SwaRon OS : It's A Christmas Miracle! - Page 6

Originally posted by: tejukor

Hey...sweet heart...meri Christmas...n happy new year in advance dear...
Ok nw time to praising ur talent...here i go...awesome os n as every body know n u too that married Swaron is always a treat to read so thanks for this wonder ful treat.caring swayam n sensitive Sharon both character u perfectly penned.sorry for commenting late was inactive...thanks for the pm.

Thanks a lot for commenting. Same to u😊

Originally posted by: --NishaGoyal--

Neetizzz🤗
merry christmas to u too😃...
wow...an os from you after such a long time...😃...
Loved it ...❤️
swayam and sharon as a married couple are always a treat to read...
aww sharon lost her baby :(
Swayam was his usual self ...loving and caring...
loved how swayam was trying his level best to make sharon happy...
forgetting his own pain...
that is so swayam😳...
sharon got xcited on seeing the gift..
with the description u gave bout the dress i visualized it like the one swayam gifted sharon as her secret admirer😳...
sharon's pain and her feelings were very well penned down...
the girl who always wabted to be in the spotlight...
now doesnt likes socializing...
perfect ending!!
swayam got his old happy sharon back...
sharon found her lost child in the abandoned baby...
n the baby girl getting loving parents...

Thanx for the pm
and keep writing more oneshots😊

Thanks for the summary Hottie😆I'm glad u liked it

Originally posted by: marauder

First of all a merry christmas to you too. Now coming to the OS. What are you saying that this OS is not romantic? Are you kidding us? Its one of the most beautiful OS full of love, care and affection. Something which is perfectly apt for this festival season. Lovely work and I seriously loved reading this.

Well, I'm glad u found it romantic. Thanks for reading it😊

Originally posted by: pri_swaron

Awww!! That was such a sweet story!!! Lovely

Originally posted by: sakshibshah

beautifully penned down !! 😳

Thank you guys for liking it😳

Originally posted by: Tanhaforever4

sharon's love and pain...how beautiflly penned...!! 😊 😊
awsum work neeti...
*superb*,*brilliant*,fantabulous*.

I'm so glad u liked it Ambuja. Thanks

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK

Merry christmas and a happy New Year to you to dear :)

When i started reading a melancholy instantly hit me but as i continued what prevailed was love and hope. Sharon and Swayam looking after each other and how they find the perfect family which got him, his old smiling Sharon was awesome.

Thanks for the lovely comment di. Means a lot since it comes from a great writer like u.😊

EDITED :D

Beautiful os, please pm me for you future work :D

Originally posted by: Tanya_Swaronluv

Neeti i know i am late! Sorry was stuck with something!

I will not comment long long or something like that,There is one thing which i would like to say is it was beautiful..perfect as i wanted it! Thumbs up darling! I loved it!😃🤗
Love you Neeti..you are a OS rockstar! 😉

Now can i request or except New Years OS as i asked you to make the OS romantic but it was not..so can you?? If you can than PM me..we will talk! Please say YES! 😳

Thank you Tanya di. M glad u liked it!

Originally posted by: Trupti09

this was so cute.sharons pain was beautifully penned down.swayam is such a sweetheart.
kirti😊 she is cute.loved their perfect family.all in all it was awesume os.

Originally posted by: sanj.98

beautiful..❤️ every single part of it...u make it seem so real 😊

Originally posted by: Swaron17

Omg the update waz so dam cute n adorable...loved da update.
i loved da way swayam cared 4 sharon
neways wish u a merry christmas n a very happy new year ⭐️

Originally posted by: mili1987

Wow...seriously i am out of words

you are a beautiful writer...

really loved it👏👏👏👏👏

Thank u so much guys!😃

Originally posted by: tanha29

Beautiful OS Neeti!! I am so glad that someone chose to write on SwaRon spending quality time on Christmas. It depicts love beautifully!!And you feel this isn't romantic?Crazy girl
And the whole OS from where Swayam is trying to see her smile again, to the church thing to Sharon hearing the soft cries of the abandoned baby is blissful.
After everything went hayfire in her 8th month, sadness was evident in her behavior. She became traumatized. And she thought that, she was responsible for killing her baby though Swayam didn't think the same. And she became kind of austere after college especially after this incident. She was quite vulnerable, I guess..Swayam was dying to see her smile and inside it was killing him!!And that day outside the church, her smile returned because of that baby!!The bottom line is that Swayam is with Sharon, always, in some way. And this is what makes them beautiful and amazing.
You gave me my happy Sharon once again. You gave me our family once again.
Loved this line😊
Congo on your 10th OS :P
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!!

