OneShot: Cordon Sanitaire (16+)

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Shruti Gupta

@Shruti21

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

what the hell..???

what was that..?? actually what made you write it...???

were you not like being cruel..??

how could you write this saie..??

i am shocked.. i read the last few para first..

and i was like - has she turned mad or what,..??

seriously yaar, it was well written.. if only i was cruel like anjali..

there would have been loads of appreciation

but darling i am still chota sa baby who is trying to recover from the shock

she got from delhi case.. till now no day has been passed when i din cried..

it was very hard to read...😭 but your style, your words they are just outstanding,...

Edited by Shruti21 - 12 years ago

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PariKC

@IdioTinTin

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

Creepy and different but awesome

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

different concept. :)

yet scary coz arnav and khushi killed. :(

thnx for the pm.

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

That was bloodcurdling, Pearl! Absolutely chilling. It seemed right out of a mental's mind at first but then started making sense. Anjali would have my respect had she really done away with the criminal with something more than a slap. And She has my respect here - although I do pity her.

Edited by -Dee- - 13 years ago

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laksh65

@laksh65

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

very touching os, dark one but interesting

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

That was very different !!!!!
But was written amazingly !!!!!!!
👏

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shagun05

@shagun05

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

Okay that was something very very different and I found it interesting.

I feel that creating a suspense drama is your forte. I am sure that you can write other genres as well but its just that I have read Achilles Heels and this one I felt that way.

The way you chose the words to create the feeling of the surroundings and the situations is simply fantastic ! The way you create the emotions in the characters it makes me feel that I am on the scene spot and I watch the characters going through the events.

This OS is also a very beautiful piece of your writing. I totally enjoyed reading it.

Thank You for the PM.

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sharme

@sparklystarstud

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

"CORDON SANITAIRE"

Perfect title maggie... and the way you ended it by saying "Quarantined" on her legal papers...

started and ended it at the same point... an altogether different approach breaching a new subject, aren't you darling... I LOVED IT NONETHELESS!!! keep experimenting... we might get more surprises afterall...

for the first few lines, i was on the impression that it was Khushi... but when I read the scream of a woman and a man, i knew it was Anjali... and her sore feet and bleeding ankle gave it away... yet i loved the suspense of it... without revealing the individuals, or should i say "pointing out the obviousness of the ONE individuals thoughts"... WOW!!!

i wish you were always on break so we could get these delightful treats always... i truly missed your writing and word plays hon... and your this new aspect of hidden notions in the story is amazing... Anjali's detached isolation in this story made it to my heart girl... the way she condemned herself for her mistakes... BRILLIANT!!!

and this kept me away from writing and finishing mine... so you might have to wait till tomorrow to read it... and hey, its not my fault as you know I love to read your works and nothing is important before reading your one shots... THEY ARE ALWAYS THE BEST!!!!

looking for more delicacies dearie... you know I am an addict right!!!!

luv ya my margarita

~~~ sam xoxo

Edited by sparklystarstud - 13 years ago