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hi guys
i have written soem FF's on arhi in IPK forum
i am following qubool hai since it started and its now my favorite show i just loved it and since the kidnapping track is going on i thought to write an SS its not just about asya it will be about everyone just like in the show

hope you will like it

Zoya was shell shocked what has she got into herself. She knew she was in big trouble.

Zoya: a.. akram what do you mean

Akram laughed a very light evil laugh that sent shivers through zoya's spine

Akram: zoya I cant waste my time to explain what I meant let me just show u ok?
he held her hand and started dragging her

While zoya was busy shouting and trying to scratch his hands

But it looked like her scratching him wasn't making any difference

The two other guys were just behind then they really were looking creepy ant that's why no body moved an inch to try to save zoya from akram

Akram threw zoya in his car but zoya being zoya started punching him and his chest and suddenly zoya felt a tight slap across her face and due to the force akram used zoya bumped her head and the window of the car

Tears wouldn't stop today why why did she come here why did she listen to mr. khan why

While zoya was lost in her thoughts akram and the other guys managed to tie her hands her feet and her mouth zoya really idndt know what to do.

Asad's house~~~~

Dilshad was running here and there like a mad person she really had a very bad feeling she was worried for zoya just like a mother would be.

It was 8 pm now and no sighn from zoya suddenly the door opned and dilshad thought its zoya she ran and to her disappointment it was asad

Dilshad : asad ?

Asad : yes ammi ? what happened why are you looking soo tensed

Dilshad: asad zoya still didn't come I am really worried for her her phone is unavailable and …

Asad interrupted his mother: ammi zoya is very immature she doesn't care if anyone is worried for her or not

Dilshad : ASAD!!! Stop it now just stop zoya here I am so worried for her and u I have even sent najma to look for her

Asad: what you sent najma at that time what if something happens to her

Dilshad : I told the driver to stay with her she must be coming on any time

The door opened again and najma come crying in

Asad and dilshad both ran towards najma

Asad : najma what happened asad held her shoulders and shook her lightly

Dilshad cupped her face

Dilshad : what happned

Najma : zoya has been kidnapped.




how was it ? should i continue or not do tell me and if you want pms plz hit the like button and comment

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-Fizzi- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Continue soon! :D
Beautiful beginning! ❤️
risingsea101 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very Nice Start
Gonna look forward to reading it
Continue <3
darkangel93 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue soon!!! and pm me when you do!!! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Continue soon! :D
and dont frgt to pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its beautiful, pls keep writing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really nice start to the ss and please pm me when you continue

Nikki <3

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