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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi guyz main aik choti si ff likhna chaty hon .....hope u 'll like my new ff

There are two families:-

1:-Goenka family

2:-Rathore family

1st i introduse goeka family

Goenka family:-

Mr.Hemraj Goenka (he has two sons 1:-Sidhart goenka and 2:-Mansen Goenka)

1:-Gunvanty W/O sidhart (He has two sun Suraj and Yuvraj and two doughters vishakha and Raveena

2:-shakuntala W/O Mansen (He has Only one sun Arjun)

Now i introduce you Rathore family:-

Rathore Family:-

Mr Suriabhan Rathore (he is bu jee for allz and he has two suns 1:- Rajveer Rathore and 2:-Ranveer Rathore)

1:-Rakhy W/O Rajveer (He has 2 sun kashave and Luksh and two daughters shefali and manesvi.)

2:-Rekha W/O Ranveer (he has only one doughter i.e bhumika)

rakhi and rekha both are also sisters

Now story is start:-

Who Mr galay main red romal dalay jhoomtay jhamtay taiz kadmoo say iss kay pichay pichay chulay aa rahay thay.....Bhumika rathore kay dil ki dhedkan jitni taiz hoi thi iss say kahin ziada reftar is kay kadmoo nay pukrrii thi....beg ka strep sholder say uter ker latek gaya ....hath main sendle uthay who bhag rahi thi.............anchel beterteeb ho ker kadmoo ki matii chonay laga.......mager issay apna hosh na tha....iss nay pechay murr ker dekha aur ussay apna itny pass dekh ker iss kay hosh hi urnay lugay

B-aaay bhegwan!!!!!kaisa manhoos din tha jo main tehna aur pedal nikal purii .......but suddenly she sees a gate open a jar,,,,phir kiya who gate par kerty hoi ander bhagii .....ser diwar say tekrya yah piller say ser ghoom raha tha ankhay dekhnay kay kabel na rahin(guyz who koi dewar ya piller nahin bulkay humara hero arjun tha)

A-kon hay app ...? aur iss terha kissi kay gher main dakhil honay ka kiya tareeka hay ??"

B-hay...!!!! dewaray bhi bolty hain "(bharii merdana awaz iss ki semat say tekraii ...apnay chekratay hoy sir ko kaboo ker kay ankhay kholi to herat say ankho nay palkoo ki jhaler giranay say inkar ker dia............jis ka sahara lay ker bhoomi sahiba khurii thi who koi dewar ya piller nahin tha bulkay aik lunmba ,chora behad dashing personelty ka insan tha ....aikdam bhoomi ko ser main uthta hoa pain fell hoa to dimagh ka meter ghomnay main dair na lugiiiii...aur who arjun per chilanay lugii

B-app insan hay ya pahar jaisii dewar ...kiya zarroret thi meray samnay anay kii .....uff ....pichay who bekra aur agay bekra numa insan....!!

"itna kuch sunay kay bad to arjun herat say uss ki shakel dekh raha tha .....but pichay say husnay ki awaz aii to murr ker arjun nay yuv ko khoon khawar nazroo say dekha jisay iss ki beizatyy ki koi perwa na thi

YUV nay arjun ki khoon khawar nazroo say buchnay kay liy yuv nay apni hansii roknay ki nakam koshish ki....tabhi bhoomi dono ki perwa na kertay hoy apnay sendel aur apna beg hatho main uthay gate ki taref jaty hay .......mager dertay dertay gate say bahir dekhty hay but juld hi dobara ander aa jaty hay

yuv says 2 Arjun

Y-how strainge!!!!!yar kamal ki lurki hay....thak say tumharay dil per warr kiya mager zara jo sherminda hooo....isay kehtay hain aik to chorii upper say sina zorii

A-shut up......(arjun ki nazer bhoomi per hi thi ......who wapis murr ker aa rahi thi sandel abhi bhi uss kay hath main hi thay .........bhoomi nazdeek aii aur kaha )

B-who.....b..bakra

Y-kiya matleb hay app ka ......yeh itna daishing bunda app ko bakra nazer a raha hay

B-nahin mera matlab hay app......bakra

A-had ho gai....(abb kay arjun ki berdasht jawab day gai)

A-aik to bina ijazet app humaray gher main ghuss aain aur doosray musalsal humarii beizaty ker rahin hain(arjun ka dil chaha iss chetank bher larki ka hasher ker day

Y-"humain bukra keh ker"(yuv nay sentence complete kiya) iss silsilay main app per dafa 420 lag sukty hay aur app herjana ada kiy begair iss gher say bahir kadam nahin rekh suktin...

