Madhu was heartbroken . She felt her world shattered in just a click of a second.
She didn't know how to react , what to say , what to think . So she decided to just push it into her sub conscious as much as possible .

Here RK was trying hard to remember what exactly happened . *Patil got me the juice I drank it and after sometime I felt dizzy I was walkin to my bed , was about to fall and dipali helpd me settle but after that...* and he grew blank .
His frustration was takin a toll on him .

Suddenly he saw Madhu coming out of the washroom . Her face was pale and eyes were red and swollen as if she drained out all the tears she has in her.
RK - Madhu , listen to me .

Madhu - RK ! Please leave me alone .

RK caught madhu's hand and pulled her towards him

RK - look into my eyes madhu , do u see betrayal ? I love u damn it . I can never do anything wrong to u . Just listen to me once .

Madhu - are u done ?

RK was just staring at her

Madhu almost fighting back her tears managed to say - I saw what I had to see . I don't believe anything else now . I need to go .

And she freed herself from RK and went downstairs , wiping off her constant tears .

Here RK stood in the room , feeling helpless . His inability to recall and madhu's ignorance frustrated him to the core and he banged his fist onto the wall .

RK * DIPALI !!!! I'm not going to leave u now !!!!* is what he was thinking .

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Madhu was working in the kitchen . Constantly thinking about what she saw earlier in the morning . When suddenly Radha ji came .

Radha ji - Madhu beta ? Where are u lost !

Madhu - ohh ! No where maa ! Wen did u arrive ? How was ur trip ?

Radha ji - it was great madhu beta . 2 days away from home seems like a decade.

Radha ji noticed madhu's pale face and asked her .

Radha ji - madhu is everything ok? Rishu theek hai na ?

Madhu * fighting back her tears and managed to put a smile and said* - haan maa everything is as perfect as u left it .

Radha ji smiles and says - Madhu beta . I have a request . Please don't say no .

Madhu - maa ! What u talkin ? U don't have to request me , u just need to order me

Radha ji feeling relieved says - Madhu beta all my relatives and friends have been dying to see u and meet u properly . So without askin u I invited them home today . U won't mind meetin them na ? I'm really sorry beta but they were insisting too much .

Madhu - arre maa ! Its okay . Let them come . I'll do anything for ur happiness .

Radha ji - then I have one more thing . *And she takes out a packet and gives it to madhu .* I've got this for u , especially for today . Its a little diff but I want all my relatives and friends to feel I've got the most beautiful daughter in law . Aaj tum yahi pehen na ..

Madhu - sure maa ! I'll wear this . And don't worry I'll make u proud
And she gives a half smile .

Radha ji leaves . Madhu's thinking * how will I manage to show everything's normal when inside my bedroom things have been soo distorted . But I can't break maa's heart , I have to do this for her *

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Here RK is pacing from here and there still trying to remember what exactly happened last night but he couldn't remember anything .
*damn why the hell can't I recall anything * suddenly it struck him * I felt dizzy after having the juice , does tht mean something was there in the juice ? But wo tou madhu had sent for me *

And madhu enters the room . Not even looking at RK

RK - biwi I need to say something .

Madhu*ignorant*

RK - biwi! I'm not giving any explanation because I know u wouldn't listen to me . But thanks for the juice u sent fro me last evening , even though u weren't here .

Madhu * puzzled* - I didn't send any juice

RK - what? Did u tell patil to give me juice in the evening ?

Madhu - no RK I did not tell patil to give u any juice . Don't try to put these acts infront of me , trying to talk to me . Now excuse me

And she walks off !

RK *this means what m thinking is right*dipali dipali dipali , RK's coming for u*

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RK enters dipali's room and sees her standing infront of the mirror , trying to put the hook of her blouse .

Seeing RK she smiles

Dipali - OH RK! I knew u would come to me . What a perfect timing . Please put the hook of my blouse . I'm just not able to .

RK starts walking towards her and just wen he's behind her , he calmly puts the hook .
Dipali smiles and turns , her arms around RK's neck .
Dipali - Oh baby ! I knew u would miss ur dips . Wo 4 phere wali madhubala tumhe kahan khush rakh sakti hai. Only I can keep u happy .

RK - yes dips ! Uve opened my eyes . I know I can be happy only with u .
He touches her face and says - so let's once again finish what we did last night .

Dipali startled * RK ko kya hua hai ? This is not what I wanted*

Dipali moves away - R..RK ! What u sayin ? Thrs a party happening downstairs I need to go .

