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RikaFurude

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Posted: 12 years ago

I am a big fan of mohit raina and sonarika bhadoria.I love their couple so much that i decided to write a fanficiton.

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King Shiva -Lord of whole India and have foreign contacts as well.He is a dominant king and uses both force and diplomacy to maintain his supremacy.He has two wives and but his favorite is sugandha.He also have a ganika.

Queen Sugandha-She used to be the commander in chief of shiv's army.She proved her worth as a soldier and shiv got very impressed by her performance.so he proposed her and she gladly accepted.She is his second wife.

Queen Sunaina-She was a daughter of a rival noble of shiv.He married her to make other nobles in favor of his supremacy.He pays attention to her requests and reciprocates because he thinks its duty of a husband to pay attention to his wife but this sometimes becomes a thing of conflict between sugandha and sunaina.She is his first wife.

Princess Durga-She is princess of Persia.Shiv wants to capture persia but Durga is a strong opponent.Persia is a bone of contention between them.They also have formally met for two or three times.She has no brothers or father and they were killed in a battle with ruler of Greece.

Mohini-Ganika of shiv.

Shobha-Daughter of Sunaina and shiv.

Skanda-He is son of sugandha and shiv.He too is a warrior like his parents.He is a devotee of lord Kartikeya while his dynasty follows Lord Vishnu.

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Foram

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice character sketch.
Liked to knw that u mentiond mouni too here.
And sugandha is his love.
But a ques u being a fan of mohit sona why u didnt make them as a couple.
Or in future we wil se them together. Like sugandha wil die or something.
By the way luking forward for the story do pm me.

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sindhupv

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Posted: 12 years ago

Interesting synopsis. Please continue. 👍🏼

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RikaFurude

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: foram.
Nice character sketch.
Liked to knw that u mentiond mouni too here.
And sugandha is his love.
But a ques u being a fan of mohit sona why u didnt make them as a couple.
Or in future we wil se them together. Like sugandha wil die or something.
By the way luking forward for the story do pm me.

Death???

I didn't mentioned death anywhere. 😕

Please read the story and thank you for your valuable comment.

I am not going to give any spoilers for the story. 😊

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RikaFurude

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Oonagh
Interesting synopsis. Please continue. 👍🏼

I am glad forum members liked my story's plot.I am going to continue the story for sure.

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RikaFurude

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Posted: 12 years ago

Links for the episodes

episode one http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3350713

episode two & three http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3350713&TPN=3

episode four http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3350713&PID=72110794&#72110794

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Rumjhum Laha

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Posted: 12 years ago

i am happy to see more dkdm ffs dere..but baapre shiv k itne sare queens??and ganika too?? aha aham...shiv is shaded here its good

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

beautiful cs...continue dear😊

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RikaFurude

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Posted: 12 years ago

Episode 1-Start of the conflict

The most smart and arrogant,this is what his subjects calls him.He who is the most handsome on the EARTH,who is loved by his citizens,the most considerate to poor,loved by his queens,king shiv of Jambudweep(India) was in his court.

a noble-maharajadhiraj,ye shan atyant vichlit karne waala hain.Persia ke raajkumari durga hamare shetron par aakraman karne ke yojna bana rahe hain.hamein hamari suraksha shetra ko aur sudridh karna hoga.

minister-awashya he devi durga ke hamare haavi ho jaane se rajkula ke prathishta par prashna uth sakte hain.jan mein shanka uth sakte hain ke unka sevak(the king)unke raksha hetu ab yogya nahe hain.

The king was listening all this with great patience.He here showed that he was a noble man of good breeding.

Shiv-mantrigan hum is samasya se bhale bhaati awgat hain.Charun(one of his ministers),aap surya(his commander in chief)ko aadesh den ke we apne sena ke saath jambudweep mein meluha prant mein suraksha sudridh kar den aur samasya bhadhte hain to Durga ke sena par aakraman karne mein sankoch na karein.

charun-jaise maharajadhiraj param bhattraka ke agya.

shiv in his mind-Durga ek chatur rajkumari hain apne rajya ke.Hamne uske visheshtaon ko undekha karne ke bhool kaise kar de.hamare hriday mein awashya he jo dushit vichaar aye the unhone hamare mastiksha ko durbal bana diya.(he thought how a girl could defeat him.)Hum bhool gaye the ke ek stri bhe utne he shaktishaali ho sakte hain jitna ke ek purush.Hamare pyaari mahishi sugandha ke he visheshtaon ko hamein bhulna nahe chahiye tha.

