Tanhaai - mini KR SS update pg9 27/12/12

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

"Tanhaai" kafi interesting hai ...

Both of the parts were amazing 😃...

Loved them ❤️...

Will be waiting for the next part..

N thanks for the pm 😊.

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spicyrays

@spicyrays

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Intrstin cncpt...nd nyc update nd srie for d late response... Plz do pm me wen updt nxt part... Reali eager to read more

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

||| T a n h a a i |||
Part - 3

Soon rey's face showed anger... his faced beamed with it... just in a few seconds the girl was sitting on the passenger seat of his car and he was driving it. She was still not able to come out of trance. "What did just happened now?" thought the girl.
"Kyun gayi thi?" out of blue a question hit on her face.
She didnt replied back... She didn't knew what to reply? She went numb..
"Maine tumse kuch pucha kriya!!!" He spoke rage clearly visible in his voice.
"Ah.. wo..." she felt it difficult to speak.
"Wo sab jhut tha na?" He asked FINALLY!!! He knew if its answer is negative how much it would affect him but he wanted to knew.
"ha..haan..." she spoke hesitantly.
Tears flowed down from her eyes. Only she knew that was not the sole reason for her sudden departure. Guess there was someone else who even knew it? But for her... she only cared to tell that person not anyone else. Why? Just because...
Just when she spoke it tears flowed down from rey's eyes too... tears of happiness. He was driving to the college. Kriya was seriously not aware of anything happening around. All she knew was how to tell him ?
After they reached the college rey left inside to meet others. Kriya still stood at the entrance thinking "main andar jaaun kya?"
Finally se decided to go in. Not to meet all but to meet the only person she can trust upon in every thick and thins of her life.
She went in everyone was in canteen but not HIM. All hugged her tightly and cried. Even she did. All was fine b/w her and weaklings. her and rinni simmi vicky and nilesh. She wanted him to be here by her side like always. She excused and went to abandon corridor knowing her would be there. And exactly what she thought! He was there...
"SAM..." she spoke out with tears flowing down from her eyes.
Startled from the voice swayam turned back only to see her. He had tears and his eyes too. He opened his arms for her as she ran into his arms just like she always used to do.
She cried in his arms... his brotherly arms which always speak made her find solace.
"I.. I again lost swayam.. its just a month left and then..." she spoke tears continuously flowing down from her eyes.
"N..no..." spoke swayam
"All's finished..." she hugged him tighter and cried hard.
Both the besties cried in eachothers arms letting out all their sorrows.
She knew there was no back out, he knew he cant do anything... All they knew was there was a cliff at one side and a well on the other. No idea what t do and what not to.
"Told 'em?" Asked swayam.
Kriya didnt got the courage to look into his eyes for the first time.
"So you didnt?" asked swayam to which she nodded.
"I will tell them..." she looked up at him asking him not to ".. and you are gonna tell him!" swayam completed.
Soon kriya realized what he meant and started to say no only to get a glare from him.
She quietly nodded and left the place.
She messaged rey to meet her in the FE.
-- Fire Exit --
Rey entered the place only to see his baatcutter. A smile lit his face. He had thought of proposing her and he did.
He went on his knees infront of her holding her hand taking her by shock.
"Kriya.. you have always been my life. Ever since I have laid my eyes upon you I dont know what is that attracts me towards you... what makes me feel special when I have around you. All I knew is I love you... and would love you till eternity...Will you be mine? Forever?"
Spoke rey. Slowly kriya took her hand back as a drop of tear felled down from her eyes. This hurt rey a lot...
"N..no rey... I.. cant" She fumbled with words.
"Par kyon kriya?" asked rey as tears flowed down from his eyes.
"I dont have time rey... I dont have much time left with me..." she broke down crying and sat on the stairs crying hard. Only she knew how much it hurt her.
"I didnt got you.!" rey spoke.
"Leave me alone rey.." wiping her tears she started to leave only to be stopped by rey as he pulled her back and pinned to the wall.
"Not before you tell the truth." spoke rey angrily.
"Kya jaanna chahte ho haan? Yahi.. yahi ki mujhe cancer hai? Brain cancer hai mujhe... ek mahina bacha hai mere paas rey! Only one bloody month! Kyun nahi samajhte ho aap haan?" she asked as tears flowed down from her eyes.
"Tumhe... no kriya please say ye jhut hai..." said rey cupping her face.
"Ye sach hai rey..."
He hugged her tight for the last time?
"Im sorry rey but we can never be one..." she spoke looking right into his eyes.
And soon left the place. After that day no one knew where she was except swayam. Soon the love they all had for her turned into hatred but only reyam knew How hurt they both were.
All rey left with him was
TANHAAI...

Sad ending?
Sorry but that was planned since the beginning.
Do comment.
Love,
K

Edited by abhiyakreya - 12 years ago

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Ishana

@OneLove_S.W

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Unres...

Utni bhi sad ending nahi thi...😊

Kria ko brain cancer...😭...

Swayam ko sab pata tha...

Rey left vid tanhaayi nahi vid kria nd her memories...😊

Awseome update luved it...❤️

P-S-Me first to comment...😃...yipee..

Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 12 years ago

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kuhu bhatta

@kuhu_Arsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

suprb update dear,,,,,,,,,

i m loving it,,,,,

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: kriyaanshfreva
Unres...

Utni bhi sad ending nahi thi...😊 was it? 😕

Kria ko brain cancer...😭... hmm 😭 😭

Swayam ko sab pata tha... yup 😳

Rey left vid tanhaayi nahi vid kria nd her memories...😊 guess BOTH but still I didnt liked it. it came d way i thought but still nt statisfied 🤔

Awseome update luved it...❤️ eeks 😃

P-S-Me first to comment...😃...yipee.. lolz for the FIRST tym i guess? 😆

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Prachi

@prachi.kajen

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

nice...thnxx 4 d PM...😊

Edited by prachi.kajen - 12 years ago

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glmorous_diva

@glmorous_diva

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

amazing

kriya ko brain cancer...😭

sad ending bt atleast rey ko sab pta toh chala😊

loved it...

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

I lovd it.. I felt so connected to it.. Dunno y!
Swayam alrdy knew abt kriya wea as Reyaansh now knows d whole truth..
Destiny played wid dem again.. Title.. Its fully justified..

Reyaansh is lft wid kriya's memories only n thn it became his tanhaai..
Swayam knows wea kriya is.. But Reyaansh doesnt.. Y son:(

Kriya k end time pr Reyaansh uske sth hota toh.. 😭 😭

One more mini SS pleaj