RK grabs her arm roughly .

RK - itni jaldi kya hai my dips ? Last night was amazing wasn't it ? Let's relive it

And he comes closer to her , his grip tightening on her arm .
Dipali - RK's its paining , please stay away from me .
And she starts walking away

And RK starts coming closer to her - no dips ! I need to relive last night . U only said u loved it ? Don't u wanna love it again ?
And he was very close to her , and he puts his hand on her mouth and grips it hard .

RK - are u ready dips ? Last night and now again

Dipali manages free herself and runs to the other corner of the room

RK - oh baby ! Don't make ur RK run so much . Last night tou u came to me and then we had so much of ...

Dipali shouts - Nothing happened last night ! NOTHING !!

RK stormed near her and held her by her neck !

RK - tell me everything ! NOW !!

Dipali almost choking - nothing happened last night . I had mixed some drugs into ur juice and sent patil to give It to u , saying madhu has sent it so that u drink it no matter what . And when I saw u feeling dizzy I came to ur rescue , u thot I was madhu and caressed my face but after that u fell asleep . And I took advantage of that and made it look like we slept together . But actually , sleeping is far away , u didn't even cme close to me . I did all this so that ur bloody madhubala gets heartbroken .

Listening to this RK is unable to control and chokes her even hard . But then leaves her . And storms out of the room . He comes out and takes his cellph out of his pocket and stops the recording button.
RK * wow RK ! Not bad !! Now biwi has to listen to u *

And he goes to the room smiling

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RK smiling over his victory enters the room . But what he saw in his room , left him stunned . He almost lost his eyes staring at what stood infront of him .

It wasn't his Madhubala , it was someone who felt he never met. This Gorgeous , fine , hot beauty that stood infront of the mirror makin her hair left him awestruck.

RK tried to say something but he felt he lost his voice. Words weren't ready to come out of his mouth.

Madhubala stood infront of the mirror wearing this




RK walked towards her and was behind her... Madhu saw him in the mirror and the look she saw on his face , made her shiver . But she managed to ignore .

RK didn't say a word . He was lost in her , he couldn't believe his eyes .
He turned madhu around to face him . And pulled her by her waist as close as he could to him .
Madhu tried to free herself bt it all went in vain , RK pulled her even closer .
Madhu - RK leav m...

Ssshhh ! RK put his finger on her lips

Their eyes met and Madhu could see love in his eyes for her . Even she got lost in his Eyes .
RK brought his one hand near her neck and firmly held it , this fingers caressing her cheeks . He came even more closer to her , their lips just a finger distance away ,
Madhu couldn't help but close her eyes as she felt RK coming closer to her .

But the moment she closed her eyes , she remembered what she saw in the morning . And she immediately opened her eyes horrified , and pushed RK away .
And walked out of the room .

RK felt like a jerk * what's wrong with u RK ! She's still heartbroken and u were going to kiss her , ughh!! Pehle sachaai tou bata de ! * but she looked so mouth watering , why haven't I seen this side of her before !?? * biwi aaj tumhe mujhse koi nahi bacha sakta *

And RK flashed his typical hot smirk !!



P.s - I know its a little long , but have to finish this SS soon 😊 hope u guys like this part 😳

an sorry for the mistakes , dint recheck 😳
Edited by zara.92 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful... hope misunderstanding clears in next update...
Edited by jeenia123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Zara... We enjoy long updates 🤣

Haah... I knew it. Nothing happened. I want that woman out of my Rishbala's life.

Madhu's dress looks stunning.. ab tumhe RK se kaun bachayega *evil grin*

Zara, don't you dare finish this SS. Even if you do... Start a new one asap.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123

beautiful... hope misunderstanding clears in next update...


Thankyou😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PristineSoul

Zara... We enjoy long updates 🤣

Haah... I knew it. Nothing happened. I want that woman out of my Rishbala's life.

Madhu's dress looks stunning.. ab tumhe RK se kaun bachayega *evil grin*

Zara, don't you dare finish this SS. Even if you do... Start a new one asap.


omg !! lol ...thanks a lot yaa for liking my work sooo muchh ... m all flushed 😳😳


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Posted: 13 years ago
r hey nice update dear and a long one. I loved it and plz clear misunderstanding soon and run this for a long tym. i hope u update soon
Edited by deepak148 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zara.92



omg !! lol ...thanks a lot yaa for liking my work sooo muchh ... m all flushed😳😳



Ahh... My tomatoe 🤣 itna mat sharmao...

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