B-dimagh kharab ho gaya hay app ka 'main app dono ko bakra nahin keh rahi ...bekra to bahir hay

A-oooohhh......!"(lugta tha jaisa humaray hero ko abhi tak yakeen nahin ayya ....arjun burii hi ajeeb nighahoo say bhoomi ko deka....jis nay tight trouser aur with out slevez walii taight kameez aur sth duputa liy.......aur sath paonn main payel pehnii hoi thi,,,,,,,,,,klip shayud gir gaya tha iss liy baal sholders per bikher gay thay....arjun ko who kahin say bhi frod nahin lug rahi thi.....)

B-kamal hay app log mujhay koi chor samjh rahain hain....zara bahir to dekahy

y-ok main abhi dekhta hon

suddenly yuv calls the arjun

y-abbay arjun yeh pekra to humaray plant hazem ker raha hay(gate kay bahir 4 feet agay tak haray bhuray plant lugay hoy thay)

B-aa gaya na yakeen

suddenly aik car aa ker rukty hay aur uss main sau kuch teen agers boyz nikaltay hay unn main say aik agay burhata hay and says

guy-yeh raha humara bukra.....kitni mishklo say pall poos ker issay itna bura kiya hay aur yeh ajj bhag nikla

bhoomi agay bhurtii hay and says

B-acha to yeh app ka bukra hay .....bukray ko sumbhalna nahin atta to paltay kyun hoooo....aysay behuda aur budtameez bukra hay kay meray pichay lug gaya

guy-miss humara bukra dil wala hay aur husan perast bhi...app kay hussan ka dewana ho gaya ...iss liy app kay picha lug gaya

aur who guyz bukray ko car main bitha ker car bagha lay gay....bhoomi ko yeh dekh ker aur gussa atta hay and she says

B-stupid....ideat....jahiloon say itna bhi na ho saka kay main uss bukray ki wajha say aut of way ho gai hon mujhay lift hi day detay .....abb kitna pedal jana puray ga

"aur jub bhoomi nay dehan kiya to yuv aur arjun hans rahay thay"

B-applog hans rahay hain ....mera mazak urra rahain hain

y-pehlay app yeh batain dil walay bukray kay sath jana app ko kaisa lugta////again laughing

bhoomi gussay say dono ko dekhtay hoy wahan say chulii jaty hay aur arjun ussay door tak dekhta rehta hay

to be continue....................

