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flirteyed

@flirteyed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

I thnk swayam's dad wud allow hm 2 follow hs dream nd evn if he doesnt swayam wud nt gv up nd in d end hs dad wil undrstnd!

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Nicely chosen concept Sudha... a situation all of us cum across in our lives sum day or the other...sum r lucky that they get to follow their heart's liking - though that set would still b in minority I believe esp when their pursuit is sumthing unconventional...parents always wish to see their children settled but sumtimes go overboard in their protectiveness and lack of faith in their children's choice of a career of their liking and ability to make a success of it...the openendedness of this one adds to the charm of it 😊

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Very nicely written Sudha. Sorry for the late comment, by the way.

I loved the fact that this OS was more Swayam oriented. I personally feel that all the FF's lean a lot towards Sharon and that's only understandable since she is the most relative character.

I love how she supported him and encouraged him to stand up for his dream. It was romantic as well as deeply understanding of her.

I feel for Swayam though. I know how it must feel like to have your life set out for you. And you're expected to follow that path, no questions asked. It sucks.

You know with each new piece of work your writing gets better and better, if you don't mind me saying that. Keep writing. 😊

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Jum

@-Jum-RulzZ-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

beautifully Written !

Impossible to compliment ! since it is All worth!
Really really an amazzing! OS!

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tanharocks

@tanharocks

Navigator

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Firstly sry for being late sudha...

Coming back to os it was very nicely written and the ending was perfect...

and about should parent dictate their childern's career then i would say no...parents should guide them, put forward their pov but should force anything upon their childern...

I am lucky to have my parents who never forced anything upon me...

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yasu2810

@yasu2810

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

nice os dr...
thanks for pm dr...
pls continue yar...

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@DaShInG_DeViL

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

really nice OS Sudha

very well penned..though it was a bit short but still it was captivating and i enjoyed reading it...

keep up the great work

i really liked how it started with swayam and then Sharon entered giving her all the confidence needed =D..and the last line was just fab :)

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Well sudha di...u wrote dis os so many days ago.😊..nd now c d coincidence..😆.d3 z showin quite a similar track.😉..not entirely bt still...it ws a light os.😊..nd a rly nyc read..😊.gr8ly written Swayam's pov over d whole scenario...nd how his lyf changed after d arrival of sharon.😃..nd how DANCE⭐️ z involved in evry prt f his lyf...how dance connected him nd his lady love😳...where dey sumtyms convey deir feelins thru dance nd not wrds.😳..lvd how Swayam tuk d decision to accept his passion nd seeks fr his dad's acceptance..😊.nd Luvd d fact how he doesnt wnt to tke any decision witout his approval...nd how sharon stud by his syd...a vry nyc os...well parents alwys choose wts bst fr us..😊.bt ultimately d decision shud lie on d child...nly he knws d bst wt he/she z capable of...ab agar koi artist banna chahta h to use zor zabardasti engineer to bana nahi sakte...bt sme parents smtyms forcin nd expectin too much f deir child wich z leadin to so many suicide cases...dere mst b a mutual undrstndin...children shud also undrstnd deir prnts while prtns shud also try an undrstnd our pov...😃

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