Tanhaai - mini KR SS update pg9 27/12/12

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Niharika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

realy awesome start..

pls accept my request nd pm me wen u update

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Sonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

nice concept

loved it

😃😃

do cont soon

n do pm me

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Konpal Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

||| Tanhaai |||

Part - 2

Next day...
Rey was still sleeping and was dreaming about his kriya. A small yet satisfied smile lit his face. Guess he was dreaming something good? His sleep was disturbed by a phone call. He cursed the caller for disturbing his dream as he was dreaming about kriya .
Seeing Vicky's name flashing on the phone he pick it up.
"Dude why didnt you came?" asked vicky.
"Sorry yaar Vicky main so gaya tha. Upar se sar (head) mein dard ho raha hai. Will meet you all directly in the college." Answered rey. He didnt have a slightest idea why he said he had headache.
"kay dude take care" said vicky and hung up the call.
Soon rey went to get ready and left for the college. He was driving blankly... memories of his and kriya were again and again flashing infront of his eyes which surely irritate him... it was true he wanted her, he knew all that was just a lie but his mind was still not ready to accept it. His heart knew it since the very day but his mind was not able to believe it STILL!!! Ah and that frustrated him even more...
When he look on the road ahead he saw a girl walking on the road opposite to its direction. Literally she was coming towards his car. He felt as if she was not paying attention. When he took command over the car again it was peak time... she was almost gonna hit by the car. Due to the incident she came out of trance and as a reflex fell back.
Rey came out of the car and was shocked beyond limit...

Finished!!!
Ah again a short one? Well doing assignments side-by-side make it more difficult
Sorry but since Im having a leave tomorrow so you can expect the last part tomorrow?
Well since I continued || Love - game of life | Arsha SS ||
I will only update that after its demand and this SS is completed!
So its all upto you all!
Love,
K

Edited by abhiyakreya - 12 years ago

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Misha

@Born2Dance

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

i guess it doesn't matter to u nemore rite ?

CHOCO !

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Konpal Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Born2Dance
i guess it doesn't matter to u nemore rite ?

CHOCO !

look whoz saying?

well I guess you were the one who was least interested in commenting

why to bother when I knew im never gonna get any comment?

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REDWINE

@Grey-licious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

awesome update K

I knw the girl is kriya...

update soon

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Misha

@Born2Dance

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

look whoz saying? i guess someone's kiddo !

well I guess you were the one who was least interested in commenting i din say dat ! never for u atleast !

why to bother when I knew im never gonna get any comment? tu yeh bol rahi hein ? seriously ?

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Awsome update. . . . .
Hope voh ladki kriya ho,
just hope. . . . . . . .
*fingers crossd*
and jaha tak short update ki baat hai,
as i just now read both the parts,
mujhe toh update bada hi laga. . . . .
Nxt part jaldi se update krna. . . . .
And pls pls pls pm me wen u update. . . . . . .