guyz hope u like it

byeeeeeeeeeeeee

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diyafah thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#2
wow!it's amazing!y din't u submit a short ff for the upcuming newsletter...we have many members who r sending their ff!if u have one..plz do send iit 2 me...by pm
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Posted: 18 years ago
#3
wowwwwwwwwwww its great awsome plz post new part soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#4
helllo guyz diya aur isha kay ilawa kissi nay bhi commint nahin diya kiya ff itni buri hay 😭 guyz plz read it
ok byeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 18 years ago
#5
awesome ff ,plz update da next part soon ,
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Posted: 18 years ago
#6
hi guyz
iam updating
in rathore villa....
bhoomi reached home ....and bhoomi aue shefali aik hi room main hoty hain.....bhoomi tells her whole story
B-tumhain kiya pata shfalii uss wekt mera jee chah raha tha kay unn dono ko shooot ker don...mery help kernay kay bajay who dono mera mazak urha rahay thay..
S-thumhara to dimagh kharab hay bhoomi jo bu g kay order ko chalenge kernay nikel gai thi who bhi akelii....bu g nay mana kiya hay na iss gher ki koi lady begair driver kay bahir nahin jay gii
B-oooyyy main koi lady nahin hon iam a girl ok
S-acha waisay tum akelii gai kahan thi
B-manasvi di ki shadi ka gift lynay...
S-to akailay janay ki kiya zaroret thi tumhain .....gher main kitnay driver aur gariyan hay tum unn main nahin ja saki thi
B-abb bus bhi karoo main to yeh soch rahi hon kay mansvi di ki shadii main kitna maza annay wala hay
S-han yar isss gher ki pehlii shadi hay...acha bhoomi aik bat poochon
B-han g poocho
S- who jo tum nay dolly (shefal's and bhoomi's frd) ki shadi main face mask lagaya tha ....who tum nay khud tayar kiya tha na??
B-han..
S-plz to mujhay uss ki resipi hi bata doo....mera skin dekho thori rough ho rahi hay
B-who no naturly rough hay...abb mery jaisa fresh aur innocent skin kisi kisi kay pass hi hoty hay
S-acha abb ziada bano mat....juldy say batao na
B-acha zara gor say suna ok ........1st kurain main say 5 ya 6 added tamatooo and green chili achi terha maish ki hoi ....aur aik kha cheez ...koi sa bhi stong acid in sub cheezo ko mix ker kay apnay iss face per lugana ......iss kay bad ager tumhari skin ka safaya na hoa to jo kahoo gi karon gii
S-bhoomi main tujhay choton gi nahin...hmmm yeh face maks na tum hi try kerna hhmmmmm
B-ha ha ha ha
S-dafa ho jao yahan say werna mujhay tumhara katel kernay say koi nahin rok sukta.........
B-ha ha ah .....byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
S-daikh lon gi tujhay bhoomi ki buchi
Next scene
restorent kay ground hall main arjun enter hota hay aur shyud kissi ko dhond raha hota hay ..aur ussay juld hi suraj aur yuv raj nazer aa jatay hain....who unn kay kareeb jata hay and says...
A-sorry yar .....! iam too late ....."arjun nay apni wrest watch main time dekhtay hoy sorry ki
S-contect milnay ki khushi main dinner tum day rahay ho kay hum ...kitna intazar kerwaya tum nay...
A-sorry suraj acha ruko main abhi ayya ......."who hustay hoy counter ki taref berh gaya and says...
A-excuse me ...plz mera order exept kurain
arjun ki awaz per who murri lykin arjun ko dekhtya hi uss nay juld hi dobara moon mor liya...but faida arjun to ussay dekh chuka tha...arjun was shocked ...who waiteress kay dress main dusroo kay order lay rahin thi...bhoomi thinks
B-yeh insan numa bukra yahan kiya ker raha hay.....lykin bhoomi ko uss ki confuse kerty hoi nigahay dara bhi rahin thi....dosray hi pel who wahan say khisak gai but who wahan bhi aa gaya...and says
A-acha to app bekroo ko pichay luganay kay ilawa insano ko bhi intertain kerty hain???
B-mind your language mr.....app ko meray personles meter main interfair kernay ka koi haq nahin hay
A-miss jis jagha app khuri hay na iss wekt ....yahan app public athorty hain....arjun nay issay jataya
B-yeh app ka concept ho ga but mera nahin.......yahan per khuray rehnay walay bhi insan hotain hain....unn ki bhi koi majboori hoty hay
A-acha app ki kiya majboori hay
B-app meray kiya lugtay hay jo main app ko bataon
A- main kon ho app nahin janty to juld jan jain gii.....mager gher ja ker apnay gher walo ko wajahat zaroor dena
B-app ko kaisay pata kay meray gher waloo ko nahin pata kay main job kerty hon
A-app kay iss beautyful face per likha hay....and arjun hasta hoa wahan say chula jata hay
B-damn it .......
to be continue hope guyz app logo ko story pasand aay gi
ok byeeeeeeeeeeee
sweet_isha_110 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#7
lugta hay guyz story ziada passand nahin aai
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Posted: 18 years ago
#8
very nice ff ,plz continue updating 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#9
hello guyz ....thx 4 responce
now iam updaiting
