||**Ishq Vala Love**|| *update*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello friends

suprised to me

ya i know m too surprised that m writing an os

this the first time that m writing something

plz plz do comment weather it's doo or bad

here goes my update



A boy was sitting in his office thinking about something.

Boy'sPov

I 'I .. kissed her WHY???? WHY??? Damm what the hell was

wrong with me ' how can I do so ' ???


Tears started flowing from his eyes!!!!

It's been 4 years since the day when rey kissed tanni, he

felt very guilty for what he did to her as he never felt

anything for her. He wanted to kill himself as he played with

tanni's felling . he wanted to punish himself. The very next day

after this incident he went to swayam and told him everything

but his bad luck swayam dint understand his felling and after

that day he never saw swayam's face . yes he left St. Louise

that very day. He left his friends and now he was all alone. He

went to Sydney, Australia. Today he one of the best Tycoon

merchant and a best choreographer.

Rey's pov:

He was looking at a picture and talking

Baatcutter m sry m really really sorry. I miss you so very much.

Plz come back to me plz. *sob* Universe ji kriya ne jo kuch bhi

mere stah kiya jarur kissi majburi mei aa kr kiya hoga but

maine *sob* I betray her '.. I dint trusted her (he fell on his

knees and started crying badly)

Rey dint saw kriya's face from last 4.5 years. Rey hired a team

of private detective to find kriya.

After some time there was a knock on this door


Person: good morning Mr. R


R: good morning. Any information about kriya???


P: Yes sir.

After our hard practice we got to know something. Kriya Ghai

after leaving St. Louise shifted to Delhi with her mom. But her

mom died in an accident. According to her one close friend her

mom never wanted her to dance and when she was in St. Louise

her mom somehow got to know that she was the best dancer

of the collage and also that she loved some boy who was a

Casanova and that is why she left the collage. She then went

to New York for her further studies. Today she is a well

known fashion designer and also own a dance academy. In NY

everyone knows her by the name K and her friends call her

kitzz. One more thing sir, she is getting married this after 2

days with ARJUN SHEKHAWAT.


R: (shocked) Wt???????

(Thinking) no she can't do to me' u are mine only mine

baatcutter... here I come battcutter

IN NY


a girl sitting in her room thinking about something.


Girl's pov:


Do i.. I really love arjun' but rey he was my love. I loved him

from bottom of my heart. Why the hell I am so confused???

Ehh'.. kriya stop it ' stop thinking about him ' voh.. voh tum

se nafrat karta hai ' bhul gayi u broke his heart, how can u

even expect that he will even think about you.(tears started

forming in her eyes but she wiped them away)

In other room

Rey somehow managed to enter the room and saw arjun sitting

there and thinking abot something.


R: Aarohi ke bare mei soch rahe ho ???


A: who are you ???


R: relax dude ' hi, I am rey .. Reyannsh singhania aarohi's bro


A: Oh!! But what are you doing here


R: tumse baat karne aaya tha


And they continued their talk for some time


Flashback


Detective to rey : sir, there is one more thing we gotta know

about kriya.


R: what ??


D: umm'


R: tell me????


D: Sir, arjun whom kriya is getting married to loves someone


R: who??


D : umm'. Sir, aarohi '. Aarohi Singhania


R: (shocked) what ????


Flashback over

The door of a room opened and a girl entered.

The walls of the room were beautifully decorated eith lots and

lots of pictures. The pictures of THE GANG, their dance,

masti , fun, romance etc etc'. But one think was surprising

that most of the pic's where after kriya left St. Louise. Yes,

she knew each and everything whatever happened in their life

after her exit.


Suddenly someone entered the room


P: kitzz????


P: oh! Com-on kitzz'.. stop thinking about him' he moved on in

his life '. Plz forget him '. For god's sake '. Plz

to be continued







ok.so aaj kar part toh kahatam ho gaya

well this is 1st time i am writting plz sach sach batana how was

it.


Don't expect many parts ... it will have 2 or 3 parts more


till then keep thinking who is the person ????


next update will be after my exam on 21st or 22nd


till the keep commenting


those who want pm plz add enrique305 in ur buddy list



CHAPTER 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
res...
unres...
awsm OS...
kriya is in NY...
reyaansh ne kriya ko find karne k liye detective appoint kiye...wah wah..
n finally reyaansh ko kriya ka pta chal gya...
n kriya is gettin married to arjun..
but m sure nai hogi..
update soon...
n pm me when u update nxt...
Edited by anjee_007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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just mindblowing part yaar
just outstanding 👏👏👏
love it update soon plzzz
Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
this was fantastic

cont. soon

cant wait for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Awesome update😊
I think d person is Sharon
Plzz next part soon can't wait to read it..
N thnx fr d pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was really really superb...

Hum kriyaansh fans ko ye zaroor chahiye tha to cool dwn ourselfes...thank u

Rey ne detective raka hai to fnd kria..nt bad...thoda akal toh aya

Waitin fr nxt
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
my god
what an awesome
update 'keep it up
my god kriya in ny city
and
rey has apponted a detective
arey wah yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
awesome...pls update the rest soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
maggu
i'll kill u for this..

itna acha os start kiya aur beech mein hi chod diya😡

huh

but maggu
i just loved it..

amazing...

jldi update kr..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
oh no its awesome
i loved it
plx continue n write next part soon n pm me

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