Thanks for the lovely comment Mihika. M glad u liked it, since ur a wonderful writer😳

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon

Neets yaar What a pleasent surprise, an OS from you after long time.😳😳 It is one of the best.👍🏼 Though you said it is not a romantic one, how can one ever be deprived of romance when an OS is on our magical pair, SwaRon, You have penned down wonderfully, each part made me love them all the more😎. What i felt was that you hve brought in the beauty of adoption, giving a life to a child is something awesome.⭐️ Only our SwaRon can think of that. How deftly swayam dealt with the whole situation, aw his christmas gift is sharon's smile❤️ Neeti hats off to my dear girl, I just proclaim you as the Queen of OS 👏😃 You are the coolest writer my darling, it is just best treat one can get for christmas. love you🤗

Suku di🤗I toh think u forgot me😭Thanks for taking the time out to read and comment on my OS😳

Originally posted by: tanzz15

Oh my SSS...tightest hug to you for this 'out of the world' piece... 🤗
Congo... 🥳 for your 10th OS!!!!
My sweetheart I just loved it.You have done an excellent job dear...actually,i wanted to explain more but,believe me I am really not getting words to express my feelings dear.Its really a christmas gift for all of us.I can just say,you are going to become a great writer in the future dear...all my best wishes for you... 😊

My amazing big sis! I love u😳❤️Thanks for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by: KunwarKiDeewani

This is such a Beutiful OS :D
Really very niicee . And Merry Christmas to you as well :)
Enjoy. x

Thanks a ton Suhaima😳

Originally posted by: yogini64

Awww wow . . . . . Just loved it 🤗
poor sharon . . . . . Had to go through such a trauma 😭
she did'nt recovered at all . . . . 😔
but christmas surely did give them the best present ever 🥳
sho cute baby . . . . . I can imagine her very well 😃
pata nhi log kyun chod dete hai apne babies ko 🤔
complete happy family 😊
bhago . . . Isse pehle uske asli parents aa jaye 😆

Thanks lot for the sweet comment di😳

Originally posted by: meevee

Beautifully written...very much in the spirit of the season...it is always so wonderful when the unseen but definitely powerfully felt force up there decides to change the life of pepl, so that sumone with no one gets to b cherished by those who hav yearned for that presence in their lives...beautiful sketch of Sharon and a tribute to the Swaron luv when SwAyam choses to save Sharon in a life-defining moment...aptlywritten and Merry Christmas to u

Thank u!!

Originally posted by: IntricateKnots.

Neeti, Amazing OS dear.

I will get back to you with my regular ID, just trying to get this one promoted! :P

Though, editing will take a while as school is busy these days :/

Thanks Nivi. Take ur time😃

Originally posted by: tannu_swayam

Hi neeti...😊well well well...a christmas present 2 all d readers...🤗nd truly it ws a treat fr all f us...😳u chose a vry nyc concept for ur story.😊..swaron r painstricken nd torn apart...lyf has plyd a vry cruel gme wit dem...u brought a vry beautiful descrption f SwaRon' feelins..👏..u hve penned dwn d feelins f swayam rly nycly.😳..how he ws feelin on seein sharon in such a state...wen he had 2 choose btwn sharon nd d child...knwin swayam he wud obviously choose sharon...finally durin christmas wen evry1 z rejoicin swaron also found happiness😊...well d abandoned baby prt ws srsly unexpected...it ws a rly nyc thought.👍🏼..nd i luv d fct dat here sharon found d baby near a church...lyk god Himself wnts 2 gve happiness..😊.u portrayed extremely well how sharon so easily bonded wit d child.😊..how attached she ws within moments...nd swayam...such a swthrt he z as alwys.😳😳..luvd how he understud sharon's happiness...Nd u explained his escatic feelin on findin his old sharon bak superbly..😊.nd indeed a miracle happened durin christmas...dey found deir lost happiness...it ws a vry soothing nd beautiful read neeti.⭐️⭐️..a rly rly beautiful story.😊..luvd it...Merry Christmas...😃

Aww thanks a ton for the lovely comment Uzma😳❤️

Originally posted by: Sunitha_Swayam

Wow Neeti...awesome...a very nice Xmas gift 🤗
thnx for d PM dear

Originally posted by: Prithvi_n

This OS was freaking awesome..nice concept..loved it truly...

Thnx 4 the PM

Originally posted by: tanha_

keep it up ...nd merry christmas dear...

Thank u guys🤗

Originally posted by: Tanuka_TanHa

RES Unres

sorry for being late 😳

Neeti 🤗

Super Awesome OS !

fantastically written 👏

loved the way u described both swayam and sharons emotions .

happy ending in the last was all what was needed .

thanks for the PM.

Thank you ...Better late than never😉

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

Beautiful os, please pm me for you future work :D

Nikki <3

Thanks. And sure

loved the OS...emotional and beautiful..the baby part brought tears to me...keep writing

awesome os loved it
and
congrats for ur 10 os
i hope that u quickly make it to 10000

Hey!!! Had exams so Im really sorry n Im very late!! sorry!!