Bhoomi reached home....and go to shefali's room b/c shefali is a best friend of bhoomi...when he entered shefali's room ...shefali's says to her
S-bhoomi kahan gai thi tum ..........
B-main kahin nahin bus zara....................
S-dunya kay saray ultay seedhay kam tumhain hi kyun soojhtain hain ....bolo...kyun ki tum nay uss restorent main job kyun ki bataoooo....kiss cheez ki kami hay tumhain yahan .....mr suriabhan rathor kay chotay betay ranveer rathore ki ikloty bety restorent main job kerty hoi milli...jo aysay kaii restorent ki tanha malik hay
B-tumhain kis nay bataya.....
S-mujhay kissi nay bhi bataya ho ...lykin mujhya bataoo tum nay aysa kyun kiya...
B-bus tum yeh sub choro yeh dekho 2000Rs/= merii 4 din ki mehnat ka nateeja.....dekho plzzzzzzzzzz yeh last time hay bu g ko pata nahin lugna chahy
S-han theek hay per tum nay aysa kyun kiya
B-dekho shefali tumharay aur mansvii di kay ilawa merii koi aur sis nahin hay.....main chaty hon kay mansvii di ko main apni kamaiii ka tohfa don ...but jub main uss dil mol gai thi na to main apna beg kahin rekh ker bhool gai ......lykin jub mujhay who beg milla to usss main kuch coins kay ilawa kuch nahin tha...(shefali heranii say bhoomi ki batain sun rahin thi)
S-jaoo maroo tum...meray begair jaon gi to yahin ho ga na (bhoomi ko sun ker aur guusa aa gaya)
B-tum say kaha to tha ...lykin tum jaisii gadar dost hi hoty hay jo wekt per daga dain jaty hain...
S-han to main kyun jaty ....pata hay mansvii di shadii kay liy main apnay face ki kitnii care ker rahin hon...itni germi main tumharay sath jaty to merii to skin ka ho jata na sutyanas
B-tumhara to face hi aysa hay jitnii care karoo aysii hi rahay gaa
S-tum to na meri khoobsoorti say julty hi rehna
B-tum say julay meraa joota ...acha yeh bataoo tumhain pata kaisay chula kay main restorent main job ker rahin hon.....
S-who suraj jijoo ka phone ayya tha unhoo nay bataya
B-acha main nay to nahin dekha suraj jijoo ko
S-shayud tum bhool rahi hoo kay tumharay final exams kay bad bu g kay dost kay potay kay sath jo suraj jijoo ka cozen bhi hay tumharii sugaii aur uss kay bad shadii ho jay gii
aur yeh rishta 1 saal say paka hay
B-main aysay insan say shadii kaisay karoon jiss ko main nay kubhi dekha hi nahin
S-bu g ki merzii kay khilaf jaoo giii
B- nahin main aysa nahin karoo gii...acha abhi main sonay ja rahin hon kafi raat ho gai hay
S-ok byeee ...take care
B-take carez 2
and she leaves
Next morning :-
ajj mansvii ki mehndii ki rasam thi...gher main aik hangama tha...akhir kar rathore villa main pehli shadi thi...lykin ajj to bhoomi ki bat hi aleg thi ....black colour main net ka frock aur sath chori dar trouser sath black colour ki nazuk si sendal.. sath khobsorat sii payel....who ajj kissi princess say kam nahin lug rahi thi.........bee g (grand mother)nay to rekha (bommi's mother)say keh ker iss ki nazer bhi utrwa li thi
bhoomi nay luksh aur keshave ko porch maincar main bethtay hoy dekha to who dorr ker unn kay pass pohunchi and says.....
B-luksh luksh kahan ja rahay ho ...
L-hum bu g kay friend kay gher yeh kuch shagun ka kuch saman denay ja rahain hain
B-acha ...aysa karo mujhay merii aik frd kay gher jana hay plz mujay chor doo
Keshave-tum nay bu g say pocha!!
B-g keshave bhuya main nay pocha hay (but suddenly luksh says )
L-nahin keshave bhuya mujhay nahin lugat kay iss nay bu g say poocha hay
B-acha!!!!!to main jhoot bol rahin hon
K-nahin dekho bhoomi ager bu g ko pata lug gaya na to humarii khair nahin ho gii
bhoomi kuch sunay bina hi pichly seat per beath gaii and says
B-main nay kaha na main nay poocha hay
L-bhoomi iss halet main jaoo gi
B-han !!!kyun iss halet ko kiya hoa hay
K-acha yeh bataoo jana kahan hay
B-rustain main bata don gii
K-okz
after some minutes
K-bhoomi kahan jana hay yar bataoo bhi abb
B-aysa karoo pehlay bu g kay dost kay gher lay chaloo phir mujhay chor dena okz
K-ok as u like
bhoomi jub jani pehchanii jagha per pohunchti to who chonk ker reh gai yeh to who hi heritage house tha jahan iss nay punha lii thi uss bukray say buchnay kay liy....suddenly he says
B-sunooo keshave bhuya ,,,,car ander mat lay ker jaoooo plz main yahin hon car main ok
K-ok as u like
gate keeper nay keshave aur luksh ko dekh ker foren hi gate khol diya jaisay who dono yahan kai bar aa chukay hain....bhoomi ko yeh daikh ker herat hoi...pata nahin kyun bhoomi ka dil dubara uss ajnabii ko dekhnay ko machel raha tha....pata nahin kaisii khuwaish thi...jisay who apna dushman sumjhty thi aur kaii dafa uss kay hath apni beizatii bhi kerwa chukki thi ussi ko dekhnay kay liy dil muchal raha tha....keshave aur luksh ander ja chukay thay....abhi who yeh sub soch hi rahi thi kayaik silver gray corolaaa ker rukty hay
TO BE CONTINUE
ok guyz hope u like it
byeeeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 18 years ago
#10
awesome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

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