SwaRon OS : It's A Christmas Miracle!

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Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Fabulous os..
Beautifully written..
Sharon's pain...her happiness on seeing kirti...
It ws all so awesome...
Luvd da os...
Muuaahh...
Superb neeti...
Keep writing more swaron..

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Awesome OS..

beautifully penned..

thanks for the pm...

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

RES Unres

sorry for being late 😳

Neeti 🤗

Super Awesome OS !

fantastically written 👏

loved the way u described both swayam and sharons emotions .

happy ending in the last was all what was needed .

thanks for the PM.

Edited by Tanuka_TanHa - 12 years ago

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muskan

@LoveShantannu

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

RES
unres
Firstly merry Christmas and a happy new year to you to
Now coming to the os , stop kidding saying that this os was a little gloomy. The os was more than Enough to bring a smile on our face. It was a Hatke os in which romance was not by hugging each other and sticking together but by staying together in every circumstances and being each others strength I though this os would be a one with just showing love and affection towards each other but as per the title you gave it a happy and a perfect ending that two a different one. I loved it so much
PS: Congo for your 10 th os. Hope you write more

Edited by LoveShantannu - 12 years ago

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Awesome update
It was a heart touching story.Sharon's pain was beautifully penned.Kirti was cute.
Loved it

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Merry Christmas in addvance guys 😃😉

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

I'll get back here soon.. Once my hectic schedule diffuses! :D

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Lassi_TanHa

@Lassi_TanHa

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

res
unres
Beautiful os..
loved it..😊
Sharon's pain on losg deir baby n swayam coudnt see his love in dat state..
Sharon findg d baby in d church n her happiness was beautifully penned down
sharon eyes searchg for answer from swayam n swayam replies wat name do you want for her..
swayam getg his perfect christmas gift his happy sharon back..

Edited by lassipriya - 12 years ago

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Phosphenes

@Phosphenes

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

You feel this wasn't romantic? Are you crazy? 😲

Romance does not always mean touching each other and kissing and saying sweet nothings. No. For romance to be there, there has to be understanding, care, concern and most of all, love. Love always makes even the most mundane looking things to be romantic. And here, there was a LOT of love. I could feel Swayam's sadness on seeing his wife so traumatized, so vulnerable, so numb to everything. So numb and distant from him. It killed him everyday. And when he saw his Sharon's eyes bouncing with happiness again, he knew it was just too precious to be lost again. He knew what her being there and yet being absent did to him. He understands her pain. He is with her, through her highs, through her lows. And that is just what makes them beautiful. Makes them Swayam and Sharon. Makes them SwaRon.

I love it. Congratulations on weaving such a beautiful story.😊