shiv-mantrigan ab sabha samapt hote hain.

everyone got up and did namaskar to him.He returned the courtesy.

sugandha was practicing sword fighting with her daasi.

sugandha-ah,ah

daasi-ah

sugandha immediately slammed her sword and she fell on the ground.

sugandha was taking heavy breaths.

shobha was seeing this hiding behind a door.

sugandha-aaj ke liye bahut ho gaya,tum jaa sakte ho.

daasi did pranaam to her.

as sugandha turned she saw shobha hiding behind the door.she smiled.

sugandha-shobha.

shobha was scared

sugandha-putri,yahan aao,wahan kyun khadi ho?

shobha was really scared of sugandha.

sugandha-putri bhaybheet kyun ho rahe ho,aao na.

shobha peeked a little and came out.

sugandha-aao.

shobha came to her.

sugandha-putri tum wahan khade ho kar hamein aise kyun dekh rahe the?

shobha-hamein bhe talwaar chalana seekhna hain.

sugandha smiled-accha,to theek hain hum tumhe sikhayenge.

shobha-kintu maa ne kaha hain ke hum aapse vartalaap na kara karein.

sugandha-oh,😡aisa kyun?

shobha-ah

sugandha-daro mat,kaho na,kya hum tumhe acche nahe lagte?

shobha-aisa nahe hain chote ma.

sugandha-to phir kyun?

shobha-hamein nahe pata,bas ma kehte hain.

sugandha-accha to ek karya karte hain,tum na hamse chup chup kar mil liya karo,isse apki ma bhe krodhit nahe honge aur aap talwaar chalana bhe seekh jaoge.

shobha-sacche

sugandha-awashya putri.

shobha hugged her.

sugandha-ah 😃

sunaina entered

sunaina-shobha 😡

shobha got scared.

sunaina-tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?tumhe to paak kala ke liye guru ma ke paas hona chahiye.

shobha-jee ma hum...she ran away.

sugandha-apna dwesh apne putri se kyun lete ho?

sunaina-kaisa dwesh.

sugandha-tum bhale bhaati jaante ho hum kya keh rahe hain.

sunaina was about to go when sugandha caught her hand.

sugandha-tum hamein taal nahe sakte.

sunaina-accha to suno,hum tumse dwesh karte hain aur karte rahenge.hamare pati ko tumne hamse cheena hain.

sugandha-maharaja ne hamein swayam vivah ka prastaav diya tha jo hamne sweekar kar liya.isme hamara kya dosh hain.

sunaina-tum chahte to prastaav ko na bhe keh sakte the.kyun nahe kaha tab,bolo?

sugandha-wo

sunaina-jab bhe hum tumhe maharaja ke saath dekhte hain hamein peeda hote hain aur hum nahe chahte hamare putri us stri ke saaye mein rahe jo uske maa ke dukh ka kaaran hain.aaj tum priya ho maharaja ko,kahin aisa na ho hamari peeda kal tumhe sehne pade.😭 she left.

sugandha 😭 thinks-isme hamara kya dosh hain?yahe ke humne maharaja se prem kiya aur unse vivah kiya.

suddenly a hand was on her shoulder.

shiv-hamari maharani ke aakhon mein ashru shobha nahe dete.

sugandha-maharaja 😃 he wiped her tears.

shiv-kya hua maharani?aap itne vichlit kyun hain.

she hugged him.

sugandha-maharaja kya aap hamse prem karte hain?

shiv-ye kaisa prashna hain?

sugandha-hamein is prashna ka uttar chahiye.

shiv-aseem prem,aseem prem hain muzhe...

sugandha smiled.

shiv-mein apne dono raaniyon se aseem prem karta hun,ye ek raja ka kartavya hain,use sabke prati samaan hona chahiye.he kissed her head and went away.

sugandha-🤢

shiv realized that he hurt her.

he turned and again came back to her.

he placed his hands on her shoulder and slowly hugged her.

shiv-mein na he tumhe dukhe dekh sakta hun na he sunaina ko.kya tum chahoge ke tum mere dukh ka kaaran bano.

sugandha-ye aap kya keh rahe hain,hum aapko kabhe dukhe nahe kar sakte.she hugged him tightly.sunaina came there to take a thing there when she saw them hugging.she became really really sad,tears were flowing to her cheeks.she ran away sadly.

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Foram

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Nice start.
Awww they huggd and shiv has asim prem on both the ranis great.
Seems sugandha is nice by heart.
Hope sunaina and sugandha become sisters.

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